Revitalizing Uchiha Starts with Making Movies

Thanks, this is one of the best Naruto fics I've ever read. The character setting, behavioral motivations, and plot are all basically self-explanatory, including what many people have criticized. The setting that the protagonist begins to try to solve the problem peacefully also feels very reasonable to me. Although there are three pairs of kaleidoscopes, the protagonist only got the kaleidoscope not long ago, and Shisui is jumping sideways repeatedly. Not long after the Nine-Tails Rebellion, if you directly rebel/leave the village, everyone will definitely think that it is you who did it. This is equivalent to directly confronting the entire Konoha. Konoha will be damaged a lot, but Uchiha will become the second whirlpool.        ，，，F4？ Including but not limited to Roots, Anbu, Sarutobi Clan, etc. How should we treat other ninja clans, civilian ninjas and even ordinary people in Konoha? Don't forget, Uchiha is not popular, but the third generation is recognized as a "good old man", not to mention that Uchiha came to power in rebellion, and his reputation is not justified. To the outside world, the Four Ninja Village is eyeing them. How can Konoha and Uchiha, who have just experienced a war, fend off their enemies? After Tsunade Jiraiya returns to the village, how will they, as third-generation disciples, view Uchiha? Who will the villagers be closer to? This is not the kind of story where the protagonist becomes a Super Saiyan and attacks Konoha as soon as he appears, nor is it the story where the protagonist shouts "I will definitely take revenge" in tears in order to bury the whole clan in one breath. The protagonist of this story does everything based on the survival of the clan, so he can pretend to be close to the higher-ups in Konoha, or he can decisively lead the clan members to leave the village after discovering that the higher-ups in Konoha are the same. However, I feel that there are some areas that can be improved. For example, as someone mentioned, for the protagonist's second plan, you can write a little bit about the preparations that the protagonist is making. It can be stated by the protagonist himself, or it can be borrowed from others (for example, the protagonist intentionally collects more seal scrolls; some tribesmen complain about the recent increase in food prices) , the protagonist passed by without changing his expression; the protagonist glanced at each other and passed by a certain follower, recalling the initial contact (both perspectives are available), and then let these people play a role in the Uchiha (such as appeasing the emotions of the tribe or something that is beneficial to the protagonist's image/influence in the tribe) Another one can write more about the atmosphere of love in the Uchiha clan, the closeness of the children, the kindness of the elders, the approval of the superiors, and the respect of the peers. (This is a small episode, such as the child I saw on the way to the clan meeting gave his favorite food to the protagonist, and the old lady at the fruit stall who passed by gave him a few fruits.) Personally, I feel that small details like this are easier to impress, and are one of the reasons why the protagonist loves this clan. By the way, according to the current development, Ban Ye is most likely to be the villain. Can the author give a better ending to Ban Ye? If he must die, can he die with dignity? This is my lifelong request as a Ban Ye fan! ! !

This is a very magical novel. It's so magical that you can skip reading it without affecting the reading experience at all.

The book is a good book, but it contains too much repetitive analysis. This does not mean that there is no need for analysis, but there are too many repetitive analysis words. It is undeniable that it is very interesting to watch, the logic is reasonable, and the protagonist is not brainless and invincible. It is good to know how to assess the situation.

How can I put it this way? This Naruto fanfic is more innovative. There are no major problems in plot development or logic. It can be considered a relatively good novel.

Seeing that the protagonist proposes to take Uchiha out of Konoha, some readers said that Uchiha is seeking death by leaving Konoha and joining other villages, because other villages will peek at the Sharingan, and Uchiha joining is sending Sharingan. Then let me put forward a hypothesis. Suppose you are the Raikage and the Tsuchikage (not to mention the Mizukage being controlled, the Kazekage is very weak and cannot protect himself). After learning that Uchiha and Konoha are in conflict, the whole family leaves Konoha, and intends to join you, recognizing your full power as a Kage. As a Kage of a village, will you choose to accept Uchiha or massacre Uchiha? Let me talk about it first. If I were the Tsuchikage or Raikage, I think I would choose to accept the Uchiha clan. After all, it is the limit of the precious Sharingan blood inheritance. If the Uchiha can integrate into my village and continue the Sharingan in the village, it will greatly enhance the strength of the village. No matter from which aspect, it will be a sure profit. As for Konoha's accusation? What is that? 😜

This book does not take the traditional coup to become Hokage, nor does it take the road of starting a new one, and chooses to join the whole family to Iwagakure, which is eye-catching. The author's logic is self-consistent and his thinking is more rigorous. It is the best solution for the situation faced by the protagonist. There was a relatively peaceful period after Iwagakure took root, because during this period the author focused on describing the entire ninja world from the perspective of the entire ninja world, but the description of the protagonist's own development process was relatively concise. This plot was not very exciting, and this section may seem a bit boring. Generally speaking, the plot may advance slowly, but there are no obvious poisonous points. The only thing that I personally think is a bit problematic is when Obito used Izanagi to escape when he tried to kill Obito for the first time. Logically speaking, it is impossible for the protagonist not to know this technique, and in the protagonist After possessing the kaleidoscope, Fugaku should also hand over Izanagi and Izanami to the protagonist, so the plot of letting Obito escape is a bit redundant. It would be better not to fight him at all, but maybe this is the author's way of making Obito discover the protagonist's pupil technique in a more reasonable way. All in all, this book is a rare good book. I recommend reading it.

The writing style is a bit poor, and the large amount of explanations and analysis affects the perception too much. And the characters' personality traits and behaviors should be reflected through the story. Instead of doing water-injection repeated analysis every time you do something.

I greatly support the author's new Naruto routine. I originally thought it was just an ordinary Uchiha on the bookshelf and the internal political struggle between Konoha Village, but I didn't expect it to be another movie. The plot logic is reasonable, at least it is not a brainless article. Please support the author by giving a reward. Personally, I don't mind what others say about the psychological and political description of Shui. It's enough that it allows me to see the differences from other novels. After all, the original work and other novels mainly depict Konoha. Ps I agree with a saying in the book club circle: close eyes

Brother, when you write a plot, why are you analyzing the character comparisons over and over again? There are a few people who watch Naruto who don't know how the original characters deal with things, starting and ending. Besides, even if there is something you really don't know, you already knew it the first time you analyzed it. Do you need to write it down again every time you appear? I was very interested when I first read it, but then I got really excited after reading it. I spent money to read more than half of the character descriptions. You are here to analyze the case! ! !

The writing style is flawed, there is basically no progress from the beginning to now, the details are excessive, and the large narration analysis is very dry and hard, which also causes the plot to advance too slowly.

Most of them are explanations. Hey, I saw Chapter 165. Shen Nong asked if there were any corrections later? Too many narrations

The advantages and disadvantages of this book are equally obvious The clear thinking and the fact that Uchiha left Konoha and switched to Iwagakure are indeed a highlight. As a newcomer, the author's writing style is too procrastinating, with too much psychological description and narration analysis, which seriously affects the reader's experience. The lack of excitement is clearly reflected in the subscription results.

The writing is good. Except for making the Eight Gate Dunjia too strong and weakening the Kaleidoscope illusion's restraint on Kai, the other content is okay. A few years later, Kai was killed in front of Itachi. Can he resist the reincarnation eye now? ?

The book has been abandoned. The author is so addicted to describing Hiruzen and Danzo's love affair that he has to write a long paragraph every now and then. Does it need to be emphasized all the time? Are the jokes about these two people in the fandom so funny? 😅

Start pouring water crazily It was said before that Kai still has the power of more than ten years later The latest chapter, Shichimon Ijio, breaks Susanoo The fourth generation of lightning can't break the eternal Madara Susanoo Oh, you, Shichimon Ijio, smashes the Magatama Samsara Eye Susanoo To put it bluntly, the protagonist's current strength is invincible, unless Kaguya and Samsara Madara join forces, but is it possible? To say something ugly, the author, you are just forcibly elevating the enemy's strength, dragging down the plot, low word count, bad money, and ruining your own reputation Just finish 2 and 30 chapters? Can't you open a new book? If you do this, I won't read the next book.

Alas, I have read more than three hundred and seventy chapters. The highlight of this book is that the protagonist leads the entire Uchiha family to escape from Konoha. I have also seen this highlight in other books. This is very novel, and I feel that going to Iwamura is very good. SB Konoha and the third generation should have been like this long ago. Konoha is lucky, talents have emerged in large numbers, and there are so many geniuses. Let's talk about the shortcomings, that is, real water, revitalizing Uchiha, let's not focus on Uchiha, the main point of view should be on the protagonist, who is engaged in politics every day, and often cannot see the protagonist for several chapters in a row, and the protagonist's strength has been really suppressed. From the beginning to now, more than 370 chapters have still been the same strength. It is okay to give some cheats. There are only more than 500 chapters in total. I don't want to read this perception of strength, and it is even more suppressed than Xiao Yan. I couldn't stand it when I saw the main character being treated as a tool by the Kumo ninja and being beaten to death on the front line when Iwagumo II Village attacked Konoha. I don't know what purpose this writing has except to irritate the main character. After reading the title at the end, I have no desire to read it at all.

I was confused after reading Chapter 44. What is the main character's Kaleidoscope Eye Technique? Come on, Susan?

It's been 60 chapters, and the protagonist's second plan is nowhere in sight. Let's throw out the second plan as soon as possible. Author, do you think you are the One Piece of Pirates? Does the author plan to release it after the finale? Konoha has Nabekage and Obito, but their combat prowess is inferior. There are two parties in the plan who serve as troublemakers. They have the lowest survival rate if they bear the humiliation and bear the burden. Without the Nine-Tails, Obito can recreate the Night of the Nine-Tails with the Three-Tails. Without Itachi, Danzo can arrange for the root to kill Uchiha. Apart from using force and interests to win over other families, or contacting other villages to escape as a whole, I can't think of any other way to save Uchiha. The entire Naruto world is too malicious towards Uchiha, and of course the author is welcome to slap me in the face. The article now wants to take the high-level route to please the third generation. The original work of Uchiha Fugaku has gone through a round. It's been 60 chapters, and the author has not given a second plan at all. He has made plans all day long and has not seen anything to plan. Now that he has entered the Anbu instead of Shisui, he has not thought about how to deal with Danzo's sneak attack. There has been no theme for a long time. Sooner or later, it will be a pill💊. It's 60 chapters and it's all sea.

I couldn't place a reservation even if I skipped it. It's all inexplicable and meaningless stuff. I just wanted to see the protagonist succeed the Tsuchikage, but now I am still wandering around outside. If you were farming in Iwagakure, I would subscribe to it. If you look for plug-ins in the same way, the rest of the other books would be so poor that you won't be interested in subscribing. Let the bookshelf gather dust. I remembered it some time ago. If the protagonist becomes a Tsuchikage by then, I will come back and take a look.

This work is very interesting, especially the idea of ​​the Uchiha family breaking away from Konoha, but the plot is too slow. The plot is mixed with the thoughts of many characters, and it is easy for readers, including myself, to feel that the number of words is too high. The plot development in the chapters is too slow, which is a flaw... I hope the author can improve, it is still a very interesting book

Borrowing the words of a book friend How about writing a paper? A piece of information comes over and over again, which makes my head spin.

Good looking and rewarded! Just leading the Uchiha clan to leave Konoha and join the Iwagakure Village is worth watching 👍. This is the first time I have seen someone write this. I am really looking forward to the future development! There are also suggestions to change the title of the book to (Lifting the clan, leading, Uchiha, clan, escaping, leaving, Konoha, joining Iwagakure Village), etc. It will feel more attractive, otherwise I would have thought it was the old routine of being a Hokage 😅... Who knew I was going to be a Tsuchikage 🤭, come on 💪!

🙂 Big water ratio, more water than me 😴

After being released, the writing is very good, and the routines are relatively novel. It is indeed a better choice to add Iwagakure without too many cheats. Basically, most of the Uchiha Reincarnation novels are completed by cheats. There are a few books that directly cheat to successfully resist foreign enemies. It is outrageous. But I have to say that it is best to find time to reset the front. The beginning is a bit dissuasive. You must be prepared to rebel and escape from the beginning instead of placing your hope in Konoha. There is no hope for Danzo.

It's really difficult to write in the later stage, but I really can't stand it 🙂

The writing is quite good, but it is less involved in Naruto's events, because most of the original plot is in Konoha. After the protagonist is no longer in Konoha, it is basically an original plot. In fact, I also look forward to the male protagonist becoming a wandering ninja, so that he can explore the ninja world and participate in the plot of Naruto. However, the protagonist chooses to enter the Earth Kingdom, and is dragged down by his family and Iwagakure Village. There is little development in the subsequent plot, especially Akatsuki, which is basically soy sauce.

The nobles and daimyo in the Hokage series also need to be hacked to death! The nobility and daimyo are non-productive and exploitative classes. After the ninja world is unified, ninjas should not be asked to do tasks, and they will have to receive military pay like the modern army.

Everything else is okay, but the description of cultivation is almost blank. I don't even know how to become stronger. I lack some feeling.

The upper limit is waived 🤫

Three monthly passes and four recommendations are given to you. Come on, author!