The Gourmet Among Pirates

To be honest, the writing was okay, but when I saw that the candidate general's combat power is 55 times that of an ordinary person, I knew that it was written by someone who did not understand the combat power of One Piece. Even if an ordinary person in the One Piece world has a body weight of 200 kilograms, yours is only 11 tons. Is this a fighting spirit turned horse world again? Is this a candidate for general?

The author recommends that you write, The Prisoner of Food. It's all about ingredients. Find a chef, male or female, and you grab the ingredients and she cooks them. Wouldn't it be a good suggestion? If you haven't seen it, I suggest you go check it out and hope you can write a good work.

Is that you, the gluttonous king who was beaten to death by the warden next door? 🤔

The author can try to shape the protagonist into a hero or an idol, and design a scene where he is both pretentious and handsome. What do children know? They listen to pirate adventure stories every day and don't dream of becoming a pirate. If there were Kamen Rider and Ultraman, let's see who would still want to be a pirate. The characters in One Piece are heavily influenced by the idols of the previous generation. For example, the ideals of most people on the Road Ship are related to their "idols".

The author has never read One Piece. The will of the pirates written in One Piece is completely opposite to that in One Piece. The meaning of One Piece is freedom of resistance. You must know that the reason why there are so many pirates is not because of Roger's words, but because the rule of the Celestial Dragons makes it difficult for the people below to survive, so they go to sea to become pirates. The meaning of One Piece is that these people are resisting. You can write about burning and killing, but not all.

According to the combat power value written by the author: a Momo fruit can directly kill the entire pirate world 100 times, and the whole drama ends.

With Ace's identity, he can become a marine? Unless the world government is destroyed, we can only become pirates or revolutionary soldiers.

The content is okay, but combat power is best compared with navy positions or pirate bounties. Comparing it with the multiples of ordinary people is very confusing. I remember that not long after Luffy debuted, there was a minion in the East China Sea who seemed to be called the Black Cat Pirates. He was hypnotized by Jango and punched a rock as tall as one person. Comparing it with the multiples of ordinary people, what is the strength of this group? How many times?

To be honest, I feel like the aunt has been worn by someone from Food Hunter.

This is very embarrassing. The plug-in is too large in the early stage and is compressed in the later stage.

Five years have passed, and you just can't bear to release the data panel. Be the Riddler, right?😐

Eat some Oli, it's powerful and delicious. If you want to watch One Piece Gourmet, you have to watch me eat daddy.

The protagonist is too stupid. Can he be made smarter?

After reading Chapter 7 and knowing the protagonist's talent (Goldfinger), I have already thought about the future development. Take a leave of absence on the grounds that you are injured, or temporarily leave your job, and find your way to the Boeing Islands with your major general uncle, or ask your uncle to escort you there (anyway, you can find various reasons). Then I managed to see the general's combat power come out in the Boing Islands. It was so cool... I don't know if the author had the same idea as me. If I had this golden finger, it would be a pity not to go to the Boing Islands.

As long as you don't eat a bunch of fruits, it's fine. I remember reading a book called One Piece called Infinity Gauntlet. The fruit has so many abilities that I can't say anything.

This is an author who has never read One Piece. The prison only holds Devil Fruit users, and all other pirates are killed.

According to the description in the novel, is the protagonist a starving ghost or a gourmet? This is a question worth pondering!

It's easy for One Piece fans to write down their general combat power using multiples and points, because the logic of One Piece's world strategy is not very clear at all. Military ranks are roughly divided, and there are also a few old problems of following the protagonist to steal the protagonist, and then the protagonist has no way to go. He just copies it, and he will die easily if he is not creative.

Chapter 40 is so well written, and they want Ace to be a Marine. He is pretty cool, but neither the Navy nor the World Government dares to accept him. What will the rest of the Navy think of him if he accepts him?

The hook of the Dragon Man! ! ! Also, if you have watched the anime, you don't need to watch it, I'm super speechless! ! ! The various settings are original and clearly don't match those in the anime!

First of all, thank you all book friends for helping to catch bugs. I hope you will tell me if you see any typos. I will correct them when I see them.

Come on, I think it looks pretty smooth. I'll make up for it and get it from the browser (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Five years have passed in the blink of an eye. Inexplicably, I have refused three transfer orders from the headquarters. You can upgrade to the Grand Line by eating delicious food. It is not easy to eat delicacies from all over the world and the Grand Line in Marineland. In addition, inexplicably, Garp is chasing Tiger. Garp inexplicably invites the protagonist whom he met for the first time to see Ace and Luffy to be the protagonist. Go teach them. After meeting Ace, the protagonist Luffy inexplicably reveals that he is Roger's son... There are too many flaws. In the article, Luffy has been living with Ace for a long time since he was 3 years old. It is also a flaws. Luffy was brought to Mount Corpo to meet Ace for the first time after seeing Shanks eat the rubber fruit. Luffy was already 7-8 years old at that time.,,,,,,,

5 Years, fighting with Cap. . . Xiao Bai Shuangwen has read it himself and plans to start writing it, right? The first few chapters were quite normal, but five years later I wrote them without thinking. The protagonist himself also traveled through time, and during play, he became a fool who fought with Garp for food, and established a normal person.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

Isn't anyone watching even if it's limited to free? The writing is still on the horizontal line, which is much better than most people nowadays who just build a system and just write upwards.

In the pirate world, there are no fruits or gun skills, and there are more red-haired people. Predict the future in one minute, and add bullets wrapped around seastones, enough to scare the generals

There are more than 500 chapters and it's not finished yet?

See Chapter 154, where did the Earth Exploding Star come from? Is the golden skill in the chef competition the Earth Explosion Star? If so, how many chapters do you think are missing in the middle?