The Heavenly Walker of the Qin Era

The protagonist's name is Si Yuan. During the Warring States Period, the surname Si should be quite sensitive. This was the surname of Dayu, and the Zhou Dynasty was not destroyed during the Warring States Period. I don't know how the author would deal with some details in this regard. Moreover, people with the surname Si usually refer to themselves by their surname, so there are very few people with the surname Si left today. (More famous people with the Si surname: King Wen of Zhou's wife Tai Si, Queen Zhou You's Baosi, Gou Jian, Dayu Si Wenming, Shaokang, etc.)

Heroine Selection According to readers' votes, the corresponding heroine will be arranged. Everyone can participate in the original version (*^ω^*)

He's got two-meter-high muscles and a vicious look. There are so many secretaries. Can't he change his body shape? You look cruel even when you smile. I really wonder why women fall in love with you.

How should I put it? There are too many hang-ups, I can't understand them, and it's boring.

He's 2.5 Meters tall. Why didn't you write that the diameter of the big crane is 1 meter? Have a problem with aesthetics?

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Good guy, I've seen a protagonist from the time of the Qin Dynasty before. Chapter 200 is still a seven or eight-year-old kid. The author always describes a petite body, which I find very awkward. Then I discovered this book while playing today. The protagonist has a strong body at the age of six. There is nothing wrong with being strong. The main reason is that it is written later that the protagonist's facial lines have become stiff because of this. Oh My God! The protagonist is six years old! At six years old, do you dare to write that the lines on your face are hard? It's so different from that novel in which the main character is still a little kid!

He was actually persuaded to retreat by a sword🤣🤣🤣

Summary: The book is not bad, but it is not good either. Even if Qin Shi is removed, this is a standard fantasy novel, but generally speaking, it is not a good fanfic. According to the author's comments in the book review, I have sorted through the Warring States literature, but it seems too bland, without the [climax] point, and the unique points of [Qin Shi] (including the suffering of the protagonist's mother) are not used. It is not a joke. Comment: I don't want you to think it looks good, I want it to look good to me; [It's okay to write, but it doesn't look good]