Attack of the Cities
进击的城市
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 726k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Subgenre
- Apocalyptic Crisis
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
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238Chapters
8kRecommendations
22.9kFans
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The description says everyone has a city after turning 18, but are the residents ghosts? 🤫 They're all empty cities. Cities only with children? With so many cities, how can they possibly compete for children?
The protagonist has two cheat abilities: rebirth and a special building. So far, they seem relatively restrained. He died quickly in his previous life and didn't know much, and the special city doesn't seem too outrageous, just lacking any weaknesses. He has cheat abilities, but they serve to advance the plot, which is good.
Regarding readers' perception of the ratio of effort to reward in a storyline— When the rewards are roughly equal to or less than the effort put in, readers may think the author has intellectual problems. When the reward is less than 20% higher than the effort, readers will feel that the author is padding the word count.
The theme is creative, but there are too many bugs and problems in the setting, making it difficult to watch.
The city lord seems to have very poor self-defense capabilities; an ordinary person could easily kill him. He has absolutely no means of controlling the city's residents.
This is so weak! It's already listed, and it's still so long-winded. One chapter for the alliance, one chapter for the item, and three chapters for the upgrade. It's just constantly introducing this and that. 😳
There's been too much explanation; it's become quite dry. You have to trust that the readers aren't idiots; write more plot! I think the essence of farming novels lies in accumulation and change. Fighting and interpersonal relationships can be relatively downplayed. Just my personal opinion.
The title of this book reminds me of the anime "Chrome Shelled Regios" that I watched in the past.
Good subject matter, keep up the good work, hope you persevere.
The premise is good, and the story is decent, but the writing style is noticeably inferior to that of some new authors. If the author wants to improve their performance, they should definitely work on their writing.