I Smoke the System in American Comics

I was convinced. In the first chapter, my girlfriend brought trouble home without saying anything. If it were other types of comics, I wouldn't say anything. Now in American comics, any big boss can destroy the city, and the protagonist actually agreed. The first chapter introduces Twilight, and then the next chapter introduces the Joker, and the next chapter introduces Steppenwolf, and then Ultron, and then Thanos. I really hate the idea of ​​using a girlfriend to lead the plot, and the plot has no effect on the heroine and will only cause trouble for the protagonist. This kind of routine is the most unpleasant. I don't know if the author has never read the novel, or if he just likes to follow this disgusting route. After reading the first chapter, I was immune to all poisons

Are you a devil fruit afraid of sea water in Twilight City? Devil Fruits are afraid of water because they are afraid of a special substance in the water in the world of One Piece. So your special substance traveled through time together? Also, I don't remember clearly, but in my impression Twilight's vampire wouldn't turn into a bat, right? It will not be damaged by the sun.

Thunder Prison Dragon King

I don't understand. You traveled through time for more than 20 years and didn't want to open a farm to grow sunflower seeds and gain sunshine. It took you more than 20 years to remember what the hell it was. Can you be a little more normal in your logic?

Um, how should I put it, for today's book lovers, let alone joining SHIELD, even being related to SHIELD is considered poisonous, let alone the Virgin from the beginning to the end, what does a time traveler do to care about the life and death of the people at the bottom of the United States?

It's a super hodgepodge, which means this book won't live long.

Why did the author let the protagonist add a shield? Isn't it bad to play the routine of a certain American comic doctor? SHIELD has gained a bad reputation

The lottery system is all a routine. Normally, the lottery is full of garbage and useless things. In a pinch, whatever is missing will come to you.

After reading this book, I am immune to all poisons

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The plot is protracted and the narrative is straightforward, which is not fun!

I don't know what to say. This is my first time writing a novel seriously. I've read everyone's comments. Indeed, what I wrote is rubbish. That's why I didn't delete the post, haha. Everyone's ideas are right, and they have pointed out my shortcomings. I am willing to accept them with an open mind, but my own abilities cannot keep up, or many of the scenes I imagined are different from what I wrote! Very angry! But I don't want to give up! I can only practice a little bit and accumulate experience. I know that what I write is rubbish, so I never dare to ask for votes from everyone. I really want to write about the characters and stories in my heart, but often what I write is not so satisfactory. No matter what, I will still write, even if people say more and more fierce things about me! Finally, speak sensibly and don't curse. I am a dog with authority, and you may not be able to fight me.

I don't know if the author knows one of the ways Spider-Man dies. His identity is exposed and he is surrounded and killed by villains. There are more than a dozen villains in Spider-Man. You said that if the villains from other worlds were piled up and Wonder Woman would die, so many villains can really only appear one by one, otherwise normal heroes can only play cheats.

Is it that I, Heim, am not strong in the underworld? Isn't the golden fruit tricky? Isn't Kamen Rider handsome?

Planting grass

Let me tell you, the author, the ability of that devil fruit should be slightly changed. It is not like yours, like Kaido's, which is an animal-type fish-fruit phantom beast with a dragon form. It is better to change it to an animal-type monkey fruit phantom beast with a monkey form and a concept monkey.

Angel is such a huge trap, why did he become the protagonist's guardian angel out of nowhere? He also sacrificed himself to save the protagonist 😰

After reading it for a while, I felt that it became more and more awkward. Anyway, there are many flaws and poisonous points. The previous Josie's spiritual perception and lack of love are quite poisonous. I feel that it is a bit pretentious and too broad. However, the author may not have enough experience and techniques to write a book for the first time (after all, the vest is very creative). I can still read it if I relax my mind and lose my brain! ! !

The Plants vs. Zombies system is not only a system, but also a field and rules. Once you open it, you must play according to the rules of the game. It's too abnormal.

Ask, lick S. H. I. E. L. D., Tony Shit Tucker, America? Do you want to deliver gifts to a boy and a dog?

It looks good, I like it, I voted for it monthly

I'm passing by, it's so miserable, I want to vote, but I don't have any fan points, so I can only send a first order as a token of appreciation.

What have you written in the latest chapters?

Rick and Morty join this anime, does the author not plan to write it? It's all abnormal, whether it's character or ability. I can even imagine a hodgepodge of comics and Marvel. I just don't know if the author intends for the Hulk universe to fight the Venom universe or for all the branch Marvel universes to fight each other. That's more awesome than anything else

Looking at the title of the first chapter, I thought there was a love story between a set ruler and a protractor.

What about one hundred and ninety-three? I asked why I couldn't pick up the book after reading One Hundred and Ninety-Two, but when I saw it, it turned out that One Hundred and Ninety-Three was gone.