Cultivation Family: My Cave Is Connected to the Earth

The comment section of this book is a bit violent, but some of the issues are indeed true. The first question. The subject of family issues is not clear. Since you are already the head of the family, you must have the spirit of the head of the family. Rather than being able to question it casually. And the family contribution is unclear. If a family wants to develop normally, you can't always dedicate everything to the family's righteousness. If you want to benefit the people below, you must contribute in vain. The world of cultivating immortals is more communist than communism. What's more, this is the head of the family, the head of the family, and he still questions it. Of course the author is not Wangyu, a platinum writer like Tomato. Overall, it's not that childish or naive. The story is also told very smoothly. It's just that everyone is more accustomed to watching the protagonist who keeps a low profile and bides his time. Suddenly a high-profile and dedicated protagonist appears, which is a bit unaccustomed. There are a few novels that are also about cultivating families, such as "The Way to Evergreen" and "The Cultivation of Immortality Begins in the Desert". There are also a few novels that I forgot about. I think the authors can learn from their protagonists' family methods and their behavior and thoughts, not their personalities. To write. Personal opinion

I really like this kind of subject matter, but the writing style is flawless! I can't even see it!

There is a precedent. The protagonist's father sent his enemies back to the mountain, and the protagonist's family who did not travel through time were completely wiped out. Now the protagonist is cutting the grass without eradicating the root.

It is a crime to watch someone gang-rape a woman and kill her while secretly filming her. Nine years of compulsory education have been wasted. There is no moral bottom line. How can a person with poor character be able to study the Tao Te Ching? Bad review. 💀💀

All I can say is that the logic is illogical, so the author must be very young. Although there are many fantastic ideas, a book will not be popular if it has flaws in logic. For example, if you bring sweet potatoes to the world of immortality, no matter how good you are, they are the result of time travel and are golden fingers. No logic is needed, but they grow in a few months in the world of immortality. Don't you need to absorb spiritual energy during the growth process? The aura contained in sweet potatoes cannot appear out of thin air. It takes time and certain conditions to absorb the aura. The higher the elixir, the higher the requirements on the spiritual field and time. This is the most basic rule. Why would you just bring a toy Ultraman with you and become a puppet? First of all, puppets in the world of immortality need materials and spiritual formations. You are a plastic Ultraman. Even if the material becomes more powerful, there should be basic rules, spiritual formations or souls that give him movement. There are also spicy strips that are better than Xiaolongbao. You can also get Liuwei Dihuang Pills. Junk food like spicy strips has no material and no medicinal effect. Even if you travel through time, you have to have a certain logic. For example, buying a sword worth several thousand yuan from the earth to the world of immortality turns into a powerful flying sword. It can be said that its material is originally good and the casting process is also good. Then when you travel through time, the material changes and becomes powerful. But if you get a plastic foam armor and use it to cultivate the immortal world and turn it into a spirit armor, it's a bit nonsense. So it's better to come up with the logic, otherwise it will fall apart after half the writing.

Regarding the affairs of the Zhu family, it doesn't matter whether the family is exterminated or not. The main thing is that you want to write the character Zhu Mei as a person who only cares about herself, but a person who only cares about himself will not deal with the traitor Zhu Wu. Moreover, if you think about it from the perspective of human nature, who will benefit from Zhu Wu's death? The protagonist has no benefit at all, but it is beneficial to Zhu Mei, helping him establish his authority and control the Zhu family. The most important thing is, the author, think about it, if you were the Zhu family, if the Zhu family wanted to plot something, would you dare to tell the truth? Absolutely not, because the people who helped the protagonist have been abandoned by the protagonist, who would dare to be a second-rate kid? This is the most fundamental nature of human nature, so you directly wrote the protagonist as a second fool. In the future, Zhu Mei, with the resources of the Zhu family, will practice hard on his own, plus his previous experience in dealing with dog lickers. Do you think he will not be the next Wu Mei Niang? Wait for the protagonist's family to lose power and then directly exterminate it? Although it will not appear in the novel, this is the reality. Look, Wu Meiniang is not dead. After she became powerful, did she treat those who harmed him and the Li family well? After writing each piece, can you see it for yourself? Don't write it happily at the time and send it out to a lot of people to complain about you because it is really mindless. I hope the author can grow up, otherwise it will be over sooner or later and no one will buy it.

Wu Nao read Chapter 44 and can't stand it anymore. Why don't you bring more birds, or Ultraman? They are just useless things. There is a war near your home owner, and you bring some useless things. Isn't it a good idea to bring more things related to combat power? Otherwise, you shouldn't write that these things can be brought over. If you can bring them, you will be forced to lower your IQ.

The creativity is invincible, the plot is poisonous, what a waste of such a good idea! The author of this book is over 16 years old and I am a live Japanese fan!

The setting is a mess, it's completely self-indulgent and has no logic at all. For example, in 30 minutes, you can go shopping, buy and change clothes, visit the bird market, act cool when you encounter a car accident, have a few conversations, and find a toilet.

I have no enmity with you, why do you treat me like a fool? . . .

You don't pay for meals and you steal something when you leave, oh oh oh oh oh

The imagination is good, but the writing is not. The characterization is a garbage fighting chicken.

Xiao Long Bao becomes the elixir! This is too easy to withdraw!

It is too poisonous and is not recommended for ordinary people to try. In addition, there are also big problems with the three views of this book. After reading a few chapters, I felt something was wrong. One was about traveling through real society, stealing things and running away, and the other was about meeting people who were unhappy with them and just slap them in the face and scold them to get lost. Such people die quickly in real society. The author is most likely underage or still in school. If you like to read cool articles and don't care about these, you can continue reading. If you do care, you should just read the articles that can endure the beating.

It's on the shelves and you can still be subdued by a woman in modern times. It's really useless. Is there no physical training in cultivation? It's a bit poisonous, I can't stand it anymore

In ancient times, there was no quality of brainless writing, such as books in the style of Chuangshi website and wireless writing. Seriously speaking, it's not even a novice article, because novice articles also have basic requirements, otherwise it's just a mindless article! Last but not least, this author probably has never worked. I read a few chapters and then looked at the table of contents. My dear, it is not easy for such a "pure" novel to appear now.

Not to mention anything else, just that alchemy and licking dog can persuade a group of people to retreat.

If ordinary things on the earth are brought to the world of immortality and mutated, it means that the dimension of the earth in this novel is higher than the dimension of the world of immortality.

To put it bluntly, the protagonist is like a nanny. It's better to change the character to an ancestor.

The character of this protagonist is quite poisonous, and his main idea is against social morality. Abandon the pit!

Don't be discouraged, author. You are on the potential new book list. Compared with the previous two new books, one with 5 fans and one with 7 fans is much better. You have 16 fans at least. Not bad!! Being on the potential new book list means it has potential. Do you know the potential? That is the most mysterious power in the Qidian universe. The foundation of enlightenment, which is said to be obtainable and can lead to sainthood, has boundless power. It is said that in ancient times, the three great powers Shangqing, Yuqing, and Taiqing directly slaughtered the way of heaven for the foundation of enlightenment, directly created the heaven and earth, and created the Hongmeng Universe, which is what later generations call the great world. The difficulty of attaining the truth is that you can fart even if you take off your pants! Author, the future is yours, you have to believe in the future!!!🤔🤔🤔😃😃😃 😃😃😃😃😚😚😚😚😚😚😏😏😏

After reading the first chapter, I had two bad feelings. Firstly, it was straightforward and reckless. This is very bad. If you have a system background, you can survive until the end. It would be foolish to rush forward without knowing what the opponent is like. It is also inconsistent with current concepts. Secondly, the song that appears at the end is quite offensive. There are many ways for the author to highlight modernization, but this is not necessarily the case. For the time being, these two points are not working well. Will add others after reading.

Come on, come on! I enjoyed reading it. Although there are certain problems in various aspects such as writing logic, character thinking, etc., I can still read it, which is amazing. At least I write novels. I can't finish writing after three or four chapters. I feel like I don't know where to start. The author still has some imagination. Write more, write more books, and sooner or later it will become popular!

It's well written, the ideas are wonderful, and the writing is well structured. Come on, author. 😁😁😁

It's okay to revise something like a novel as you write it.