Naruto: The Hyuga Clan's Dead-Last

I don't understand why Hiashi Hyuga was killed. They clearly wanted to marry their daughter to you, so why did you do this? Killing other main family members is fine, but there was no need to kill Hiashi.

I hope some knowledgeable readers can suggest a cover, preferably one with fireworks. It would be even better if Hinata, Tenten, Sakura, and Ino were all included.

Actually, it seems that Kurenai Yuhi didn't marry Asuma in the original story; she became pregnant out of wedlock, and Asuma died before they could get married.

This is the darkest Naruto I've ever seen; the author's imagination (conspiracy theory) is incredible. How miserable must one's real life be to have such thoughts? 🥵

When I watched Naruto before, I felt Tsunade was the most beautiful, and the others were just so-so. Only Kurenai Yuhi could compare to Tsunade, but she got dumped by an old man who aged prematurely. Then I watched Boruto and found that only Hanabi is good, and then she gets dumped by the monkey clan? So to avoid this plot, I just stopped watching. 😁

The rest of the plot in this novel is well-written, but your harem aspect is truly awful! You didn't design or develop the multiple heroines well; it's just a harem for the sake of having a harem. It's one thing for the friendship between Hinata and Tenten to develop into a romantic relationship, and the foreshadowing was good. But then you added Hinata, and then Hanabi—and Hanabi is only a few years old, you pervert! Have you never seen a woman before?! Is this even allowed?! 🤯

The female lead needs to be decided soon; don't go for characters like Kurenai Yuhi and Tsunade, they're too old for the typical auntie/grandma vibe. Honestly, the other stories are among the better Naruto ones; please, don't fall into the harem trap. Times have changed.

I read about twenty chapters, especially the way the two debt collectors at the casino were handled. It had a strong fantasy novel feel, like a murder-for-treasure story. The narrative was linear, and the focus was limited to the protagonist's surroundings. There was no attention given to characters like Obito from Naruto, and even when they were mentioned, they were just flat characters.

Let me help you identify some poisonous plants. Jiraiya died, but that's not the point. Bloodline Limits are the fusion of multiple attributes, not multiple ninjutsu. Where did Jiraiya get his Bloodline Limits? Did he just combine Toad Flame, Toad Oil, Wind Release: Sage Mode, and the protagonist's Ryujin Jakka to create Bloodline Limits? You could call it a Six Paths level ninjutsu.

Many of the fan-made interpretations are quite illogical.