
Dragon Ball's Immortal Martial Heart
龙珠之不灭武心
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- Completed
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- 942k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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After a while, I complained about how the protagonists of other novels were unreasonable, and I was making unreasonable comments. It embarrassed me to death.
Also, stop talking about what the future will be like. If you write like that, you will lose the sense of expectation. When I read a book, every time I see what the future will be like, I always feel that I have no sense of expectation and no desire to read.
Cut off Vegeta's tail (high-level Saiyan royal bloodline). Make it into a potion and then inject it into your body. Like a dragon making a wish, you can perfectly integrate yourself with the potion. Become a super earthling. Has the ability to constantly break through physical limitations and unlock the limitations of the X gene. Writing a book still requires some practicality. If talent is useful, why do we need race? The limitations of Earthlings are there. Otherwise, it would not be a good idea for me to become an angel myself. I would be a god and invincible at the beginning. Racism is still real. People have the power to be poor! The same fish, a small eel. There's no comparison with whales. They are also life, and humans are incomparable to the powerful life forms in the universe. Frieza, when he grows up. The combat effectiveness reaches more than 100 million. Never exercised. After three months of training, his basic combat power reaches hundreds of millions or even billions, and he becomes Golden Frieza, which is directly comparable to Super Blue. After all, his basic combat power is here. As for the Super Saiyan transformation, the basic combat power is too low, and it can only be accumulated through continuous breakthroughs in transformation forms, while others only need to change once to reach the Super Blue level that he has developed after all the hard work. This is the basic combat effectiveness. This is racial restriction. If Frieza had 10 billion fighting power. Transforming into gold is like beating a dog.
The protagonist can find ways to cultivate the power of the soul. In Dragon Ball Super, the power of the soul is the key to becoming a Super Sailor God, so the journey of the soul should also be the key to sublimating ordinary energy. There is also vitality that can be deeply developed. For example, the sage mode in Naruto. In the Dragon Ball movie version, when fighting No. 13, Goku inhaled the egg of resentment into his body and his strength skyrocketed during the battle. The energy in Dragon Ball is quite diverse, including flame, lightning, burning, shock wave, telekinesis, telepathy, mind reading, object control, flight, clone, medical treatment, etc. Personal sensors are the same as those in Naruto, with attribute changes, shape changes, etc.
What kind of unreasonable world is Dragon Ball? Japanese thinking is too heavy, too heavy on blood. There is no solution to the transformation of Saiyans and Senzu beans. The only way to catch up with knowledge is androids. It is useless even if you practice the sky-shielding method. It has a fighting power of 90,000 to 150 million a week. It becomes stronger even if it is about to die. If Majin Buu is such a scumbag, he can only make soy sauce in the later stage.
Why did you create your own female character? Fairy Linglong? It's both a hit and an embarrassment. Speechless.
Did you write Dragon Ball Super? Sorry, bye. Personally, I think Dragon Ball TG is the genuine version.
If this book were written in Dragon Ball Super, it would definitely be a eunuch. Dragon Ball Super itself is full of loopholes. Dragon Ball Super can be described as full of holes and a pile of abscesses. To put it simply, No. 1: I predicted you. Number 2: I predicted your prediction. No. 1: I predicted your prediction of me. Never-ending anticipation. And holy shit, the master of the world drowned in urine.
Dragon Ball's combat power cannot compare to fantasy. I am a Dragon Ball fan, not Kuroko. Let's talk about the comparison Well, I feel like Omni can fight Majin Buu and crush the King of Slayers. Let me tell you my analysis. The law of connecting the four poles of the sky-covering method can transform into a dragon and blow up a mountain range, and the powerful throat can split mountains and rivers. The combat power of the Dao-killing King should be ten times stronger, and the saint's combat power should be multiplied dozens of times. The attacks on the fantasy side are all based on laws, directing the body and soul. The law attack is like directly attacking the underlying component program. Just like high dimensionality versus low dimensionality. Light explosion stars, or billions of combat power can be used for nothing. Later, when Goku killed Little Buu, he still had a soul. Moreover, Dragon Ball feels like the world is not rigorous, the structure of life and death is blurred and fragile, and there are a lot of parallel spaces. For example, the comparison between the nine heavens and ten earths in the perfect world and the eight realms in the lower realm. Once below, the destructive power increases hundreds of times. The immortal body of Dragon Ball is useless against fantasy, as it directly destroys the soul and will. Who can achieve great power without being able to physically reorganize and regenerate with a drop of blood?
Readers who can accept this wish can read it
There are so few Dragon Ball fans. In fact, as long as there are similar ones, I can read them.
Look back at what you have written.
Why does it look so much like an urban pretentious slap in the face? ?
After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.
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The heroine feels that Bulma is fine.
For a bastard like Zamasu, it was really easy for him to die at the hands of King Quan in the original work. He should be allowed to endure eternal torture, with his body cut into pieces by a thousand knives every moment, and his soul burned by demonic fire every moment. This relieves the anger.
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I'll stop reading it when I see it on the shelves. Bulma chasing Wukong feels very poisonous. If Bulma really had feelings for Goku, he wouldn't have chosen Yamcha in the first place. Later, because Yamucha attracted bees and butterflies, they chose to break up. Now that she sees Wukong and Qiqi chasing after her, she really can't stand it anymore
This time the protagonist of the conflict simply killed the two Gods of Destruction. What the hell, they deserve a beating just by looking at them.
The biggest poisonous point of this book is that there should be no such thing as martial arts. You have written a fighting novel as a fantasy novel, and the whole thing is biased. What kind of results do you expect?
It was a big mistake to include the plot of Dragon Ball Heroes. The plot of Dragon Ball Heroes is inherently inconsistent. What you think of is what it is, and there is no logic at all.
The protagonist, a king, becomes the emperor. So embarrassing. The title is good for drama. What era.
Brother, you copied the plot too much. The main character doesn't even show up, it's all plot.
Not what I said. . In Dragon Ball, you are scheming to gain influence, but what about the time you spend practicing? Do you think you are cultivating immortality? Even if you want to cultivate immortality, no one will teach you!
This book was quite a failure. Goodbye.
Could you please help me find a novel? I only remember some scenes and some special characters. The current ones are related to Char, Mei Ling, Cell and a super powerful Sun Wukong in "Dragon Ball: The Strongest Myth", and also related to a super strong Sun Wukong. By the way, the protagonist is this super strong Sun Wukong. The title of the book seems to be "Dragon Ball: The Last Guard", but when I looked through the book, I didn't find this plot. I remember that this super powerful Sun Wukong met Mei Ling and Char during the Sarru period. This Sun Wukong came to Char's world and showed super strength.
The subject matter is pretty good, but why isn't it popular? You explain too much, and it's easy to be too watery. The more you read, the less interesting it becomes.
See for yourself, author, how much you like it! For someone like me who likes to listen to novels, the more I listen to it, the more interesting it becomes!
These many Chinese names are really ridiculous. Why are there so many such fan authors?
I have read dozens of chapters, and it feels like a prehistoric novel. . .