I Keep Going Back in This Weird World

The beginning is tense and exciting, and the whole story is high-energy, then it becomes funny and humorous, and then it is inexplicably childish, and I have no idea what style the author wants to take. The interaction between the protagonist and Qi Ling and the reactions of the people around him, as well as the mutual lock-in when they meet, are very much like a third-rate urban love drama. If you still want to write about the beauty of love, it will only become more childish in this cannibalistic world of yours, not to mention that Qi Ling is still the captain. Personally, I suggest that all the chapters after the opening be rewritten and written in the style of the opening, or perhaps salvaged. Comedy and urban emotional drama won't work in your world.

Due to recent confusion in my mind, the contents of the first dozen chapters have collapsed. I am currently working overtime to make changes. I will work hard to write a qualified and excellent book. Please look forward to it together and I will not let you down for too long.

The last book was signed at 5 points, signed, 3000 words in 30 days, 100 investors, put on the shelf and completed. If you understand, you can consider getting on the bus and earn 5% with guaranteed capital.

The captain's mouth was so sweet that people left unconsciously.

The protagonist is a person with little brains and little wisdom.

I thought it was pretty good at the beginning. I quite liked the horror atmosphere, but later on when it got closer to the funny side, it just felt average. Just watch it first. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes.

Damn it, you signed the contract just after I invested. It's outrageous that you didn't get it.

Ahem, although I watched it yesterday, it's not too late to leave a comment now. It's indeed okay. So, I'll save it first? Come back when it's on the shelves!

Why are there so few updates? You don't know how to be a eunuch?

I invested 1,000 and felt like I was losing money.

With such a powerful rollback, the author should write about the background of the mysterious resurgence world, hehe

Keep the claws🙂