Beginning with Ancestral Evolution

Alas, it's very uncomfortable to write about parents in the apocalypse, because I always feel that my parents are not suitable for the apocalypse. Then the protagonist has two weaknesses out of thin air, and the enemy has two ways to deal with you. If you form a team, it can easily become a burden. In addition, in the apocalypse, you can see the ugliness of human beings, and you don't know when the great image of your parents will collapse in your heart. In addition, if there are two female protagonists, the parents may also interfere with the protagonist's love. It would be easier not to write.

The first forty chapters of this book are great! But the following chapters are very bloody 🔪 The young master of some big family is a collateral line. This collateral young master can also monitor everyone's mobile phone data at any time 😤😤😤 And this young master has not only evolved elemental powers, but what's more, having elemental powers is not enough, he can also mentally enslave other people 🔪🔪🔪

It's a really good novel. I haven't written it this well for a long time. At least it looks like a protagonist. Nowadays, the protagonists of many novels are purely based on system plug-ins. They are a waste in themselves. They are far worse than before. The writing is good. The author is great, but it feels very dangerous to write like this 😢

When I saw the memory section, I was thinking, what is the purpose of cultivating immortality? Forget parents, forget children, no need to eat, no need to drink, no need to find a woman, just seek immortality. If you only seek immortality, it would be great to directly become a thinking stone. It is not much better than risking your human body. Why should you cultivate immortality as a human? To be honest, looking at these immortal cultivators, I feel like they are monsters in human skin. I think the most human-like cultivator is Xie Xiu, no matter what they do, eh? But at least I am loyal to my own desires. Look at these immortal cultivators who are born as human beings, but want to give up everything human. They have no feelings and desires, especially that fairy. I feel sick when I look at it The above is actually because I am too disgusted, so I said it, because I actually had an uncanny valley effect on the immortal cultivators, and I discovered that I subconsciously did not regard them as human beings.

Have you invested?

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The protagonist is pretty good as a creator, but the two female leads are burdened by too many scenes.

I can't stand the first chapter. Satellites were launched five hundred years ago, and novels can be read on mobile phones five hundred years later. This technological evolution is really awesome.

The idea is pretty good, very good, but the plot is so rubbish. In the real countryside, if the son is admitted to the civil service, his parents will be very happy. In the end of the world, the protagonist has become a fairy, but the parents and villagers' sense of the protagonist has not changed at all.

The two-sentence introduction, even the sentences are unclear, which shows the author's level.