Playing the Immortal

It's sixteen chapters, but it's still being introduced. Neither the introduction nor the title of the book is too specific. Such a slow-burning book is rare anywhere. Why is it so rare? The reason is that it is not suitable for the current development trend of online novels and does not meet the aesthetics of most viewers. As a result, it is not well received, almost no one reads it, and there is no data, so the author has no interest in writing a book.

The author is too arrogant, maybe because the previous book gave him confidence, but the previous book was a fan novel, and readers will automatically make up for the plot that the author didn't write. This book is original, and now it has no attraction, so they can't wait patiently for the author to develop it.

It feels like the subject matter is too different from the previous book, and it may not be as popular as before.

There are contradictions. There are ghosts and gods, and the emperor can be deceived by goddesses. He casually says that he is the reincarnation of an immortal, and he can immediately reach heaven to listen. The ancients are not brainless. The writing is okay, but the content is a mess.

From this point of view, this place is an extraordinary world, but I don't know what kind of miracle the protagonist has, and he actually got the title of an immortal. But just like this, he is somewhat inferior. After all, if it's an apocalyptic world and the protagonist pretends to be an immortal, it will definitely be interesting. But if it is an extraordinary world, if the protagonist is pretending, it will be ridiculous, but if the protagonist is really capable but falls behind, it will be no different from other novels.

Why do many authors choose to turn to original works after achieving some success in writing fan fiction? Is the commission for writing fan fiction lower?

With this slow-burning plot and this update speed... I'm afraid it's going to be cool.

Pretending to be capable when you are incompetent is just making people laugh.

The writing is okay, but there is a high probability that it will not be popular. The most important thing is that the current readership is different. Many people like to kill everyone except themselves, and many have incorrect views.

After watching half of it, I felt that the writing was okay, but the plot tension was not enough. As a web article, it's not cool enough. Unpleasant. To be honest, this writing is a bit of a waste. I don't know if the author plans to give the protagonist a golden finger. If you don't give it, it would be too frustrating to tell the truth. If you give it, you will be too slow to warm up. Why do you think you are a literary youth? It's just that you obviously have writing skills, but your writing is very frustrating. Using writing to express one's own outlook on life is of course the pursuit of all authors, but it would be more satisfying if they only write about the frustration of reality without realizing the fantasy. Who the hell wants to see it? Do you think that other people have less life experience? There are a few people who are not aggrieved in reality. It's not that everyone wants to read a novel, it's that they don't want to see someone who has traveled through time and been used as a pawn, and their success depends entirely on the halo of the protagonist. It is better to rely on the golden finger than to rely on the halo of the protagonist. At least that's the confidence you can see.