Wuxia Beginning with the Indestructible Golden Body

Or we should use the Invincible Vajra Divine Skill from the game "The World's Number One" combined with the Sunflower Manual!!! The Sunflower Manual, if not practiced properly, would cause one to suffer from burning yang fire. The cultivation of the Vajra Indestructible Divine Skill requires one's own yang energy. A perfect combination, formidable defense, and unpredictable speed.

The author wonders if your novel follows a formula where the system rewards you with a martial arts manual, and you use that manual while completely forgetting all your previous skills as if you never practiced them. Also, don't make things like the Dugu Nine Swords being more powerful than the Holy Spirit Sword Technique or the Mysterious Sword Art. This is really toxic, and I advise you not to write like that.

The author is morally ambiguous and writes entirely based on their own understanding. Why is the Demonic Sect called that throughout the martial arts world? If they didn't commit evil deeds, why would anyone call them that? The author seems to be trying to whitewash them. And those lecherous thieves—they saw them and didn't just kill them; they got away!

I heard the main character doesn't want the female lead? Then this divine skill is destined for you. Come on, young man. Don't be shy.

The way the female characters are written is a bit awkward, especially Haitang's. She already had a crush on someone long ago. And suddenly she's smitten the moment you appear? Is the romance between the characters in the original work really that insignificant? Even the things she says seem a bit off.

Chapter Two states that the Northern Darkness Divine Art is a divine-level technique because its true function is to absorb the Qi of Heaven and Earth, and the essence of the sun and moon, to cultivate immortality and ascend to godhood. The novel's depiction of only being able to absorb the internal energy of others is merely a consequence of later generations' inability to break through the…

Have you even checked how many imperial courts there are? Are the Embroidered Uniform Guards and the Eight Banners soldiers locked in fierce combat? Is Guo Jing still fighting the Jin? Did Xiao Feng personally teach Yang Guo the Eighteen Subduing Dragon Palms? Whose Forbidden City was the final battle at the Forbidden City? Was Wei Xiaobao present?

He even claimed to be a veteran reader and wouldn't write anything critical, which is laughable. There are plenty of critical points and flaws to criticize.

Judging from the title, I thought he was invincible from the start, but it turns out he's just a newbie.

The author, relying on hearsay, has written a hodgepodge of information, lacking even basic common sense. Can metal-based martial arts compare to those in *Wind and Cloud*? Do you think Nie Feng's forty-meter-long sword is just for show? Even the Undying Golden Body and the Ten Thousand Swords Return to One technique can only be used to exploit weaknesses.