Stealing Immortality

The prologue is well written, but the protagonist's behavior at the beginning after discovering that he has no spiritual roots is too cliché, giving up on himself, and his character is not strong at all. After jumping off a cliff, he instantly transforms into a strong and optimistic type for the rest of his life. It is very abrupt and made me a little uncomfortable. It can be changed. For example, although I felt lost for a while, I was still willing to stick to martial arts and do odd jobs every day. Then a friend was also tested and found to have no spiritual roots. So I didn't know about the secret book that can lead to immortality at the beginning. I gained Wan Shan's trust first, and just escorted Wan Shan back to save people. I was interspersed with doubts about her, and I gradually understood it later. Just my personal thoughts 😁, because I only saw the protagonist and Wanshan being met by someone they knew and then running away

Write quickly! Too little and not enough to see!

The introduction looks quite high-end, but I don't know if it's good or not.

Author, does this book really have a single female protagonist?

I have read all of Xixi's books. In my heart, you are a great god. You are worthy of your name. I hope you can persevere and persevere. One day you will shine.

I'm here, like it before I even start

Isn't it popular but not popular? Do you want to try writing cool articles? I really like your writing style.