Baidu Journey to the West

Nearly 90% of character dialogues throughout the article are preceded by "". If you turn on the listening mode, you will feel uncomfortable and tired from reading. You can try to remove "how" from 90% of the dialogue and only include "how" from 10%. Describe expressions and actions directly.

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Deep foundation! In this impetuous society, there are too few people who can calm down and study. You are the one who is full of poetry and calligraphy! Read it~😁

The content is relatively realistic, the writing is clear, and the emotions are pure

Seeing a mountain is a mountain, seeing a mountain is not a mountain, seeing a mountain is still a mountain, these are the three major realms of life practice.

After reading it, the writing is good, but the beginning is traditional. Online articles pay attention to rhythm and excitement, so that readers can follow them. The title of the book doesn't say much, and there's no thought of people clicking on it. To be honest, the writing comes second to the plot. If the plot is good, the writing techniques can be broken. If the author wants to earn manuscript fees, he should study Xiaobai's writing. Xiaobai's writing is great and has a large readership. Only by summarizing it and catering to the market can he make money. If it's a hobby, just pretend I didn't say it. A passerby from the headlines😰

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