One Upgrade Point a Day

The biggest advantages and disadvantages of this book all come from the biggest feature of this book: Reality. The world is real, the angles are real, the characters are real ■The world is real The structure and logic of the worldview are quite reasonable, there will be no inconsistencies, and the characters can easily jump out of the frame (such as primary school students who can write advanced math questions casually) and other plots. For example, when reading this book, you cannot substitute the worldview of other immortal novels or real life into it. You must imagine that you have really traveled through the past and faced a completely unfamiliar world. Otherwise, you will not be able to understand the protagonist's actions at all. (This is one of the reasons why this book was criticized. Of course, the nature of the criticism is that too many readers take it for granted) For example, many readers feel that even if they don't understand how to practice, they can just fumble around and it will not do any harm to the body. I feel that when entering a sect, you should show your potential so that you can be vigorously cultivated. What these readers say can be said to be correct, but the premise is that this book conforms to the worldview of these readers. Often when readers read this book, the world view of the book has not yet been developed. The protagonist does not understand the world at all, does not know how to practice, does not know whether this is a peaceful and fair world, and does not know whether this is a world with channels for advancement. That's why the protagonist didn't dare to take the risk of physical injury to practice, so he just stayed put when he entered the sect and chose to wait and see before making any plans. "If you can calm down and read this book slowly, you will have a deep sense of immersion and like the feeling of slowly exploring a new world" ■The perspective is real If you say that it feels like reading other novels, the author is like a god in the sky, observing the protagonist as an ant, helping the protagonist when he is in trouble, and pranking the protagonist when he is in a bad mood. In this book, the author is like a monitor installed in the protagonist's body, unable to interfere with the protagonist or external things, and can only record the protagonist's life silently. For example, in other books, when the protagonist needs a foundation-building pill, a way to obtain the foundation-building pill appears inexplicably. When the protagonist builds a foundation, he happens to encounter a secret realm that can only be entered by building a foundation. In this book, the protagonist does not have that much "luck", there will be failures, there will be misses. With repeated difficult attempts and my own golden fingers, I made breakthroughs little by little, from zero to one, from one to one hundred. Of course, it is not necessarily true that the protagonist has no luck at all. If there was no luck at all, this book would not be able to be written at all. But compared to the "luck" that seems fake at first glance in other books, I prefer to call the protagonist of this book "survivor bias" I saw a chapter comment before: How about the protagonist, isn't it arranged by the author? Although this is true, what I saw in this book is that the author did not deliberately arrange anything for the protagonist. This made me feel more immersed in the protagonist. This book has many first-person perspectives and is filled with the inner drama of the protagonist. It is full of the protagonist's thinking, exploration and research on unknown things. For example, if the protagonist obtains a seed, the protagonist in other books will take it for granted that watering is enough. In the end, the protagonist succeeds, which seems inexplicable and the protagonist is "lucky". The protagonist of this book will conduct comparative experiments on multiple seeds by watering, fertilizing, using spiritual energy, etc. To obtain the results. This feels much more reasonable. "A real world, plus a real perspective, I think many men in science and engineering will like this kind of research feeling" ■The characters are real This is also the biggest highlight and highlight of this book. The protagonist is like a real person. He can love, hate, be lazy, fight, be touched, regret, be angry, be irrational, deceive himself and others, fight for the one he loves, and put down the butcher knife. I was lazy at the beginning and didn't want to work. In order to convince myself, I even gave an excuse that it hurt. Limited by the geographical location, the "stupidity" of adults, and the inability of children, I have been able to travel for so long without gaining anything. The protagonist here is so real, just like everyone here has traveled through the past. (Don't rush to deny it, let me ask you, how many times have you helped your parents with housework? Do you dare to change the brand-name shoes on your feet to other brands and walk around in front of your classmates and colleagues?) The reason for being criticized here is essentially that everyone does not want to see the reality of themselves and does not like to see such a protagonist. It is also because the author did not handle it well (at the beginning, a protagonist who knew nothing about it grew up, but the author did not find a good reason), but fortunately, this little poison disappeared. Compared with other novels, the protagonist is always rational, always optimistic, and always decisive in killing. The protagonist of this book is more like a human being. Normally rational, but when encountering something that deeply touches you, encountering intolerable insults, or meeting someone you like, you will go crazy. Usually, he kills decisively, but when he encounters a person in distress who looks familiar to him, and sees the tears shed by others due to helplessness, he will help and put down his butcher knife. The frustration of this book basically comes from the cautiousness of the protagonist. The fun of this book basically comes from the protagonist's "madness" to break through himself The relationship between the characters in this book is also very smooth, and slowly heats up with the interaction with the protagonist. Well, that means wives. None of the protagonists in this book seem to have any good gay friends. There is no such thing as love at first sight, but more of love over time. Instead of Bai Fumei falling in love with a poor boy, it's more about the poor boy slowly turning into a tall, rich and handsome man, and thereby winning his heart. Instead of being confidant at the beginning, he slowly tested and gradually became confidant. The supporting characters in this book are also very real. The IQ is not low, the behavior is logical, and it is the author's description and control of human nature in this desperate world. "When reading other books, I feel like I am bringing in puppets, but here I am bringing in real people" ■The reason why the results are not so good 1. The characters are too real, real people have shortcomings, and readers don't like shortcomings 2. A bit slow to warm up, Internet articles are more fast-paced, and I left the first few chapters if I didn't like it 3. It is more mature in thinking, suitable for people over 20 years old, who have been beaten by society, and the proportion of such people in the readership is not high Of course, the above three points are not absolute, because Qidian users are huge, and there are definitely many people who like to read this novel. Some novels that are more popular than this are also very popular. The problem is that the readership group does not match the target readers of the novel, that is, the people who come in after seeing the cover, title, and introduction are different from the people who like to read the novel. Personally, I thought this was a novel for beginners at first, but it turned out not to be the case. I felt uncomfortable reading it at the beginning, but after reading a few chapters, I found it to be quite interesting. (I personally like to read about people struggling to survive in the apocalypse, so I think this novel is quite to my liking) Suggestion: The introduction can be changed so that people can know the characteristics of the book (real struggle to survive) at a glance. Don't change the title of the book, it's too risky. In addition, the golden finger of this book can also be regarded as a feature, which is quite interesting, but compared to the world view and struggle for survival, the golden finger is not that big a feature. ■Summary Don't read it for elementary school students and junior high school students. High school students, college students, and graduate students can watch it. Recommended for those who have been in society for more than one year. Recommended for science and engineering men who like analysis and research. Highly recommended if you can calm down and watch it slowly. "If you can calm down and read this book, a real world, a real perspective, a real protagonist, the sense of immersion will be really deep" ■ A small complaint about the author No matter how realistic the description of this book is, I still like it. Don't write about wife dying and minotaur content. Although it is reasonable, this is an online article after all. I am here to make you happy, not to make you feel uncomfortable. So even if there are no signs yet, I still have to give you a piece of advice: Don't write tragedies! Don't write about tragedy!

The character started out lazy, with an ordinary appearance, but also engaged in skin whitening and skin care. The main reason was that he came from a poor family and did not have enough to eat and did not help the family. In reality, in this era of scarce food, he was either thrown away or beaten to death for wasting food, which discouraged most people.

The protagonist reflects on why he ended up like this, what he lacks, and says that he would be too weak if he cultivated immortality. In fact, the protagonist has just been dreaming, imagining that he can cultivate immortality and find a few fairies. What about the action? The so-called actions are his doings. What does the golden finger have to do with you? The so-called preparations are just self-made sunscreen mud. There is a hammock in the east of the village. I fell off the bed while doing immortal fighting. I was injured and worshiped the immortals. I was mentally prepared to kill. I have been working in the mine for two years. Isn't it because of the earthquake that I was planning to leave after feeling satisfied? After being hungry for three days, you met someone, you lay on the ground waiting for someone to save you, you were touched, and then you took a shovel and robbed the person who was guarding the carriage. Who gave you the courage and brains? At this time, it is described in the car that the lady sees that you are half a grown-up and gives you money. It is possible that the lady will give you money, but your IQ is beyond words, and most of the guards will cut you off. You are about to die, but you are still dreaming of becoming an immortal, with the arrogance of an immortal. Before a person cultivates immortality, he has the self-esteem and lustful intentions of an immortal. Look at my fair and tender skin. When I was a child, I never went to the fields. I collected mud by the river for sun protection and skin care. I waited for the immortals to fall on the hammock in the east of the village. I thought that I would be injured and prayed for immortality. , Only now did he know that he was an immortal and illiterate. He changed hands and entered the mine three times, and set a three-year period. After three years, the outstanding children in the mine can enjoy the pleasure of women. The protagonist vowed to escape as soon as possible, fearing that he would be haunted by inner demons. He would have nothing to befriend, owe nothing, and would not be affected by karma. After having enough food and growing up, he would stay for a while. In the blink of an eye, after two years, he would be singing and mining alone. Because of his long body, he was very good. Three years later, there was an obscene incident. An earthquake hit Happy Mining. The way out was blocked. I added some shovels and dug diagonally. I encountered a cave and picked up secret books. I didn't know how to read. I escaped and ascended to heaven. It had been three days since I'd been on the road. I suddenly saw someone coming. I hid my things. I lay on the ground and waited for someone to save me. I saw ten people on the opposite side. One person came forward and touched his clothes. Then he called the protagonist a poor beggar. The protagonist felt that he was going to starve to death and his brain was probably crazy. He picked up the shovel. Robbery of a passing car, a team leader, a maid, a coachman and four servants, the servant (guard) carries a knife and asks for a card. The lady is kind and gives a bag of silver. I don't know how many ten taels there are, and how many protagonists can be bought. The protagonist is arrogant in cultivating immortals, so he asked for half of the silver, and asked for some food for the rest, leaving the iron piece behind, saying that in the future I will be successful, look for it with the iron piece, and turn to me for help. I will definitely repay today's kindness. The protagonist was sold because he was lazy and never left the village. He thinks about cultivating immortals every day, lies in the hammock every day waiting for the immortals, and thinks about fairies. What I did was whitening and skin care.

This book is too long-winded and boring, and why must those who cultivate immortality have to be fair and pure? Cultivation of immortality was not officially started until it was put on the shelves. The protagonist is just a small fish and shrimp in the world of immortals, and he goes back to the mortal world to repay his kindness? Repaying a favor and bringing up a lot of nonsense, so is this the Holy Mother?

There are many people in the book review section who claim that it takes bookworms of more than ten years to understand the connotation of this book, which really makes me laugh. The whole lazy dog ​​protagonist has given many people a sense of empathy In order to have fair skin and make it easier to hook up with so-called "fairies" in the future, I never help the family. . . . Is this the logic of normal people? I'm speechless.

Read 100 chapters 1. Too much nonsense. It was okay in the early stage, but it won't work all the time. From the next 50 chapters, it feels like it's all nonsense to make up the word count. Who wants to read your life experience in a fairy tale? Even if you understand it, you can't follow it chapter by chapter. Don't you know you are tired from reading? 2. Invincible Golden Finger, written by the author as a frustrating article 3. Super slow, 100 chapters to 5 levels of Qi training, 4. The environment for cultivating immortals is suppressed. First of all, I saw that only 100 disciples will be accepted every 100 years. I thought it was because the world of cultivating immortals was exhausted, so that's why. Then the disciples accepted were only a large number of related households, that chapter I wanted to run away, but I endured it. It was mainly because of the golden finger that kept me going. Later, I heard that there was also a war for the human race, and the handymen like pigs and dogs had to die. The more I looked at it, the more frustrated I became.,, When humans are still at war, they still recruit 100 people in 100 years, and they are not based on qualifications. All kinds of logical flaws and frustrations really make it impossible to persist.

People cannot, and should not, be so verbose. One sentence requires two pages of explanation. Incomprehensible verbosity.

I really can't stand it. The male protagonist kills the enemy camp, makes all kinds of saucy hype, and kills nearly 1,700 male cultivators. However, when he encounters a female cultivator who also cares about human life, the male protagonist starts to lick her. . . They hugged and hugged each other, and the author also added an inner monologue, to the effect that he couldn't let go after seeing the other person's helpless, hazy, tearful eyes. . . It's so embarrassing for a man. . .

After reading so many fairy tale novels, and countless mortals or losers starting out, this protagonist is the first one that made me feel that a person is really a loser mentally. From the first few chapters, the protagonist pays the most attention to maintaining his appearance and maintaining the appearance of a so-called immortal cultivator. I didn't want to make money and left home to seek immortality. In the end, I left my hometown because I was sold by my parents. Are you a fucking immortal? Cultivation of immortality relies on brain power and luck, right? There is no system to send it, right? How can such a protagonist be attractive? It's all about adding points and holding it in your mouth. It has no charm at all. You still want to write about the sufferings of the world, so you write a book like this? Don't you look back at your writing? After a few chapters, there is a plot of one chapter, with all kinds of incomprehensible thoughts of the protagonist. We don't see a little bit of the suffering of the people, we only see that the protagonist's family is poor, and then change the map? You are so good

I took it, it's really poisonous. The handyman can't be promoted to the disciple. Now I have written chapter 70 and I am still at the first level of Qi training. It is said that if you rise too fast, you will be caught and used as a guinea pig. When you enter the sect, you can talk about the handyman problem for chapter 10. You have always been talking nonsense. There is no one like you in the mortal stream. You obviously have good talents. Isn't it good to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger? Isn't it good to crush the stream? The writing style is really mediocre, and the best part is that it's all written in one stroke. However, he can ramble on for more than 10 chapters about useless nonsense, which is poisonous to death.