The Dark Harvest of Sunagakure

Can't see it in more than 10 chapters? Can such a useless protagonist survive? It all depends on the author's strokes, and every day waste material flows out of the beginning. Isn't it a bit new? Geniuses can't write, right? They have to make it extremely depressing and then feel good again?

It's really awesome. After reading three chapters, I don't even know who the protagonist is. Daily guide

The author is Yun, right? You don't even know what ninjutsu the Third Kazekage used. You know Scorpion but don't know what the Third Kazekage is capable of? Funny?

After reading the suggestions in the comment area, I started reading directly from Chapter 28. There was no sense of violation and it did not affect reading at all.

I don't have the desire to follow it, so I can only keep it. If there are more books, it might be worth taking a look. The follow-up is really long-winded and boring, and almost half of it is explaining various things. The plot progress is really slow. Either the plot is more compact, or you have the ability to read thousands of books every day. Otherwise, I'll stop reading it now. I'll talk about it later when I remember it.

Very scary, at least 70% of one chapter is watery. You can read the free chapters when you are bored. There is no need to read the paid chapters.

Let's just say, can this hydrological capability be restrained? Or do you simply not have the ability to condense concise words? I have read a few Naruto books. Tell me for yourself. The ideas and plot are obviously very good, and there are not many highlights. It is ridiculous that you have to be so good. Some words appear repeatedly. Author, are you deliberately careless, or do you simply not have the ability? As long as your writing can be more concise and the climax of the plot can be arranged more reasonably and closely, the last high-quality book should be okay. For the Uchiha book, you seem to have ordered more than 2,000. The difference of a few hundred is because your writing skills are not good. Can't you polish it carefully? It's really a tasteless novel.

Second, discussion post, five shadows

Water, besides water, is still water The feeling of the protagonist is not relatable at all The more I read, the duller it becomes There is still a lot of water What I can read is probably deceived by the title of the book.

Let's not talk about the disappearance of the protagonist in the first three pictures. After reading more than ten chapters, the author wrote the protagonist, whose qualifications are mediocre and a little better than ordinary people. The time is also the Ninja War after the death of the Third Kazekage. I want to know how the protagonist can develop. Not to mention some cheats, at least you can also write down the path or method for the protagonist to become stronger. No, nothing. I really don't know what to think, and I have absolutely no desire to read any more.