Call Me the Comic Printer

The first ten or so chapters were good, just drawing comics, but then it fell into clichés. A beautiful girl from a wealthy family was chased by all the boys in school after she touched him when she was little. No one wanted to work at the abandoned factory, but when he started making money drawing comics, a beautiful classmate appeared who looked at him with new eyes.

I really don't know what the author is writing, jumping from one topic to another. Why not just draw a comic properly and instead turn it into a pretentious business war?

The writing is excellent, and the writing style is very skillful. In today's saturated writing environment for elementary school students, this style is a breath of fresh air. Unfortunately, the pacing is a major problem. The main and secondary elements are misjudged.

What is this story about? I don't quite understand it. The main plot is vague, the subplots are confusing, and everything in the story seems to be talking to itself. Some things are related, but they also seem unrelated.

I've read dozens of chapters. Maybe I read comics because I want to reminisce about my childhood, but I feel like yours is too slice-of-life, and I can't sense any love for comics.

Is the author born in the 1980s? To be honest, the writing style reveals an aged feel, as if the author has experienced the vicissitudes of life and seen through the world, much like the feeling of Astro Boy in the work, with a sense of being born at the wrong time. Here's a suggestion: there seems to be too much focus on everyday life.

I wanted to read a novel that was actually a comic book, but it turned out to be a complete rip-off. If you want to write a business war story, just come up with a title that's relevant. Why try to piggyback on other genres? Your target audience will be different, so how can it possibly do well?

What does this mean? Is this cover from a Japanese school anime?

It's supposed to be a comic... But the protagonist is experiencing all sorts of human suffering. The author lacks skill and has created so many irrelevant characters—relatives, friends, childhood friends, siblings—all appearing... And as soon as a character is introduced, the protagonist is immediately thrown in to act all high and mighty, ignoring what everyone else is doing. I'm speechless...

Just draw comics, what kind of crap is this? A perpetual old codger who doesn't even study traditional Chinese painting buys Doraemon, what kind of nonsense is that?