The Heavens' Successor to the Divine Illumination Scripture

This is completely out of sync with the original story. Since the protagonist has already obtained the Divine Illumination Scripture, he should kill the three traitors one by one, instead of foolishly waiting for 16 years to do nothing and just relying on the original story. Otherwise, one more person wouldn't make a difference.

The author should take a good look at this. What the hell does the author call himself?

Brother, you've waited sixteen years for nothing, and you haven't even built up your own power. You're not like Yang Guo waiting for Xiaolongnu to grow up, are you? Waiting for Di Yun to grow up?

The writing is nonsensical. Knowing the three are traitors, they don't deal with them first, and the book keeps following the original plot. The perspective rarely focuses on the protagonist; it jumps between different parts of the story, always from the original. Sixteen years pass by in a flash, then twenty, and we have no idea what the protagonist did. It's basically just copying from the original. Frankly, the author is out of ideas, so this is all they can do. Goodbye. 🙂

What's the point of the protagonist you've created so far? It's all just the plot from the original work. I might as well just read the original; isn't it more exciting than what you've written?

I just watched Bai Xiaosheng's drama review on Bilibili, so I came to see if there was any fanfiction. So what's the point of getting so much treasure? The three brothers still turned on each other, stubbornly clinging to their delusions.

I really don't understand what you mean by waiting 16 years? The main character is going to be dead before the plot even reaches its year?

The people here have all gone mad. A skilled martial artist could easily rob the rich to help the poor, or support some wealthy merchant and never lack money. Yet they're fighting to the death over money, completely oblivious to the consequences. After all, having more money is useless; you can't buy the elixir of immortality or rare treasures to greatly enhance your martial arts skills—it's utterly pointless.

If you don't change your style, you can't continue writing around 300,000 words. It feels like you're just skimming through a book without really understanding it. You're not having your own ideas, you're just following the trend. Can't the protagonist take the initiative to learn something or plan something?

Everything else is fine, but what's most baffling? Sixteen years without a single move. Sixteen years! Sixteen years!!! Shouldn't you be doing something? Let's not talk about developing influence and overthrowing politics, or making friends everywhere! Let's not even talk about chasing girls or kidnapping Little Dragon Girl! You should at least have taken care of those traitors first!