Attack of the Cities

After reading the introduction, everyone has a city after the age of 18. Are the residents ghosts? 🤫Everyone is an empty city. A city with only children? Can there be children in so many cities?

The protagonist has two golden fingers, rebirth and special buildings. It seems to be relatively restrained at present. He died quickly in his previous life and does not know much information. The special city does not seem too outrageous at present, but it has no shortcomings. There are cheats, but cheats serve to promote the plot, which is good. The plots of too many cool novels are to assist the upgrade of cheats. They constantly speed up the pace in order to only create cool points, but in the end they can only crash and kill people. I hope the author will not embark on this road of no return. In the current combat power, everything is centered on the city, and people are just the screws of the city. We hope to highlight the role of people and add a certain extraordinary system so that people and the city can interact, adding to each other or restricting each other. Resource dungeons like iron sand look very immersive. I hope more types of dungeons can be set up, such as those for advanced materials and special technologies. You can add the business elements of the Great Voyage game, mining - running business - making money - adding technology - fighting monsters - digging more advanced mines. The setting of the ruins is not very successful. Maybe it has been played badly in ordinary monster spawning dungeon games. There is nothing special about the main continent at present, except for rumors that there will be more disasters, but the risks are proportional to the benefits. Whether there will be more unimaginable gains is the focus of the next expectation The benefits of urban upgrading are currently only greater, the social division of labor is clearer, and industrialization is more complete. It is expected that after the three stages, each city can develop a unique route due to different encounters.

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Regarding the reader's perception of the proportion of the protagonist's effort and gain in a plot—— When the gain is about the same or less than the effort, the reader will feel that there is something wrong with the author's IQ. When the gain is only less than 20% more than the effort, the reader will feel that the author is cheating on the word count. The gain ratio When the effort is five times more, the readers will think that the author is writing a normal plot. When the reward is more than twice the effort, the readers will think that the author has written a somewhat smart protagonist. Note: When the protagonist has to risk his life in this plot, if the reward is less than five times the reward, readers will think that the author is mentally ill - even capitalists need three times the profit before they are willing to risk their lives. How can your protagonist [because he is substituted by the readers, so he must reach the level that the readers have beautified], can be worse than a capitalist?

I have some ideas about the theme, but there are too many bugs and setting problems that make it uncomfortable to watch

I feel that the city lord's self-protection ability is too poor and ordinary people can kill him. There is absolutely no means of restraint on the citizens

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It's too watery, it's all on the shelves. Also, there is one chapter for an alliance, and one chapter for an item, and three chapters for upgrades. I have been introducing this and that 😳

There are too many explanations and it seems so boring. You have to believe that the readers are not zz and write more plots! I think the essence of farming writing lies in accumulation and change. Fighting, interpersonal relationships can be relatively weakened. Personal opinion

The title of this book reminds me of the anime I watched in the past, "Steel Shell City Reggios"