Playing as a Rishi

The writing is okay, but there is a high probability that it will not be popular. The most important thing is that the current readership is different. Many people like to kill everyone except themselves, and many have incorrect views.

It's sixteen chapters, but it's still being introduced. Neither the introduction nor the title of the book is too specific. Such a slow-burning book is rare anywhere. Why is it so rare? The reason is that it is not suitable for the current development trend of online novels and does not meet the aesthetics of most viewers. As a result, it is not well received, almost no one reads it, and there is no data, so the author has no interest in writing a book.

The author is too arrogant, maybe because the previous book gave him confidence, but the previous book was a fan novel, and readers will automatically make up for the plot that the author didn't write. This book is original, and now it has no attraction, so they can't wait patiently for the author to develop it.

It feels like the subject matter is too different from the previous book, and it may not be as popular as before.

There are contradictions. There are ghosts and gods, and the emperor can be deceived by goddesses. He casually says that he is the reincarnation of an immortal, and he can immediately reach heaven to listen. The ancients are not brainless. The writing is okay, but the content is a mess.

From this point of view, this place is an extraordinary world, but I don't know what kind of miracle the protagonist has, and he actually got the title of an immortal. But just like this, he is somewhat inferior. After all, if it's an apocalyptic world and the protagonist pretends to be an immortal, it will definitely be interesting. But if it is an extraordinary world, if the protagonist is pretending, it will be ridiculous, but if the protagonist is really capable but falls behind, it will be no different from other novels.

With this slow-burning plot and this update speed... I'm afraid it's going to be cool.

Why do many authors choose to turn to original works after achieving some success in writing fan fiction? Is the commission for writing fan fiction lower?

Pretending to be capable when you are incompetent is just making people laugh.

Is this extraordinary or just ordinary ancient times? There are so many chapters but I haven't clicked them out yet.

After watching half of it, I felt that the writing was okay, but the plot tension was not enough. As a web article, it's not cool enough. Unpleasant. To be honest, this writing is a bit of a waste. I don't know if the author plans to give the protagonist a golden finger. If you don't give it, it would be too frustrating to tell the truth. If you give it, you will be too slow to warm up. Why do you think you are a literary youth? It's just that you obviously have writing skills, but your writing is very frustrating. Using writing to express one's own outlook on life is of course the pursuit of all authors, but it would be more satisfying if they only write about the frustration of reality without realizing the fantasy. Who the hell wants to see it? Do you think that other people have less life experience? There are a few people who are not aggrieved in reality. It's not that everyone wants to read a novel, it's that they don't want to see someone who has traveled through time and been used as a pawn, and their success depends entirely on the halo of the protagonist. It is better to rely on the golden finger than to rely on the halo of the protagonist. At least that's the confidence you can see.

I had a lot of fun reading Naruto, even though it sucked I hope I can have fun reading this one too

It's a very nice book, fresh and refined, but it's a bit confusing to use it to make money😞😞

Or does the author want to follow the character path of the Moon Worshiping Leader?

There really is no distinction between grudges and grudges, really!

If you don't know how to write this kind of article, don't forcefully write it. It's so generous to make people laugh

Your introduction is really the Riddler. Except for the last poem, all other words have negative value for the "introduction" thing😅

It was originally a happy book, but my wife made it so uncomfortable. Author, you will have no friends.

6. That's it. Half of the character I saved in the last book is gone.

The writing was very good, but it's a pity that I didn't read it. I really like this type of book.

It still feels like a slight cuckold plot. The male protagonist's childhood sweetheart married someone else. Although he died later, it still felt like the cuckold was still on.

You might as well be cheated, at least Zi Niang can still live.

I hope there is no setting where the cat fairy can be contaminated (?) By mortal energy.

Let's get some exciting plot. Although the protagonist is not Zhang Jiao or Jiugong Zhenren, let's have some plot involving Lin Zhengying! Don't tell me that guy never surfs the Internet or watches movies and TV shows~~~

After reading the first few chapters, I feel like the author is guilty of being a literary youth?

How about going back to the heavens to see Mr. Sarutobi?

It looks okay, but the main character creates magic and practices to become an immortal.

Let's make something eye-catching. For example, if the time traveler tells a story about A Chinese Ghost Story or Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai, or the awakening editing system can be used to publish cyclorama movies, TV series, etc. How about a reference?

I feel the writing is very good. Come on, author😁😁😁