My Girlfriend and I Traveled Through Time

I don't know what the author was thinking. I was originally here to read sweet articles, but you turned it into a sadistic sadomasochism. I'm really speechless. Let me tell you the plot for those who haven't seen it. The male and female protagonists actually traveled 20 years apart, so the female protagonist didn't wait for the male protagonist. Then in fact, the male protagonist is the legacy of the former emperor and has a younger sister. Then the brother and sister recognized each other and the female protagonist saw it at the same time. In addition, after 20 years of difference, she felt that the male protagonist had broken the promise and betrayed her, so she went dark 😁. After that, the male protagonist discovered the time difference in time travel, and then he felt that he owed the female protagonist even though he had done nothing wrong. Please forgive me, the heroine turned into the classic Riddler plus Iceberg, and she screamed and killed when she saw the hero. Good guy, don't you think the plot writer is stupid? 😁, it's really messed up. Except for the 20-year time travel difference, which is a good setting, all the plots are forced to torture the protagonist, and the fresh style in the early stage is gone. There are a lot of rubbish side plots about the emperor and the capital, and the heroine disappears directly. Is this what we want to watch? Spending 20 yuan to read a book turns out to be followed by history. It's so fucking disgusting.

It doesn't work well, the plot connection is abrupt and disconnected. . . .

I have a question. The heroine knows the monk, maybe she knows about the Demon Sealing Conference. After practicing for 20 years, I can reach the middle or upper level. In this way, the heroine can easily think of the 20 years difference after the Demon Sealing Conference. In addition, the bloodline of Emperor Violence has just appeared

I hope this one won't be as poisonous as the last one. Su Yan's Billions of Essences are really poisonous. This one is about double penetration, and you are not alone. You have a hairy harem. Could you please imitate Su Zhanmei?

Just have a harem, don't have a single heroine

As a reader, I have very strange tastes. I don't like to read the works of famous writers, but I like to read books by tepid writers because I enjoy watching those authors gradually grow into great writers. In the past few years, I have witnessed the rise of several powerful writers. It is not because of my good taste. On the contrary, writers who can become great writers only account for a very small part of the authors of the books I have read. But I think you will be one of those few people. Although it sounds a bit ridiculous, I trust my intuition. So come on, author, you actually have a lot of room for improvement, and I hope you can get better and better in the future. I will support you with a subscription, just like I supported your last book.

Guess the author's subsequent achievements. The first is that it is impossible to have a heroine after losing your mind. The second is not to change the current trend, but stick to the harem line with around 3,000 subscriptions. The third is to take the advice of some readers and choose a single heroine with more than 5,000 subscriptions. These three situations are just speculations, because I really can't accept how there can be a third party between two people who are so fused. This kind of harem setting is really useless, and it is no different from other ordinary time travel stories. If you want to have a harem, it makes sense that you might as well make the heroine a native.

Please, is it okay to have a single heroine?

The author's setting is particularly suitable for writing solo female protagonists

According to the latest chapters, it is normal for the heroine to not know that the time difference is 20 years. The heroine is in a high-ranking Immortal Sect and does not have many close friends. Moreover, her sword does not allow her to directly inquire about Luo Jing. As for the Demon Mask, the hero is not directly involved and there is no need to inquire. Moreover, she probably will not wonder why no one gossips about the Western Region with her. It is normal that she has not heard about the wanted order. After waiting for 100 days, you should start practicing hard...

Keep it up first, make the relationship line clearer, either with multiple girls or single girl, don't make me feel uncomfortable like a monster.

Does the male protagonist have some masochistic tendencies? From the Soul Refining Sect to the Central Plains, there is no temper at all? When it's time to be anxious, a group of people should be calm. They know that their wives have misunderstood and are obsessed with it, so they express concern and say, "I have worked hard to practice, but my qualifications are too low," and then continue to do nothing. You were slapped in the face, and you just watched the senior output from the side without any expression at all? I repeated the process of being very anxious but not strong enough so I could only do it. Are you the reincarnation of some saint? No negative emotions at all? When you should calm down, you are like a reckless man. He has already obtained the secret technique of killing the soul, but you are eager to kill him in the toilet. Would it be possible to kill him if he cut it later? Maybe an hour later the entire timeline has changed. Let's talk about the plot. Let's ignore the trivial matter of how the heroine managed to pull a non-existent soul over 20 years ago. According to the current development of the story, the soul summoned by the male protagonist should be the human side of the female protagonist. Then after you kill it, the soul will return to the void directly? And you, the heroine, know everything and have seen everything, but in the end, you are just like the Riddler and say nothing useful. Are you following Allen? In order to keep the timeline unchanged, he ordered the giant to eat his own mother? Tianhu starts the game, and the result becomes more and more frustrating. The male protagonist keeps emphasizing that he has no qualifications, and that there is no way to speed up the practice of summoning gods. Can I understand that the male protagonist will be like a little white rabbit for a long time in the future, unable to do anything, and he will not be able to fight after 20 years of development, so he will continue to watch the sea?

Gan, we finally met, and we didn't even throw any sweets, and it was over immediately. I suggest you don't read it if you haven't read it yet. If you haven't finished it, just abandon it. It's a waste of time.

Sure enough, I was raised to death. I was very curious about how the author arranged the outline. In fact, I can understand that readers who follow this book are rushing to meet the male and female protagonists. Once they actually meet, the climax of the book has passed. Even if they continue to write, it will just be some daily sugar-coating. In fact, you can continue to delay the meeting. What readers can't stand is that the male and female protagonists misunderstand and abuse each other. It will be uncomfortable to watch, and it will be even more uncomfortable if you drag on until the misunderstanding is resolved. From an objective point of view, the twenty-year timeline of the foreshadowing plot is considered to be exquisite, but it is a pity that readers do not like to read it. Come on, work hard on your next book, don't let it suck.

Drive high and go low. Apart from the early part, what else can the subsequent part do besides being disgusting? The plot drags on and on. There is neither writing nor highlights. Apart from the fact that the fragmentation technique is far superior to ordinary people, it has no bright spots, and it can be said that it landed smoothly. I don't even know what I want to write. Random branch lines make branch lines dominate the scene.

I thought it was a sweet article, but I didn't expect it to be an abusive article.

The problem with double penetration is that the modern concept of the heroine dictates that it can only be a single heroine. . . How about writing more female protagonists later?

You can do it. The male and female protagonists are delayed from meeting each other until readers don't read it. It just ends right now, right? I really didn't expect it. I left this chapter to make a casual comment about "just delaying the meeting until the finale." It's a prophecy. I'm convinced, author, you can do it.

The more I watch, the more disgusting I feel for this heroine! That's fine. You have a younger brother? Male Protagonist: Can't I have a fucking sister? I also suspect that the male protagonist is in love with someone else! The hero still doubts you! Who is that white-haired person on your back? Oh brother! Next to me is my sister.

I feel that the advantage or feature of this book is that my wife also travels through time and her cultivation can be synchronized. A single female protagonist should be the best. It is actually acceptable to have a female supporting role, but if you open up a harem, I feel that this novel formula is a bit useless.

Author, you successfully hooked me 😭. Now I think about when the male and female protagonists will meet every day. Update soon!

Originally, I deleted the whole book, but I was still too angry to come back and complain about it. The previous writing was very good, but the author just couldn't write it. The number of words in each chapter was small, and it was published every three days. I can continue writing with a good outline. I am really convinced.

I thought the plot was quite interesting at first, but now it's too delayed. I've lost all desire to watch it. It's just that I plan to meet each other and it's over.

Let me guess, if the male protagonist exchanges his soul, the male and female protagonists will not be able to meet each other in their minds. The female protagonist 20 years ago misunderstood that the male protagonist betrayed his love for his sister, so the female protagonist's soul was very hostile to her sister at the beginning. The female protagonist must have misunderstood 20 years ago and now she knows that the timeline is wrong because of the little monk. That may be the case.

Please support me by ordering everything first. It's too uncomfortable not to be able to post comments. It's not necessary. Bro, if you're not allowed to post comments, you won't have time to post about where the popularity comes from.

Update it quickly, bastard 😆 Who can read this? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this!

Hope it doesn't deviate too much from the previous ones

The inexplicable sadistic rhythm in the middle, coupled with the long break time and lack of updated content, it is normal for readers to leave midway. This is a setting that could obviously be developed better, but I really didn't feel confident writing the outline like this.

If the male protagonist and female protagonist applaud👏👏👏👏 and then exchange memories...

Don't read this work as a dog food article! If you want to read it, don't read it as a dog food article! Otherwise, it will extremely affect the later viewing experience. If you want to read dog food articles, it's best to forget about it.