Monster Tokyo: My Figure Turned Weird

I feel that the author is not very familiar with Japanese urban legends about monsters. It can be said that he doesn't know much at all. The definition of the time when encountering a demon is wrong at the beginning. The legend of the slit girl does not have the classic question of whether she is beautiful or not, and there is no big scissors. It basically only accounts for the literal slit. And the name of the protagonist is even weirder. Not only is Li Xiaoyao, the king of demons, but the key is a fairy-like name, an identity in a tokusatsu drama, and it is not even a name. This drama has gone too far.

The main character's name is really interesting. One is Li Xiaoyao and the other is the King of Demonic Time. But he has a completely different personality from these two people. Very dramatic

It's both the King of Demons and Li Xiaoyao, so only one of them can't do it😄

Shennong tried the poison and died from the poison. The biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist has two names, one is Li Xiaoyao and the other is Feng Moshi Wang. The protagonist is not a Kamen Rider and does not have any abilities of King of Time. His name is just the King of Demon King!

The name of the protagonist is really a failure. The Japanese name is: Tomo Tokio. His surname is Tomo and Tokio. Chinese name before time travel: Li Xiaoyao. Except for their names, they have nothing to do with these two characters 😅😅 I really don't know what the author's two names are about. If you don't care, you will feel awkward at most when you look at these two names. If you don't, you will just be dismissed. Just to make a living?

The mountain ghost is so disgusted, really, this is a servant? Ancestor

This new character is really encouraging, and the writing makes me feel sick. I wanted to make it funny, but the writing was not good enough and I ended up being a paratrooper. If you don't understand this clearly and continue to enjoy yourself, then finally take your time and see for yourself.

Brother, I saw chapter 95 and I won't ask you any other questions. I only ask for one thing. Can you go back and revise the manuscript and wipe out Li Xiaoyao? You've been reborn. Forget about the name jumping around in the first 5 chapters. You've reached chapter 95 and you still have Li Xiaoyao meet the Demonic King. The experience is about to bottom out! ! !

Using a Chinese name in a Japanese story, especially the name Li Xiaoyao, is so dramatic that I really can't stand it. It's like a husky mixed in among a bunch of wolves. The painting styles are all different, and they are directly sewn together. They are out of place. It is really a bit embarrassing.

Mountain Ghost yyds, the father the author specially found for the protagonist

I accepted the substitution of the two names into the poisonous point. What is that mountain ghost? Forcibly find a father for yourself and feed it to readers💩?

At the time of evil, when hundreds of ghosts walk at night, gods drown, and roses wither, I will wait for you at the Huangquan figure shop.

Why put poison in a good place?

When will the mountain ghost die? If it exceeds 40 chapters, I won't read it. I don't understand. Does the author think there are too many readers?

Gaga

Is this new character Mountain Ghost here to disgust people? I'm afraid the author didn't write funny as S. B right? Really annoying

This so-called mountain god is a bit disgusting to me. After reading it, I subconsciously came to the comment section. It seems that I am not the only one who thinks so. It's better to deal with him quickly, it will greatly affect the perception.

The front part is okay, but the part in the back where the mountain ghost persuades people to retreat is very vicious.

The Erha character of this mountain god is so disgusting to me. Others don't know about this thing. I will skip the chapter now.

In order to complain about the mountain ghost, I subscribed to one. I really can't stand it when he comes out. I originally wanted to keep it, but I canceled it 😭😭😭

I think one of the biggest problems with this book is the name of the protagonist. After time travel, he can change it whenever necessary. Doesn't it make sense not to use the name before time travel? It's not like Wuwen has to keep traveling through different worlds, so he uses the name of his previous life.

Being able to see mountain ghosts is really amazing. I've only read Chapter 12 and I can't bear it anymore... It's really a pity, the setting is quite interesting, but the writing is really like dreaming back to the 2000s. Let me talk about what makes me feel uncomfortable, but I have only read 12 chapters, so there are few problems: 1. The protagonist's name is not consistent, which was a common problem in time-traveling in the past. It is true that some people still make this mistake, but I can still resist this. 2. The character's personality is not likeable. This is actually a problem with the writing style. The protagonist is an LSP, but the writing style is very wretched. Because we are bringing in the perspective of the protagonist, the description of other characters is from the perspective of the protagonist. If the author's writing is poor, the protagonist will appear wretched. Specifically, for example, the appearance of Yamamoto Junna in Chapter 12. Although there are only a few sentences of appearance description, the writing skills are fully exposed. To be honest, the writing style of the author writing about Nichi Qing is too delicate, so that the writing style is so rough that I feel very "poisonous". For details, you can look at the descriptions of the astringent parts of female characters in other Japanese novels. Writing the astringent parts actually requires very high writing skills. If it is not written well, it will be obscene. I hope the author's writing skills can be strengthened.

You can collect weird names, Japanese ghost legends, and urban ghost stories. According to this writing method, the pace is faster and these materials will be consumed quickly.

Does the protagonist named Feng Mo Shi Wang have that kind of strength and qualifications? The King of Demons is the king of time and has the power to destroy the world.

After reading fifty chapters, this book is just one short story after another, has the plot been completely abandoned?

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I just communicated with the editor and it will be available next Friday, the 24th. It is more basic to maintain 6,000 words per day after being put on the shelves. After that, it depends on the average order. If we can get 1,500 orders, we will keep updating 4 times. Now soliciting update time and update method. I personally prefer around 0:00, a warm little story before going to bed... However, if there is a better update time, please mention it under this post, and I will choose the appropriate update time based on the summary. In addition, there are other ways to update. You can't decide whether to choose the three-to-four-update mode of 2,000 words or the one-update mode of 6,000 or 8,000 words. So... Asking for your opinions, I will update based on your opinions.

Reading your book reminds me of an old eunuch who likes to write about the masterminds behind the scenes in Japan, but I guess not. After all, how could an old eunuch write two books on the same account?

Let's add more normal life to the story and polish the gaps between the stories. I want to see the story of the protagonist group, not the story that is inserted inexplicably, and the priority is confused.

Your paragraphing is really confusing. One story and the next story are seamlessly connected. It makes me confused sometimes when I listen to the book. Before I can react, it's the next story.