The World Begins with Tomb Robbing

I have a few questions, what is the use of Jenny in the first world? There are so many programs, but they are not Chinese. There are so many programs like Yang Niu. The second point is that the dialogue with the system lowers the overall rating. A system without intelligence is a good system.

No wonder it's such a shame, the first chapter is so poorly written, the main character is a silly and holy lady character?

I really can't stand it, the main character looks like a psycho

To be honest, what is that woman doing in the first world? I was stunned for a moment as I watched, how could he possibly kill someone? Brother, you have already traveled through time, so it is impossible not to kill people.

It was my first time to see the King of Soldiers and he was held hostage. . What a waste of a snack when you have a gun on you

In the first section, why didn't the fake ones be solved above and forcefully suppressed?

No wonder there are so few ownership posts, the subject matter is good, but the main character is a bit stretched.

Shennong is dead. If you need to burn paper, don't get into the trap.

The system is very intelligent, the protagonist is not the protagonist

A batch of realm water also needs Liu Bowen to scrape bones and cure poison.

Written in a confused manner. The character design is a complete mess. How dare you recommend this to me?

Not bad😍😍

The current recommendations are really outrageous. The character of the protagonist is too good to be honest with a woman. After looking at the character of the protagonist, he turns into a coward with a dark conscience. The plot is also made up, as if it can't be written if it is divorced from the plot.

The first mission is somewhat lacking in taste, not only in terms of plot but also in terms of setting. Finally, I wrote that the boss needs to recuperate after escaping. Will he come back in the future? Will the world destroy it? And what is the King of Soldiers template? It would be better to say that the system only gives you the equipment to train your body, and the character Anne does not have much connection with the plot in the future, nor does she have much involvement in the protagonist's life. Her death was sudden, and her death in the end only made the protagonist aware that the boss had missed something. There is no need to spend so much time describing getting along with her 😅

After looking at three or four pictures, I can sum it up in one sentence: Oh~ I know which one is the monster, so I won't say it, I'll just play~

Dufa discovered the body and knew that Zhang San had changed his skin, but he refused to say anything. You have to stay in the tomb to let him trigger the mechanism, and make it more difficult for yourself, right? Either you didn't find out that Zhang San changed his skin until you wrote in the tomb, or there is no evidence that Zhang San changed his skin, which is better. Since you won't let the protagonist solve it, you might as well not let him find out. Everything that was supposed to happen happened. I don't know what the point is of writing that the protagonist discovers that Zhang San has a problem. Does it make the protagonist incompetent?

Don't look at people who are living a good life

To be honest, I didn't understand the first world at all, it was very mysterious. . .

A group of workers saw a huge scar on their employer's chest. The employer was a woman...

Stop writing about astronomy. You can't control the author. It's boring to change the map frequently. No one will read it.

The original writing in the first part is quite good, but the later part of traveling through other worlds is really a mess and very confusing.