The Game I Designed Is Terrible!

Well written. I feel that the logic is very strong. Maybe as mentioned in the book, the author's logical thinking ability (brain supplement ability) is very strong. At least everything will work out and there won't be any big mistakes. In addition, the three views of this book are still very positive, and only punish those who make mistakes. Why not punish the bad guys? Because of the story of the forensic doctor, I don't think the forensic doctor himself is a bad person. In order to avoid spoilers, I won't go into details. Basically, the people who died were the most morally heinous and unforgivable people. Forensic doctors can still find reasons for forgiveness, and they will basically not die. Saying "forgive" may go against a statement I made in the book, which is that no one can forgive a person who has made a mistake, except himself. But what? I really can't think of a better word. So far, I believe that the systematic way to clear the level is to redeem yourself and forgive yourself. This is also the purpose of the system, right? As the book says, "Those who pass the customs will not commit crimes again" (approximately), the purpose of the system is to let them reform, otherwise they will die. That's about all. I still hope everyone can take a look.

I suspect that Ono is the system, and the system is actually part of the protagonist. Ono, the system alias Liangshen, the protagonist Liang Itachi. Noragami Itachi. The weasel is a weasel, an animal that brings bad luck, that is, it brings bad luck to the wicked. So it's a series of unlucky events when it comes to forcing the target. Judge the world, judge the world for its sins. If the law cannot judge sinners, let God judge them. This kind of trial is not one-size-fits-all, and the criminal will be pardoned if his conscience still exists. If the gangster loved the girl, he would pick up the bracelet and be forgiven. The same goes for campus perpetrators, who can survive if they don't choose force. So the medical examiner was pardoned. But in fact he is still being judged by his conscience. (I just guessed)

The writing is very good, the subject matter is novel, and the writing style is a bit immature, but it is already very good for a new writer. I hope the author will stick to it.

If the author wants to write about the Lone Ranger, don't write about the big organization. If he wants to write about the big organization, don't write about the Lone Ranger. Shouldn't the big knife be notified about the hospital takeout incident? Don't tell me that you are not familiar with it. You don't want to get into trouble with official power. If it exceeds the protagonist's ability, shouldn't you call for support? I know that after writing the organization entry, the difficulty of the dungeon will be reduced and the story will be insufficient, but forcibly restricting it will make it even more unsightly😔. In the early days of Conan, the group's power was forcibly restricted, and it was extremely bloody. Cameras were never used, and police forensic doctors did not conduct autopsies. Everything was left to detectives and hard reasoning. So when people complain about it a lot, they just do secret room reasoning. There are few people and time is short, and the police are not given a chance to enter. At present, the organization and individuals are working well together. I recommend the author to refer to the early period of Red Moon (I just looked at the previous part). My doubts about small lakes are that they did not go into the water alone to explore, but directly drained the water.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I suddenly felt boring! It's like the author has been replaced and the author has been forcibly subdued.

What is the takeaway ghost in these 21 chapters? The author suddenly changed to another person to write it?

It is recommended to define the protagonist as a villain who does good deeds. Don't describe the protagonist as a good person. It is easy to double standard because the protagonist's behavior is also evil. Use evil to stop evil.

Are you looking for a ghostwriter for Golden Chapter Three? This is too high and you should start low

Chapter 10: Poisoned to death, scavenger? Forget it, it's okay if the protagonist can't see the ghost and borrows props to see it, but as the judge of all things, people should also be judged. Only those who don't kill people are called bad people. Does killing ghosts count... Forget it, since it is the judge of all things... Then it shouldn't be written about the country, no But you can only lick it, if you don't lick it, the book will be gone. Haha, it slipped away. I really don't know where so many good reviews come from. Look at how many of them write about countries now. The most popular ones are the aristocratic family, the super aristocratic family, etc. The good reviews are probably from newbies, or are they old bookworms for many years? I doubt it

The takeaway part is not very good. What kind of doctor carries Valium with him, and what kind of doctor just gives people Valium 😰

After reading a few chapters, let me know what you think. I personally prefer the behind-the-scenes flow, which is more interesting. For example, the three pictures set by the author were approached by the official. Those who cooperate with the official don't like it. Maybe they are immune after seeing this style too much. Not too cold anyway. Of course, everyone loves what they like. Some friends may like to deal with and cooperate with official organizations. Finally, I wish the author a successful sale of his works.

I saw that the protagonist designed a game that would make irrelevant people die, and whether he would be judged in the end. The most perfect design, the most perfect creation, used to judge myself

Your theme should be about designing game trials. Except for the beginning and the end, it has gradually started to deviate from the theme. There is very little description of the theme.

This idea, these three views, and this plot conquered me, a five-year-old bookworm, in just one hour.

😅 After two months of interruption, I can still watch every day.

What a holy lady. She has no brains to save people and got into a lot of trouble.

I haven't wanted to read it since Chapter 21, and suddenly I became wise.

After reading it, the latest chapters let me know that this book is not actually a trial series, but an evil ghost series. Unlike in the beginning where only the criminal died, the protagonist can already release the prisoners in the prison and let them create a riot in order to create a evil ghost. This is just a D-level evil ghost. What will the protagonist do in the future in order to create an evil ghost with stronger hatred and greater hatred? I dare not even think about it. The writing style of the book is quite good and it is very interesting to read, but if you want to read the trial flow and game flow, you shouldn't read it. This book is full of darkness and evil spirits.

I haven't read it yet, so I checked out the book reviews. Some people said that the Three Views are righteous, which makes me a little uneasy. Ordinary people's worldview is like fairy grass, and the Three Views are food and grass. The Three Views are poisonous weeds. Just like Chinese horror movies, the previous three-view movies were classics, but the later three-view movies were basically bad dramas, either mentally ill or insane.