This Is Not Sword Rain

Jianghu Youyou? Level 58 Level 6 Tianxin front row

The content concept is quite novel, but the content is a bit messy. The whole story was so vague that I couldn't see the reasons why the protagonist did what he did, what he got after doing these things, and how the incident would lead to the next one after it passed. In addition to the confusing plot, the background characters are also relatively confusing. What you can see is that the background and characters you introduced in the foreshadowing are strongly inconsistent with the background and characters shown in the plot development in the article. The last point only represents my reading preferences, that is, I feel that the protagonist is very aggrieved, and the protagonist's plot is very strong. I also read the first ten chapters very well. I was able to come and go freely in the Jianghu affairs, and I was very free and proud; but the plot of the blood sacrifice of the blood clan felt like it from the beginning. It has changed. Although the background of the protagonist is still awesome, all the events start with the protagonist's ignorant participation, the protagonist's ignorant acceptance, and then the protagonist's ignorant ending. Of course, the author himself may want to write this kind of nonsensical Cthulhu text. Well, anyway, the shortcoming of reading this book now is that the content is quite confusing. No matter whether the author wants to write a normal Cthulhu or a nonsensical Cthulhu, if you sort out the plot content and write the plot in an orderly manner, with these new content ideas, the book will probably be a hit.

Advantages: The writing is very imaginative and innovative, which is worthy of praise. After all, many great masters nowadays are stuck in old routines (such as a certain potato) Disadvantages: 1. The background is too complicated. In fact, it is best to just ignore it, because many characters in the book exist in film and television dramas and history, and people have preconceived ideas and fixed images in their hearts. 2. The power system is too complicated. Zombies, monsters, etc., Such as internal power and supernatural powers, must have a complete statement! The writing is messy and makes people unable to read it (I wrote so much because I like this book more, personal bias, don't criticize if you don't like it)

The realm of kung fu, I think, should be the acquired level, which strengthens physical fitness, exercises internal strength, strengthens the body, and strengthens the five senses. The innate level, both physical fitness and lifespan reaches the limit of human beings. It is equivalent to more than ten times the physical fitness of normal people and can live for more than two hundred years. Internal strength is transformed into true energy, which is true. The Qi body is invulnerable, just like wearing an invisible armor. The true Qi can leave the body to form shock waves, slashing and other attacks. Grandmaster level, separated from mortals, has a physical quality dozens of times that of a normal person. It has a lifespan of 800 to a thousand years. Start to gather the will of martial arts and combine one's own will with the true Qi. The fusion is transformed into Gang Qi. With the strengthening of Gang Qi, the physical body can break through the speed of sound. The power of a kick and a kick is comparable to a missile. And Gang Qi is the fusion of one's own will and true energy, so it can hurt the soul. In other words, if you hit you, not only will your body be injured, but your soul will also be severely damaged. The divine level, Martial arts connects to the gods, and supernatural powers are self-generated. The body begins to be energized. It no longer needs to eat and drink. It can directly absorb the energy around the body to maintain daily needs. The will begins to interfere with reality. The will of martial arts develops into corresponding magical powers. The magical powers can continue to evolve and be perfected, with a life span of thousands of years.

This book is too messy. There are too many worldviews stitched together in the early stage. It is better to go through them one by one in the early stage, and then stitch them together later. Now the plot is almost running at the same time. When there is no plot later, more will be added, and it will only become more and more chaotic. Fans and originals are all combined together, and the iron collapses. And there are too many characters now. Many of the characters are written and then disappeared. For example, Zeng Jing was written about her injury and lay on the bed for a long time without any mention. It was not mentioned at all later. It was too confusing.

Please tell us the protagonist's original identity. Otherwise, you'll be running around like a fool. Amnesia plots are not fun, and the author's attempt to suppress information will only confuse readers.

What a contradiction. The protagonist traveled through time a year ago, and Golden Finger was only activated a year later. It turns out that the protagonist just managed to do a lot of things on his own during this year. He became a master in one year, took the daughter of the leader of the Demon Sect, became a disciple of a powerful disciple, and obtained the Divine Sword. It's like a heifer standing on its head.

Since I read this book, I got 100% on my math test

Yes, yes, but the writing is a bit confusing, and Yingji is a vassal state of Ojing, and suddenly there is the fragrance of rice in the nine heavens, what else is there about Emperor Yan? I want to ask, how many cards have you made in such a fast and big power system, and have you reached this point?

I've been stitched up like this, but I'm still looking for coordinates in a history that's already riddled with holes. How tiring. Look at the categories, I specially chose "Fantasy Cultivation"! Explain to me what fantasy means! Please refer to me for all settings. Thanks.

The setting is good and the writing is good, but the plot is scattered and the setting of world forces is problematic. The main plot is not very clear. You can read it, but you can't pick it up if you throw it away.

This book fits the title very well. This is indeed not a rain of swords.

The writing is smooth, and more than 90% of the authors have a problem with the mixed martial arts setting being too stretched, and the martial arts are not systematic. It seems that the author is just writing for fun. He obviously has writing talent, but he just doesn't calm down and write well. It's a bit of a pity.

As I looked at it, I didn't know what I was looking at. It was so scattered that I couldn't even find the main thread.

There are a lot of inserted things, and the world view is too big, but I think it's quite interesting. It's rare to see something fresh like this.

300,000 Words. The whole world celebrates. I will try my best to write the following plots in more detail. Then narratively I am also growing. Everything is as single-threaded as possible without involving too many characters. The protagonist's goal is also more clear. It eliminates the "inexplicable" and confusing writing where the author directly interacts with the readers. Of course. Even if it is hidden driving, it still cannot be driven. I tried it... I gave up.

After reading this introduction, the author is the legendary person who thinks that four cups of 25-degree water mixed together will become 100-degree water? The math teacher is on his way to the author's house with a ruler in hand...

Sorry, the plot is unfolding furiously. Isn't this martial arts? Who am I and where am I? Why do I, an innate master, suffer in the world of Sword Rain? Anyone can comment? Is this how people live? I am a martial artist, my enemy is fantasy! This is not fair!

Emmm, it's a good book So, the female donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, please update me quickly! ! ! ! ! !

There is too much inserted content, it is difficult to manage, it looks like just one word, it is messy.

It's well written, but the setting is too confusing, and it's getting more and more confusing!

The writing process is full of humor, and the pace of upgrading is also good. The background is slightly messy but completely acceptable. It is not popular yet but has great potential. Come on, author😊

I went back and looked at some of the scenes where the male and female protagonists were together, and found that the cuts were quite serious... The original text was almost 2,300 words, and in the end it was only 1,900 words. So, when the male and female protagonists are together, if you feel that the plot is torn apart and the preface does not match the follower, then you must have been fooled.

It is recommended that the author set a fan value to limit speech. If they get tired of it, or create a group and let them make noise in the group

Just looking at it made me confused.

Does the author have an outline? Can you handle writing like this?

In the later stage, you can also join the Young Song Xing. It is purely related to the realm, and the combat power is still a bit high.

Can anyone tell me what the protagonist's character is like?

Miaoyi can't understand it, it feels strange

The writing is okay, but there are too many world plots and it seems a bit confusing. You can finish one or two and then open another two. This way it won't look messy and the rhythm can be easily controlled. It is best not to have more than three plots appearing at the same time, and foreshadowing does not count.