Call Me the Comic Printer

The first ten or so chapters were good, just drawing comics, but then it fell into a cliché. A beautiful girl from a big family, she was touched by all the boys in the school when she was a child; I worked in a scrap wood factory and was unloved, but after I made some money drawing comics, a beautiful classmate appeared and only admired me; Anyone would attack me crazily with words, and I was forced to slap him in the face with a car; A random person is a good-for-nothing disciple of a big boss in the industry. He paints a painting and is so impressed that the big boss insists on buying the painting for 150,000 yuan; He was challenged on Weibo just after he was about to release a new work. I didn't see the rest of the story, but the routine is just that; Looking at the author saying "I really wanted a single female protagonist at the beginning", it turns out that there is still a harem in the back? There will definitely be a lot of audiences if I write it this way. After all, it is all proven routines, but it does lose the surprise.

I really don't know what the author is writing about with a hammer here and a stick here and there. Instead of drawing comics properly, it turns into a pretentious business war?

The writing style is very good, and the writing techniques are also very sophisticated. This writing style is considered clean at the beginning of today's primary school students. Unfortunately, the rhythm problem is too big, and the priorities are not clear. The copying is generally 82 points for daily copying. At most, the number of words and adjustments are added, and at most, 20% is added for business. You have completely reversed this, and the rhythm of copying is not good. Every time the feeling of pleasure has not climaxed, it will change to daily life. It is very torture.

I can't quite understand what it is about; the main line is vague and the branches are vague. Everything in the story seems to be talking about itself, some are related, but there seems to be no connection.

I have read dozens of chapters. Maybe the theme of reading comics is like reminiscing about my childhood, but I always feel that you have too much daily life, and I can't feel the love for comics.

The author is born in the 1980s? The reasoning style of writing exudes an air of old age, a sense of having experienced the vicissitudes of life and seeing through the world, just like Astro Boy in the work, a sense of being born at the wrong time.         ， ，， There is no exhilarating feeling of successful counterattack at all. It is better to transfer it to the work. It will be more satisfying if the readers share the common love for the work and achieve success. Try to deal with the emotional line as much as possible, it feels weird.

If you want to see comics written in novels, they will all turn out to be pedantic. If you want to write about business wars, just come up with a name that is relevant to you, but stick to other genres. The audience will be different after you finish writing. Will the results be good?

??? What does it mean? Is your cover from Guizi Academy?

Talk about drawing comics. . . But what kind of human sufferings has the protagonist experienced? I didn't have the writing power to write so many irrelevant characters, including relatives, friends, brothers and sisters. . . Moreover, as soon as I wrote a character, I asked the protagonist to go up and pretend. No matter what others were doing, the protagonist came up and started pretending awkwardly. I was convinced. . .

If you draw comics, you just draw comics. What kind of J8 stuff is this? What does it mean to buy a fat blue guy who has not studied Chinese painting for ten thousand years?