Traveling Through Ten Years of Pirates, Awakening the Lottery System

I saw so many heroines that I didn't dare to click in. I wish you good luck.

Isn't the protagonist brainless? He'll hit anyone he sees. He'll fight even if he can't beat him. It's not like he can't run away.

Doesn't the protagonist want to improve the relationship between humans and fish-men? Then kill Hody. Don't tell me that the hero's IQ cannot guess what Hody's character would do to ordinary humans. Also, the protagonist has never killed anyone except in the navy and when he first arrived on Fish-Man Island. The captains of the pirate groups should not have killed anyone. There is no need to follow the main line of the original work. Why can't there be no plot of Straw Hats fighting bosses? After time travel, you should want to change something.

In your mind, the time you spent as a slave is just a number. The past is gone. You will never know that you were two different people before and after you became a slave.

It's really a pig's foot. It can't do anything but hit it. Can't lightning run away at its speed?

Many people think it is unreasonable that the rockberry fruit is superior to the scorching fruit. So is it reasonable that the thunder fruit cannot beat the rubber fruit? Is it reasonable for Luffy to receive the big move with his face unscathed? Just because rubber is not conductive, you are always afraid of high temperatures if it is not conductive. As a result, Luffy was injured by the high temperature of magma, but facing the high temperature of thunder, it was like blowing wind.

Having a harem every day makes me feel somewhat inferior.

After reading Chapter 30, I feel like I have traveled through ten years and done nothing.

Many characters have changed their personalities, which is not suitable for a senior sea fan like me. Maybe ordinary people will like to watch it?

I've been fucking Kizaru head-on for two years... Why don't you just wait three or four years and just look at the five old stars and push the Loess Continent flatly?

It's not unreasonable that this book is not popular. Not a single plot of the original novel has been changed. I saw three plots in which the protagonist participated, and one of them has not been changed. He is like a passerby. After participating for a long time, he will always find various reasons to pull back the main plot line. If you don't change it, why did you write about him? To show your incompetence? On Fish-Man Island, the protagonist's fruit abilities have been developed even more than Enero. As a result, you don't need to cover Fish-Man Island with your knowledge and domineering power to locate lightning strikes. You must be a fool! ? It takes a long time to find someone, so what do you sense?

Just look at the introduction and you will know that the writing is poor in this series. .

If you don't know how to write, just slow down. I'm not trying to make you stupid. What kind of thing are you writing with randomly changing perspectives? I'm speechless. This person is here, and that person is now there. Who dares to subscribe to it now that it's on the shelves?

These days, besides starting out as a slave and going out to sea as a pirate, can't you write some novels about traveling through time and becoming a Celestial Dragon, or joining the navy? 😥

Chapters 27-28 are a bit serious. I can't accept it.

I don't know what this guy is going to do, the foundation is shaky. Still wandering around. If he wasn't the protagonist, he would have died long ago.

After reading so many chapters, I saw something about the male protagonist being a virgin. Have you read too many mindless articles? How many people did Luffy kill in the original novel? Why haven't you heard anyone say that he is the Holy Mother? The red-haired Yonko is a well-known good guy among pirates. How come no one calls him the Holy Mother? I'm drunk. This Pirates fanfic is definitely the best I've ever read. I won't accept any refutation. If you have the guts, recommend it to me. There's no shortage of passionate battles and never-boring love in this book. The system is dispensable. There's a harem instead of a stallion. The heroine's IQ is considered online, and the work is deep enough. Read more about the highlights of this book! If you catch something that is beyond the setting of the original work, you will call it poisonous. How many fanfics are of such high quality but not good enough? Why don't you write one if you are so good at criticizing me? I'm so drunk.

This book is neither an invincible cool novel nor a dark novel! Also, this book is a harem novel, a harem novel! If you want to see the protagonist who is invincible at the beginning, ruthless and has no heroine, please take a detour!