The Human Brain Farm

Although the results are not satisfactory, after all, from the perspective of results, breeding > demon country > pasture. But Sanbai must not deny himself in a hurry and fall into self-doubt. The progress is still very obvious, at least the excellence at the beginning is the opposite of the results, that is, pasture > demon country > breeding. The progress at the beginning shows that Sanbai you really put your heart into writing every story. At the beginning of this book, at least three or five books imitate or even copy it. So, three hundred, you're really great. However, in the opinion of some people, and even many people: the two books "Three Hundred You" (Demon Country, Ranch) are very interesting at the beginning, but after the beginning they seem confused, the quality is getting worse and worse, and many people abandon the books. If the quality at the beginning of this book is maintained, I believe that this book should have more than 3,000+ subscriptions when it is put on the shelves, and it will hit 10,000 subscriptions after writing. Since reading Kong Danqing's new book , I have realized that updates are not everything, at least for Three Hundred. (As for why I mention this book, it's because this book can be said to be the most successful book in the early period of the book. This book maintains the current level. With the final results, I feel that it should be able to hit 10,000 orders when the book is finished.) Although, the updates of 300 are not many, but when you are short of imagination, the update is still mandatory, so you can only advance the progress of 300. I once thought that Sanbai was a writer of ideas. However, it is really difficult for one person to come up with new ideas if he writes too many ideas of the same type. Therefore, when describing each world in detail, Sanbai cannot do anything refreshing in every chapter. When writing this book, Sanbai must have been in pain. He no longer had the wanton touch when writing about breeding. Because he raised all the good things and convenient things in his heart. In other words, when it comes to the last two books, he doesn't have enough imagination. This can be seen from the length of these two books. However, how was Three Hundred solved? Compulsory advancement to keep the imagination going. In this way, although the imagination is kept novel, the logic is greatly reduced. (When the brain is lacking, it means that the specific world is written in detail, and there is a lack of new ideas. The three hundred measures are an outline advancement, which means that in a broad sense, there is no shortage of brains, but it is difficult to continue to maintain a superb brain in each world.) The result of logical incoherence is that the sense of substitution is greatly weakened, and even Ichimoku players who lack brains feel incomprehensible and the plot is incoherent, so they will be scolded, which is normal. Many people also say that Sanbai should polish each world carefully now. Because, if each world is carefully polished, outstanding characters such as Emperor Zun will be born. And now, nothing, nothing. Don't Sanbai want to polish every world carefully? No, he thought. However, he couldn't do it while maintaining the amount of updates and ensuring that each chapter was novel. Most others can't do it either. (If Sanbai wrote each world carefully, many people would definitely say that Sanbai's brainpower was mediocre. A player with a brainpower type was judged to have a mediocre brainpower. This result is also terrible.) And Sanbai's choice was just a bad strategy that was difficult to break through. I believe that Sanbai definitely wants to write every story well, and I hope that Sanbai can be reborn from nirvana. The future is bright, but the road is tortuous. At this time, Sanbai was in the spiral stage of its upward spiral. I don't recommend reading the next book in a hurry. You can read some books. I recommend that Sanbai read this book by Kong Duanqing and learn from it in reverse. Although Hong Maodong's later years are unknown, he still can't say no to "Covering the Sky" in the group portrait article. After all, if the group portraits of each world are well written and there is no shortage of outstanding supporting characters, the book will definitely be a success. Kong Danqing's book is just a conceptual direction. I haven't found a book that better expresses what I want to say. Because, I don't know how to define what I want to say. But I hope that Sanbai can get what I want him to get. As for books about group portraits, Sanbai really should make some improvements. The person next door is like a god, so I don't recommend Sanbai Caifeng. I feel like if I watch him too much, my personality will be lost. It is not a single path, and learning it will only make you lose yourself. Don't worry, after completing the shortcomings, Sanbai will definitely become the most handsome boy. Come on, Three Hundred, I'm optimistic about you!

When the protagonist's ability is not enough, but he has to be qualified for the work of the creator god, how can he fool the natives, players and readers? I will provide you with several scientific and reasonable routines, as follows: 1. Cognitive filter. 2. Information dimensionality reduction. 3. Thought prison. 4. The fourth wall. "Cognitive Filter", this concept comes from the business simulation game "Lobotomy Corporation". In the game setting, this is an imaging technology used to filter cognitohazards. What I set is a filter effect. Juli explained: [ a1. What you lost was just a leg, but what she lost was love. a2. They just lost their lives, but what my brother lost was his debut position. ] This is the filter effect, which comes from the prejudice in people's hearts. "The prejudice in people's hearts is like a big mountain. No matter how hard you try, you can't move it." The protagonist only needs to do two things to form a cognitive filter that allows natives, players and readers to automatically ignore bugs in the plot. 1. Jin Yong is a novelist who knows nothing about "Tian Long Ba Bu". 2. Arale: After all, this is a comic. Yes, it's that simple. Borrowing the words of passers-by, I secretly complained: The God of Creation is just a salted fish who eats apples every day and knows nothing about "Genesis". In this way, whenever there is a plot bug in "Raising All Humanity", readers will remember: The God of Creation is a salted fish. It is normal to be lazy and make mistakes. Don't blame it for basic reasons. Let me use the players' words to complain, this game needs to be improved, this is wrong, that is wrong. In this way, when scientists measure some physical constants that are wrong and illogical, they will remember: After all, this is a virtual game. The key to the cognitive filter is not to solve the problem, but to allow people to ignore the key points of the problem and automatically interpret and fill in the loopholes.

1. Character creation. Positive model "Raising All Humanity" Di Qi and Dao live forever, one is positive and the other is negative, one is dead and the other is escaping. The righteous saint died as a martyr, and the corrupt emperor embarked on a new journey. Di Qi's character design is consistent and brilliant throughout. The negative example of "My Hair Can Create a Kingdom of Demons" has only one Jia Xia performing a one-man show. The character of the tragic hero is not dead, he becomes a tool in the middle and late stages, and even worse in the late stages, even worse than a passerby (I think of the two Frenchmen Yuan Shou and Immortal, but I don't think of whether Jia Xia plays or not). It is a good SSR card, but it has no strength at all. Therefore, I suggest the author not to forget to create the villain when creating the hero. 2. Conflict stimulation. Positive model, Emperor Qi and Tao live forever. In order to prolong his life, Di Qi had to regularly harvest sentient beings, while Dao Changsheng developed the "Nine Transformations Mysterious Technique" to save the world and incorporated all sentient beings into his body. The conflict between the two was well stimulated. From this, the plot continues to advance and reaches climaxes. The negative example, Jia Xia. I remember the mantra "Go to the next future" to create new exercises and open the way for all living beings. It seems that the only slogan left in Jiaxia's life is that there are no enemies, no conflicts, and the plot is dull and boring. Therefore, I suggest that the author, when advancing the story, do not forget to create conflicting points. 3. Plot theme. Positive model, the battle to become a god. As long as "Raising" is mentioned, the story of the Three Pillar Gods, Emperor Zun, Emperor Qi, and Caroline will come to mind, as well as the domineering declaration of "Before I became a god, there was no god in the world." This plot is very long, but it is endlessly memorable. No matter which time the story is cut into, it is still fresh in people's memory. The entire plot revolves around the theme of becoming a god. A negative example, save Jiaxia. I think this is the plot in "Demon Kingdom" that persuaded the most people to quit. Let me briefly summarize the plot: Looking for Jiaxia, Jiaxia comes out, Jiaxia runs away. With all due respect, does this plot have a theme? Is the theme just hide and seek? Therefore, I suggest that the author first clarify a theme when conceiving the plot. "The Human Brain" actually starts well. First, it successfully portrays Emperor Shi Guangzhi, and introduces the phrase "a god who does not die if he does not eat", which reveals the connection between the personality of life, the food chain, and recipes. Then he successfully created the Shi Guangxueyin Emperor, which brought out the contradictions between fate and struggle, science and mystery, and the individual and the world. I suggest that the early plot can be extended around the topics raised by these two people, and the theme of becoming a god can be placed on "the god who does not eat or die". The conflicts between the development of civilization and environmental resources, destiny and struggle, science and mystery, individuals and the world. For example: when the prosperous age comes, a large number of level 7 breakthroughs occur, the daily consumption of qi resources exceeds the production of fairy grass, and various places begin to fall into natural disasters (qi is an important resource for maintaining world stability) and man-made disasters (the initial setting includes killing people to steal qi). The consciousness of the world becomes more active, and destiny begins to prepare the destiny of the Creator God. The real world begins to notice dreams, and science and mystery collide. In the end, the path to becoming a god without food or death was opened up, just like in "Raising All Humanity", the God of Creation drew a pie for Di Qi in the heavens and all the worlds, allowing Di Qi to embark on a new journey of the stars and the sea, and the dark turmoil ended. In short, no matter how the plot develops, the theme of contradictions and conflicts is more interesting than the monotonous plots of Emperor Chu Tian and Minotaur where there is only one developing civilization.

I hope the author can regain the ability to bring out the vividness and strong emotions of the epic of Gilgamesh, the legend of the three witches, Emperor Alchemy's suppression of a lifetime, and Dao Changsheng's battle with Emperor Qi. There are a lot of settings at the back, talking about B-frames, but it feels like the characters are seriously distorted, as if the colors of the group portraits were filled in by Xu Zhi. I hope to be able to see the different world with a sense of history written by the author again.

It looked interesting from the beginning, but it became boring once the protagonist came from behind the scenes to the stage. Why should God care what believers think? You are God, not a nanny. A mortal emperor wanted to see you and you went. Is this God? The protagonist should be the trader, the mastermind behind the scenes, instead of ending up being stupid and giving others a blow. . . . . .

After sharing the blood of Emperor Xueyin, the twelve kings feared that they would make the same mistake again and be eaten by rebellious ministers and traitors. Therefore, they decided to tamper with history and conceal the truth: [The Chronicles of the Holy Lord] The last volume "The Last Feast" When the Holy Lord saw the Hibiscus Flower, He understood the mission given to Him by God. The Holy Lord summoned the twelve kings and said: "I am the Son of Heaven. Heavenly Father sent me down to earth and became a mortal so that mortals can one day become gods." "Now Heavenly Father has called me to return to heaven and ordered me to give flesh and blood to all my dear friends and make them kings." The kings were shocked and hurriedly knelt down and begged: "Your Majesty. You must not! Your holy body is sacred and inviolable, how can you allow humble mortals to desecrate it!" The Holy Lord was displeased and said: "This is an irresistible grace, this is the will of the Father! Do you, the most loyal, have to resist the decree?" The kings had no choice but to bear the pain and eat the flesh and blood of the Holy Lord. At the last feast, the Holy Lord murmured: "Eat my flesh and drink my blood, you can gain the power of God and receive the blessing of the Father."

Open an idiom solitaire, let me start first The country is prosperous and the people are strong

In a magnificent palace, there are two people with the same appearance, but the difference is that one is on the throne and the other is kneeling under the palace. I raised my head and looked quietly at the man lying on the throne. He is Shi Guangqiu Zhen Emperor Wuzhen. A person with extremely terrifying talents and talents. All usurpers and rebels were suppressed by him alone. He is the legend of this era, the unreachable sun. I am a humble historian. My mediocre qualifications and talents are destined to make my life unable to make many waves. And my job is to record everything the person in front of me does. My name is Jie Yan, and I am just a historian. "Jie Yan, do you think this world is real or fake?" "Jie Yan quickly lowered his head and said, "I don't know." "Wuzhen glanced at him, smiled and said, "I always had a feeling when I was very young." After saying that, Wu Zhen turned over and jumped off the throne and walked towards Jie Yan. "It was an extremely subtle feeling. I felt inexplicably that the world had a sense of disharmony and unreality." "But when I felt this feeling and explored the authenticity of the world, a voice in the dark told me: Give up, everything you do is useless, your actions are meaningless, and you are just wasting time." "I don't know if that voice is the way of heaven or my subconscious, but the more it says that, the more I want to do it." "May I ask why your Majesty said this to me?" Jie Yan saw Emperor Shi Guangqiuzhen getting closer and asked quickly. Wuzhen stopped in front of Jie Yan, smiling and saying nothing, just opening his arms. An instant of terrifying aura hit his face, Jie Yan's face changed instantly, and he subconsciously jumped back, away from Wu Zhen. Jie Yan was about to ask a question, but after seeing Wu Zhen's appearance, the words were on his lips but he couldn't say them out. I saw Wuzhen standing in the center of the hall, his long black hair flying in the air, his scarlet eyes staring at Jie Yan. Countless chaotic consciousnesses were wandering around him, forming a small restricted area for creatures around him. This is the standard appearance of a demon cultivator. Since the ancient Shi Guangxueyin Emperor opened the sky and left, countless powerful and wise men have imitated the method of Shi Guangxueyin Emperor to transform the body and integrate into the brain to practice. This has also led to the deduction of many such cultivation methods in later generations. The most typical one is to remove the brains of other strong men, stuff them into the belly, and refine them into golden elixirs. This elixir refining process is jokingly called the elixir formation stage.         ，， After the elixir is formed, the evil thoughts remaining in the original owner of the elixir are not easily eliminated. They often disrupt their will during cultivation and make them become possessed. And the demonic disaster during that period was also the most serious in history.                          Jie Yan once had the honor to see a demon cultivator with his own eyes, but the aura he exuded was far less powerful than Wuzhen. "Your Majesty, do you know that you are cultivating demons." Jie Yan gritted his teeth and said. "Of course I know. Thirty years ago, when I went to the edge of the world, I hit the barrier with all my strength, hoping to break it, but nothing happened." "I was thinking at the time that the barrier that I couldn't break with my full blow was easily broken by the ancient Shiguangxueyin Emperor, which shows how powerful it is." "So I have spent 30 years collecting all the major demonic cultivation methods, integrating them, adding some of my own ideas, constantly deducing, and constantly improving." "Now that I have achieved success, it is time to pursue the things that were once unachievable, but there cannot be a great emperor in this world, and you and I look so similar, so you should be the great emperor!" "Your Majesty, how can this be done? How can I take on such an important task?" "Needless to say, you have a more stable temperament and are more suitable to be the emperor than me." "But I am not Shi Guangqiuzhen Emperor." Wu Zhen smiled and said, "No, you can learn." "With the resources I leave you, no matter how mediocre you are, you can become an emperor. There is also my study room. There are books I have collected and some books I wrote myself. It will be good for you to read more." "From now on, you will be Shi Guang's truth-seeking emperor, and I am just a truth-seeker." "We are destined... Goodbye!" Click The space instantly shattered, and the truth-seeker Wu Zhen left in an instant. Only Shi Guang, the truth-seeker Emperor Jie Yan, stood alone in the hall. Looking at the direction Wu Zhen was leaving, Jie Yan's lips wriggled and he couldn't help but whisper. "Oops, I'm a substitute!"

[That year, Emperor Shi Guangxueyin died, and the world of ancestral witches entered the Warring States Period] Illustrated by: Zhang Zhi

Is this considered a waste? As I have said a long time ago, whether it is a creation flow or a behind-the-scenes flow, there is a lack of side stories from the perspective of the player (tool man) to set off and support. The main plot with only the perspective of the protagonist is too dry! Don't be afraid of water, proper water is a lubricant! No matter how much the trolls scold you, it won't be as slap-in-the-face as the results of the previous book "Raising All Humans"!