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I tried the drug. It is a barely readable novel The shortcomings are very obvious: a large number of meaningless dialogues related to live broadcasts and a chapter of two to three thousand words, which makes this article very watery. The viewing rhythm is very bad. To follow it is to chase drugs. There are also some advantages: the combination of the protagonist's wizard + thriller park is not bad and can be barely read (of course, if the proportion or rhythm in this aspect collapses, it will be completely uninteresting) From the comments, it can be seen that the author is quite serious about this book. If you read the free chapter and are not persuaded, you can give it a try

Okay, that's interesting

Is the earth in the article not connected to the Internet? Winning a championship in the Olympics can lead to millions of followers overnight. The protagonist performed perfectly throughout the whole process, and a video of the game cleared the game and got the world's first S-level rating, which got 3,000 followers in one week? And when the protagonist first entered, he showed that he could fight one against a hundred, easily and freely hacking to death hundreds of two-meter-tall octopus monsters with a scalpel. Overlord Xiang Yu was not as powerful as him. Is there no enthusiasm for this kind of force? I can only suspect that their world is not connected to the Internet.

The author will never break his promise. I hope everyone will come and take a look every day. He went to Sanjiang and talked about the red wedding dress for women

This is a book of mine. My original intention is to make people read, relax and not tired! It makes people feel interesting and can keep reading. I don't know how to quote scriptures and ask people to figure out what they mean. What truth is hidden there? There is nothing shocking about it... Of course, maybe I can learn something and inspire you to do human anatomy? 😁 This is a refreshing article that is comfortable to read, non-toxic, but refreshing If you like it, just keep it and read it every day. As a newcomer, I have a lot to learn and grow up step by step. It is impossible for the first book to be comprehensive. I hope you will walk with me and grow together! After all, this can be regarded as a memory of youth. After a few years, you can still say: "You know that Mr. He Daguan from Qidian! He wrote so well at that time. I have read his books for several years and the writing is getting better and better. I still have contact information. If you leave a comment, you will definitely reply to me. They are all old friends!" I read comments almost every day and reply 😌. We are familiar with each other. If you don't like it, you can leave, but please don't give malicious guidance and negative comments. Thank you everyone...

Brothers, the author is really gone, squeezed dry, this is my little sister, my sister 😁😁😁Zongyejun is a normal person, and he came directly to show off his Lolita face on Friday. . We

Regarding the barrage and audience comments, they will gradually become less and more refined in the future. The front is indeed a bit too cumbersome... It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, and I don't know much about it. No one told me that one chapter will make you wiser! The pace is also a bit slow and should be speeded up, just like the previous twenty chapters... There are also some refreshing aspects of the plot... I have summarized these, slowly corrected them, and strive to write better in the future. I hope everyone will come and read it every day, and I am currently in the process of PKing. As a newcomer, I really need everyone's support. I almost always read the comments and absorb some useful things. I want to write better!

The setting is good, but I don't understand the meaning of the live broadcast at all. It may bring benefits later, but this barrage is really useless. It's just embarrassing. The number of words is too low. I guess the barrage has persuaded some people. It's too watery. I didn't feel that the protagonist was a wizard when I saw the second copy.

I specially made a chapter to complain about it. It's a standard peddling story. Until the end of the second round, the whole battle basically didn't use a single witchcraft. It only used a power-enhancing buff witchcraft that outsiders couldn't see. I'm thinking you shouldn't write about wizards and just write about knights. In addition, the author also wrote about the settings that he likes to eat. He mentioned that top players gave the best evaluations, but by the time the second copy was settled, S evaluations became the standard for great masters. The routine was too old. At the end of the second volume, a certain Bai Wushen jumped out and wanted to take the protagonist as his younger brother. I guess the protagonist didn't care about him later, and then he was anxious to get the protagonist and was rubbed. When I saw the second volume, I felt numb. A wizard refused to cast spells, and the whole process was a level A instant kill. I had never seen the Murloc in the first copy for fear of destroying it, so I couldn't study it. I had already studied the second one, and then I faced more than 20 monsters and managed to win it in melee combat.

Is this really a cool article? After reading Chapter 56, I didn't feel any pleasure at all, and the witchcraft was not used. Instead, the story about the woman being fucked made me so sick.

The protagonist didn't use any witchcraft in the early chapters, and it was outrageous. He was purely a melee fighter. And the North Pole, what kind of team had to go to QJ with a female partner when the temperature was dozens of minus? How can this be a force with a special mission? Aren't we afraid of someone trying to figure it out in the middle of the job?

Plant some seeds and wait for the harvest. .

It's just a monkey, and then he plays tricks on a group of monkeys, and then the monkeys are surprised, which is boring! The most annoying thing is the live broadcast.

Protagonist: Wang Ya

In the reward building, I will reward myself once on the first floor. Don't ask me why, because... The double guns will give the answer!

Selling dog meat for sale? The wizard cuts with a knife? I'm not saying that you can't research well when writing a protagonist, but you can do research after you use witchcraft to level up, right? If you push me with a machete, why don't you call me a wizard? A wizard who lived for more than 100 years before being promoted would waste his time hacking his enemies to death with one knife and then wasting his time on dissecting and studying them?

I couldn't stand it when I read the Zhao Xue chapter. It could even be said that it disgusted me. But I didn't want to say that this book was rubbish or badly written. Objectively speaking, for a new book, it was OK in all aspects. It's just that I didn't like such a plot, so I'm sorry that I don't want to continue to follow it. Alas... It's really a pity.

The main plot is unclear, the wizards and wizards cannot be written clearly, the thriller game cannot be written clearly, the settings are piled up, and the writing is too scattered I suggest the author read The Super Mechanic It is not that the writing of The Super Mechanic is very good. Take a look at the results of Super Mechanic yourself, and then learn how to maintain the main line. The plot in it is clear at all times. The most basic main line of a penis is to grow, then fight monsters and upgrade, and throw away less settings. If you have to come up with a For these settings, try to be as concise and concise as possible Try not to make the settings too troublesome, let's not make them too complicated. This is true whether you are a super mechanic or a book with good grades such as Samsara Paradise. It does not mean that it is too complex or too convoluted. A simpler setting can actually give people a better experience. A more profound impact, for example, if you mentioned the former is a blood cow, and you mentioned the latter is a beheaded girl, and then continue to deepen this setting in subsequent plots If the branch plot affects the main plot, Qi Peijia's approach is to throw it away directly, which is more typical The method is that there is a car repair shop in the early stage of the game. The female boss becomes a passerby because the branch plot is too scattered and may affect the perception of the main plot. I think this is a very, very smart point, and this book,,,,,, How can readers have so much time? There are enough branches to develop a grand world view, but if you can't control it and it affects the main line, then you will be completely helpless and abandon the book. 88

I hope I can pick up this book and revise it if I have time in the future. The early part of this book is very interesting, but the later part is not as exciting as it was in the early part. It doesn't have the same feeling of wanting to stop reading.

It's too fucking cool, so I don't write about the real thing. Each picture must deliberately describe the environment and the status of some unrelated characters. Occasionally, it describes the inner activities of other characters to set it off. It's disgusting to do this in every picture. The biomagnetic field collision can be brushed off in one sentence without having to write every time. Are you writing a narrative or a novel? What the novel ultimately wants is that everything cannot be passed and there must be room for imagination.

Three days of fishing and two days of posting. This is the attitude of my first book, and it's also good. Find a factory to make screws as soon as possible. You won't be able to do this job of writing.

Could you please stop writing supporting roles all the time? Verbose

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What's going on lately? All the books I'm following are eunuchs.

There are so many barrages that I feel like vomiting. . .

I suspect that the author is cheating on monthly tickets, but I have no evidence

Brother, don't be a eunuch, keep chasing me, eunuchs have bad character.

Why did you get to the front of Chapter 192? I bought it but can't read it 😭

It's the third day and there are only four pieces of nonsense. Is this called seven updates?

Author: I think you can read the book "Wizards Can Gather"