Douluo: Flesh and Flesh Are Weak, Mechanical Ascension

This is what I tweeted, it looks ok, I hope it doesn't suck in the future.

From other tweet authors 🤓 Support the author of this book. The setting is very innovative and the logical thinking is very powerful 😁 I hope the author will stick to his original intention and continue to use his strong imagination! I will keep chasing, come on!

This author is so brave and dares to write a novel about being close to Tang San as a brother, awesome

In fact, the author can make a statement first, saying that this is about Tang San in the comic setting. Although I have not read the comics, they say that Tang San in the comics is not bad. You can make a description of the world of novels, comics and animation, so as to explain to readers,

To be honest, the abuse of Sanwen has become a bit disgusting now. Too many homogeneous numbers are nothing. The main reason is that most of them are protagonists who were born before Tang San. They laugh at a thousand steps but don't know how complacent they are.

Originally, Tang San was a good student, eager for knowledge and martial arts. As long as he could learn the Tang Sect's unique skills, he would rather die to pay for it than regret it. It's a pity that it later turned into "hiding something private". And. Flanders taught Tang San to be cunning and treacherous, Zhao Wuji taught Tang San that strength is the most important, Yu Xiaogang taught Tang San to academically falsify, and Tang Hao taught Tang San to evade responsibility. With so many "good teachers", it's a wonder if Tang San is not crooked.

I can only say that it's okay. There's nothing uncomfortable about the Tang San you've written so far Mainly because I've read too much about the malicious Tang San, which is a bit annoying. It's okay to read the pure and good version occasionally (I've also read the version that transformed Tang San from an ancient feudal man into a modern good guy before, and the good guy version in the comics I'll read it! As long as it's written well, it's a success

In fact, Tang San in Dou Yi was okay. He could only be described as an ordinary protagonist who copied and pasted, but he was overtaken by Zhang Wei from the beginning of Dou Er.

Actually, Tang San's black spots all came from Dou Er. Tang San in Dou Yi had no problem except for some double standards when killing soul beasts. He beat the guard because he insulted Old Jack, and destroyed the Wuhun Temple because Bibi Dong already wanted to destroy the entire Douluo Continent. Chase. The gold soul coins were obtained from the two empires, and several of Dou Er's empires still provided subsidies after the destruction of Wuhun Palace. There were also many civilian soul masters in the White Tiger Army, so it was obvious that civilian soul masters could still awaken the martial souls. Moreover, Tang San did not kill all the Wuhun Palace's villains, and Dou Er's people didn't care about anything other than scolding the villains of Wuhun Palace.

First of all, the writing is a bit self-explanatory, and the second one is relatively simple. The theoretical expression should be more understandable and free of language errors, otherwise it will feel like dyslexia, and the subject and predicate are missing; secondly, don't be brainless to oppose Wuhundian, otherwise you will be reversing history like Dou Er. If you are opposed to Qianxunji, Bibi Dong can stop ruining things because of others.

Just talking about the first part, it doesn't matter if he licks or tortures him, including becoming a brother with Tang San, as long as he doesn't lick Yu Xiaogang. No one is perfect. In any novel or any protagonist, you can always find faults if you pick out the words for him. Just like in the past few years, people said that they would rather be Xiao Yan's younger brother than Tang San's brother. Now even Xiao Yan has someone who can find out his faults, let alone the other protagonists of the novels. The protagonists of those novels are famous. If you go to relevant novels and forums to read them, there will be a lot of people who downplay them and abuse them. The period just after Douluo Dalu ended, until the appearance of Tang San in the second part of Peerless Tang Sect. In Douluo One and even in the early stages of Douluo Two, Tang San's reputation was not bad, not to mention that he was not as good as Xiao Yan, but the quality of the protagonists under Xiao Yan was almost the same. It was only after Tang San's actions in Douluo II Peerless Tang Sect that the phrase "I would rather be Xiao Yan's younger brother than Tang San's brother" came into being. Later, I even linked the context to make Tang San feel disgusted. When Douluo Dalu first came out, Tang San's character wasn't bad, but the characters of the other protagonists were simply unsightly. We also need to consider how old the theme of Douluo is. Do you view Douluo Yi's character design from the perspective of 2025? Just talking about Douluo Yi's Tang San, he really didn't treat his brothers, friends, and wives badly. Free jelly grass will be given to promote the martial soul, and the opportunity will be given to take the divine test together to obtain the divine status. As for the gap in god status being too big, what can you do if the main god of your family doesn't like you? It's actually okay for Tang San to be brothers and friends, but Yu Xiaogang's group of people are really disgusting. "Mediocre people who dare not cause trouble", "There are no useless martial arts spirits, only useless soul masters", including Yu Xiaogang, who was a high-minded but low-handed person when he appeared on the scene. He never taught anyone in that college, not to mention the janitor. Even the teachers and children of the college knew that he was a freeloader. In other words, Tang San was very talented in the Xuantian Kung Fu. If someone else practiced like him, what good would happen? Can someone with innate soul power have twin martial souls who lack his guidance? Not to mention anything else, Bibi Dong has twin martial souls, a Rakshasa god status, Qian Renxue's ultimate martial soul, and an angel god status. Even Tang Chen of the Haotian Sect, who was Tang San's grandfather and grandfather in his generation, even passed the Shura God Exam after reaching the extreme level of his Clear Sky Hammer martial soul, but he just failed and was trapped. Using Tang San's Blue Silver Grass (to be awakened with the Blue Silver Emperor's bloodline) and the Clear Sky Hammer, will it be impossible to play? Will there be a lack of opportunities? Lack of a way out?

This is the shortcoming of "The Power of My Thoughts". There are many words but not much plot. It is an essay, not a plot-based novel.

It's ridiculous. It's possible to be brothers. I won't comment on this, but it's impossible to give Xuan Tian Gong. Don't even think about it. You've already changed the character setting. There are also Mao's fans who feel that that's not Tang San, that's another person with the same name and the same surname. He is a member of a classic ancient sect. This introduction is enough to poison many people.

1. Non-Newtonian fluids are only effective against blunt weapons, and are restrained against sharp weapons and elements. 2. Numerical values. What numerical values ​​does slime have? Not to mention a 50% increase in defense, but a 1000% increase, so what? Without elemental resistance and high-strength hardening, it will still be useless. 3. While the volume remains unchanged and the hardness increases, the quality and density increase simultaneously. 4. Regarding your idea of ​​converting cells into gears, the human body is fragile. Even if it is strengthened through cultivation, without special strengthening, the body will be strengthened in the same proportion. Therefore, what you proposed is not valid. I am afraid that even if you do not die, you will be deformed. What is more serious will be imbalanced, and you will explode or be wiped out. 5. The martial spirit is actually the product of soul and energy. What can you do if I directly blow up your martial spirit? After all, slimes are really not that difficult. Sword Douluo can cut your soul into pieces as soon as you release it. Even if the slime's defense power is increased 100 times, it will be useless in front of a martial soul like the Seven Kill Sword. The innate attributes can be suppressed, let alone the subsequent training and strengthening. As for survival, The improvement of life force is also ineffective. It is just a sandbag, and the defense is purely a decoration. You can only see the health bar, and the critical hit of the sword is useless as long as you don't have the defense of the Seven Kills Sword. After all, you can't dodge all the time. One sword attack is enough to drink a pot, because the Seven Kills Sword also has special effects. At that time, not only the Seven Killing Swords, but other weapon souls that could be cultivated to the level of soul saints must also have additional characteristics. 6. Since the protagonist wants to take the scientific and technological route, please talk about some logic. Science is not a utopia, what is needed is logic and argumentation.

Having your own ideas is the most important thing. Those who hate Tang are more about following the trend and gaining traffic. As for how much Tang San hates Dou 1, he is a character whose left and right brains compete with each other. He can share fairy grass, use the invincible golden body, give soul bones to his teammates, and abandon his wife and his own master. The abstract operation of Dou 2 is disgusting, but the person who traveled through it is not Huo Yuhao. A person with no conflict of interest can inexplicably hate it like a super hero.

80% Of the content of this book is theory, and it feels like the one I read before about Wuhundian

Can think, can change, and is not arrogant. It can be said that the way for ordinary people to advance is not like other starts where they are invincible.

Too much nonsense You can extend your thinking about the Wuhun system, but not too much. Most of the content in a chapter is just thinking. You can do this in the key theoretical chapters, but you can't do this in almost most chapters. It just looks like nonsense.

The novel version of Douluo is actually not that good, but the comics are much better. Especially the soul master's martial soul true body armor, I thought it was cool when I read the comics.

Not to mention anything else, it's a bonus that the 20 or so chapters transferred from QQ are charged.

Don't clear Tang San's name. Tang San's fundamental skills will not be passed down while he is still alive.

Fantasy novels do need to have space to talk about cultivation, but you can't keep talking about cultivation throughout the novel and occasionally mix in a little plot. Even a half-day of cultivation can fill several chapters. What's more, these ideas are neither big nor systematic. They just diverge one after another. It takes a long time and has nothing to do with the mechanical improvement of the title. The result of such tossing is that the characters are "thinking" for a long time. At most, they are "saying" part of it, but the "doing" part is very little or very abstract 😭 Looking at your thoughts, it feels like looking at the pile of things written by AI in-depth thinking.

The author's writing style is relatively immature, and his ideas are very good. Unfortunately, I have higher requirements for writing style, so I withdrew it first.

As for the current novel, I just ask that it not be another novel that is published in less than 25 or 30 copies. It's really hard to ignore when a notification pops up before I'm even fascinated by it. This book is okay, at least 50 pictures have not been seen on the shelves before.

There are too many theories, so readers can just take a look and understand them. As a result, this chapter contains at least 70% theoretical content and too little plot. This fanfic is mainly plot, supplemented by theory. You've got it all upside down

🤣Only the first 200 chapters can be read. In the latter part, the protagonist is purely used as a cushion for the auspicious beast. The auspicious beast is more frustrated than the protagonist. The protagonist starts to yy the throne when he is more than 30 years old. It takes a whole chapter to choose which god king to inherit. It's fun.

It's over twenty chapters, and I can't stand it anymore. It describes a lot of the protagonist's inner thoughts and theories. The real plot is to awaken the martial spirit, and then hunt for the first soul ring with Tang Hao and Tang San. This plot alone can write more than twenty chapters, and the rest is all the guesswork of the protagonist.

In Dou 1, Tang San can only be said to be a feudal man, but in Dou 2, he becomes one of those who hold power in a feudal society, so Tang San has nothing to complain about. Yu Xiaogang is really going to be criticized for wearing FV, and everyone in the upper class knows about it. If his father and Wuhun Palace didn't dare to announce it, he would have been dead long ago. If his Wuhun was not good enough, he would train some disciples to prove himself instead of thinking about solutions. This is a pure fool.

A little improvement can give you a theory of hundreds or thousands of words, and you will be invincible.

You take it for granted. Many terms in the early days were only found in the soul master world. Why do you, a village kid, know this and still make Tang Hao angry? . . Randomly strengthen the blue silver grass. I like my ability to think and write a lot of theories.