Naruto: The Hyuga Clan's Dead-Last

It's a bit confusing to kill Hinata and Hiashi. They obviously want to marry their daughter to you, but you still don't understand. It's okay for you to kill other clans, but there's no need to kill Hinata.

I hope a big book lover can give me a cover, preferably one with fireworks. It would be better if Hinata, Tenten, Sakura and Ino were all present.

In fact, it seems that Kurenai Yuhi was not married to Asuma in the original novel. She was pregnant out of wedlock, and Asuma died before she could get married.

This is the darkest Naruto I've ever seen, and the author's imagination (conspiracy theory) is amazing. This is how unsatisfactory it is in real life to have such an idea 🥵

When I watched Naruto before, I felt that Tsunade was the prettiest, and the others were like that. In other words, Kurenai Yuhi could compare with Tsunade and be favored by the premature uncle. Then after watching Boruto, I found that only Hanabi was good-looking, and then she had to be favored by the Monkey Family? So in order to avoid this plot, I just stopped watching it 😁

The other plots in this novel are well written, but your harem is really poisonous! You don't have a good plot design and promotion of multiple female protagonists, you just have a harem for the sake of the harem, but it's okay that the friendship with Tiantian originally in the same team developed into fruition in the end, and you have laid the groundwork well. But you added Hinata and Hanabi. The key is how old Hanabi is. Lsp, have you never seen a woman? Is this okay? ! 🤯

Decide on the heroine early, don't worry about Yuhi Kurenai and Tsunade, she is an aunt and grandma level. To be honest, the other ones written on Naruto are considered the best among them, so don't fall into the harem trap again. Times have changed

I read about twenty chapters, especially the handling of the two debt collectors in the casino. It has a strong fantasy novel about killing people and seizing treasures, with a single-line narrative, and the sight is limited to the protagonist. There is no such thing as Naruto and Obito. Even if it is involved, it is only a very flat image. The protagonist's parents are not. It's vivid, but the overall layout is smaller, and the protagonist already has the strength of a jounin in the early stage, such as Thunder Refining Technique, Medical Ninjutsu, Soft Fist, Rasengan Kai, Wei Li Jutsu, and Eight Gate Dungeon. In just twenty chapters, the protagonist has mastered it. This is a routine that I miss very much. It doesn't feel out of place in a fantasy background.

Help everyone pull weeds, some places are poisonous. Jiraiya is dead, that's not the point. The Blood Successor Snare is a fusion of multiple attributes that an individual possesses, not a fusion of multiple escape techniques. Where did Jiraiya get the Blood Successor Snare? Toad Flame + Toad Oil + Wind Release Immortal Technique + the protagonist's one move of Ryuken Ruohuo becomes the Blood Successor Snare? You can say it is a six-level ninjutsu. In addition, Jiraiya's sensual skills require the assistance of two sages to maintain them for a long time. When Jiraiya died, he burned meteorites and the two sages exhausted their lifespan to output. Jiraiya could not maintain the sage mode at all. If Otsutsuki Toneri dies, will there be a wedge? That's what a real Otsutsuki can do! How many generations are there between those who sacrifice themselves? Is it possible to be related to Kaguya? How much difference is there between Otsutsuki on the moon and Hinata on the ground? The difference is just like the author said between Senju and Uchiha! Where does Wedge's technology come from? Then the poison point comes, Hinata breaks Toneri's wedge (unpossessed state) and gets the memory? Do you want to be so powerful? Your white eyes will turn into straight-death demon eyes! Do you know that the male protagonist killed the Hyuga clan? Killing the Zong family is also quite bloody. I want to write about the two Hinata sisters who want to be with the male protagonist, so why do they have to kill them? Isn't it okay to just force them to talk like a caged bird? There are also many poisonous points such as the effect of spiritual transformation into a heart-turning spell I now see twenty chapters left, and I plan to change the map before deciding whether to continue reading

There are many secondary assumptions that are too unreasonable.