He Failed to Cultivate Immortality and Was Caught Halfway.

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I read the comments and I think you are all rebels. What's wrong with cooperating with the imperial court?

First of all, there is a conflict in the character of the protagonist. As a monk, you should be upright. Since you have already cooperated with the country, don't do things like this behind the scenes, modifying memories, etc., Which is a bit inconsistent with your previous description of the character of the protagonist. After you have already cooperated, be more open and aboveboard. Don't act like a worldly expert at one moment, and sneaky at the other. One more thing, talk about various causes and effects in the early stage, and then just get a magic weapon to directly cut off the cause and effect. So what's the point of foreshadowing this?

It is said that the protagonist is cooperating with the country, but in fact he is sucking the blood of the country, taking things, and then not caring about anything. After taking the money, nothing will be done. His character is not that good either. He likes to tamper with other people's memories and treat them as playthings. But he is more hateful than a demon. He just sweeps away everything with his hands, just like a bandit. What kind of merit is it? Everything this thing does is of extraordinary merit, mainly merit. The protagonist should have the kind of karma all over his body that is red and partly black. His character is also quite bad. If people don't like what they want, he will be in trouble. Selfish and self-reliant.

There are some aspects of writing a novel about the development world that are really difficult to write. The first point is the strength of the protagonist. If it is written too low, the early stage will be stretched indefinitely and it will easily lead to aesthetic fatigue. If it is written too high, it will easily become the protagonist's one-man show. The second point is that the strength of the country is really difficult to write about. Even if the gunpowder-based weapons of destruction are removed, it is still very powerful. In the early stage, it crushed the ancients, even if you have the internal strength. If it is strong, the protagonist is just a tool to open the door, but if it is weak, a group of people will complain 🤭 The third point is the relationship between the country and the protagonist. The protagonist who is strong at the beginning will not have so many scruples. Naturally, the protagonist is the leader. The protagonist who is not so powerful at the beginning is naturally the country. There is no difference. Different paths lead to the same goal. When the protagonist becomes stronger, the right to speak will naturally rise. After all, the dominance is with the protagonist from the beginning. The protagonist is the beginning of everything and the key to the world. As long as the protagonist is not strong enough to explore the world, the protagonist will always be the one with the advantage. But by that point, the protagonist may have transcended long ago. The fourth point is the issue of proportion. What is the proportion of the protagonist? How much of the description of a changed world and the description of some amazing characters? These are all things to consider. Finally, there is the description of the humans in the time-traveled world, whether they all merge into one country or become an alliance, etc., The author's imagination of what happened in the time-traveling world, magic modification, etc.

Too bad, a virtuous man who has been doing good for the people for more than ten years has been made things difficult, distrustful, and intimidating by the government, and he has no temper at all.

It's amazing to see so many people in the comment section who don't want to cooperate with the country. Who discovered the entrance first? It's a member of the country. Well, if you don't cooperate, when will you find out? Moreover, cooperation with the country has more advantages than disadvantages. Well, what the protagonist needs is luck and resources. If you cooperate with the country, these are easier than being alone. The protagonist also has a sect and is not a loner. Who doesn't want to fly with his own people and his own country? The most important point is that the protagonist is the root of everything. Without him, there would be no immortality, flying in the sky and the earth, super black technology. Some people say that the protagonist is so powerful that the country cannot tolerate it? How stupid do you have to be to say this? The more powerful the protagonist is, the more he can suppress people in other worlds, and only then can he develop a stronger world. The more powerful the protagonist is, the less anyone will touch him.

Daily poisoning lives up to its reputation 👍

Just one question, do good people get the benefits? Don't avoid this question. The so-called country has benefited, but it has nothing to do with good people. It's all got by those bastards. Isn't it like being a good dog?

Two years ago, the country discovered it long ago. If this was the case, then to be honest, the country would have opened up long ago. Why wait for the pig's feet? How does the country know that Swordsman is inside? , If they know it, then they can enter. There is no need for a protagonist. It is easy to deal with such an incident without using thermal weapons. Instead of using thermal weapons, use chemical weapons. Are there too many weapons made by bombs made by the United States using chemical weapons? The modern improved version of the catapult can accurately locate the target without too much deviation. It is equipped with a famous incendiary gasoline bomb or a white phosphorus bomb. When these two weapons are thrown into the air, they will explode. The effect is like snow falling in winter. One is a fire from the sky, burning to the bone, and the other is burning. The burning meteor falls from the sky and burns you without any bones. You can watch the video of the white phosphorus bomb This picture is the scene of the white phosphorus bomb. When it falls at night, it does not require high technical content, it is just basic chemical fusion

It started off very well. He had practiced Taoism since he was a child and was a great virtuous person. But the more I looked at it, the more something felt wrong, uncomfortable and nauseating. After thinking about it, I found that the protagonist is a refined egoist. He keeps claiming that he is practicing Taoism and is pure, but he is driven by utilitarianism everywhere. Doing good deeds for the sake of merit, preaching for the sake of merit, the typical thing is not to be early without benefit. When I went down the mountain to gather people, I only found my own family members, and there was no one in Longhu Mountain. It would be fine if the author didn't write about Taoist priests, but if he did write about Taoist priests, he was always selfish and did things that were contrary to his identity as a Taoist priest. It really disgusted me.

It's quite messy, the protagonist is quite weak, and the writing is not very good in cooperating with the state, or he has to act on his own. Either sit in the back, the protagonist has no direction and comes blindly.

What I don't like the most when reading books is the theory of cause and effect. Why can't the protagonist gather the luck based on his popularity and use it at will? If the protagonist gathers the world's popularity and luck, will the world be destroyed if he uses it? This is completely wrong. It's only right that you're unlucky after you've used up your energy. This is in line with the world's views.

Is the author kidding? Cause and effect are calculated this way?

The cause and effect in my imagination: I beat the younger one, and the older one seeks revenge. Cause and effect written by others: Because you hit him and disturbed the destiny of heaven, you are condemned by heaven.

I just read the first two chapters. Can copying Legend of the Condor Heroes increase luck and merit? Is it worthy? Or is it that luck and merit are so worthless?

Update quickly, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest 🤓

Stop having intracranial fantasies and delusions of persecution! In reality, people with golden fingers always try their best to show off, maybe others don't know about it. 1. Various "masters" and "sages" in history are too embarrassed to say hello unless they have the title of national teacher. 2. Modern qigong masters are all highly respected, and no one has been sliced ​​into pieces. It was their own fault. 3. Various foreign "alien children", "prophecy masters" and "psychic aliens" are shouting loudly on the Internet. I am afraid that everyone does not know him. What they are really afraid of is that they don't have a golden finger and will be seen through.

Your protagonist is actually too weak For example, why don't you take 5% They want all the possibilities but want to have sex for nothing Don't say more than 1% Opportunities are rare and rare, and you are making the country confused.

A novel is not a prose, it needs a dramatic story. The writing style of this book is actually quite good, and the creativity can be greatly explored. Unfortunately, the "storytelling" of the writing is too low. Currently, it seems that the protagonist's goal is to seek immortality, but this cannot even be considered a main plot outline. It is too imaginary and has no substantive main plot development. A lot of space was spent describing the country's importance to the World Gate, but no substantial development and strategy for that world were seen. It was all passed over in one stroke. Instead, there were a lot of plots in the real world, none of which pointed out the main line. Now that I have read fifty or sixty chapters, it doesn't look like the way the plot unfolds in a novel. Instead, it looks a bit like some miscellaneous essays describing daily life. The plot is too bland and the main conflicts in the novel are basically invisible. Hollywood special effects movies are even accurate enough to have conflicts erupt every few minutes and a climax every dozens of minutes. The novel actually needs to be written like this.

Isn't this just a rush for 404?

Regarding cooperation with the country in the novel, please understand the local and overall issues. The specific department is responsible for the implementation of cooperation with the country. No matter which country in the world, there will always be a struggle for rights and a struggle for the right to speak. Thinking of the best, collective interests are higher than all personal interests in cooperation. If we talk about things, the protagonist cannot be smooth. It requires a lot of wisdom to balance this. I feel that basically no writer can write it.

I'm not even a dabbler. I've read a few novels written by people who practice spiritual practice, but I have no fundamental spiritual practice.

Really boring. As a successor, why do you have to cooperate? Why do you have to be free? Number 1 and 2 can't be done, but numbers 3, 4, 5, 6 and 7 can't be done?

It's boring. It's better to be alone than to write like this.

Come on

When will there be an update on retirement? The writing is really good, 1,000 words a day is fine. Don't be too cool when the time comes, I will support you.

The idea is pretty good, but it's too messy. Can you handle adding a few more worlds in the future?

, As the author's first novel, it's already very good.

What is luck in this novel, human merit?