I, the Mechanical Pokémon Trainer

In Pokémon, the steel type represents the power of metal. What is the mechanical type?

Which cover is better?

For the mechanical department, I think you can make some of the ones in the Purcell, after all, there are quite a few in them.

Just reading the first few chapters, I can't stand it. There is such a big bug. It says that the protagonist's father is the authority and his mother is the assistant. He is strictly protected by the national government and cannot do anything evil. As a result, his own child was tricked and failed the test five times. As a parent, he didn't care? What kind of logic is this? It makes my brain bleed. I can write such a plot that doesn't make sense. Why does the mother have to quit her job to take care of the protagonist at home? Really convinced.

The mechanical settings are pretty good, but the plot seems a bit toxic.

Mechanical Pokémon, I'm not sleepy anymore, this is the invincible Sebadoragon! It is our duty to recast the glory of the electronic dragon

Ennn, the Dragon King Alliance is too useless. The protagonist's parents are so important, and the alliance has no other protection for their children.

Doesn't this area have its own Pokémon? Isn't there an exclusive Yusanjia? Are there no region-specific quasi-gods and mythical beasts? With none of these, how can we still call it an alliance? Are there unique skills for this area? You might as well write a parallel world of Pokémon or follow the original Pokémon world. The protagonist's profession can be a doctor or a researcher, but does it have to be a trainer? Does your mechanical department have its own quasi-god or mythical beast? Aren't all the original Pokémon mechanized? So what's there to see?

I think the steel type, electric type, and mechanical type go well with each other, but... How can an elf like Metagross, whose entire body is made of metal, be transformed into a machine type? ? ?

The setting is pretty good, but the Longhuang Alliance in the first chapter was too discouraging.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel like there is no bond with Pokémon at all. It's just like playing a game. Pokémon are just tools. In more than ten chapters, it feels like Pokémon don't have their own thoughts. It's a pity that the subject matter is pretty good.

Advice to the author: The subject matter is very good. I wonder if you have any awesome ability, it would be too boring if you just set up a "skin-reskinned Pokémon wholesaler system". Component replacement, transformation equipment, mechanical camouflage, elf combination, exchange of components (transfer evolution), parts upgrade... There are many ways to use Pokémon that do not violate the characteristics of Pokémon. Since it has been set up that Pokémon's life must be used as fuel, don't deprive it of the "mechanical" fun. After all, machinery and the source of fire are your themes, and Pokmon is at best an add-on. What attracts readers more than cookie-cutter things is the theme of mechanization. For example, if the protagonist designed the unicorn insect at the beginning, then why not learn mechanical technology? Or, after the protagonist has good technology, or in some name, let others create a better unicorn insect mechanical body, then it is natural for this unicorn insect to surpass the first one, right? You can also directly transfer the fire core if you cannot abandon it. After all, fire is the soul for Cybertron. Illegal modification, or imitating and replicating the unique technological organs of different Pokémon and transplanting them to other Pokémon, or creating a unique technology company as a unique buying point is not a problem, right? Even if the author places restrictions on the protagonist's ability, this ability can still play a great role. Machine, if you focus on Pokémon-style training, it will be nothing more than a mechanical pet or a war machine. Machine is the transformation of knowledge and wisdom. It becomes more powerful due to the accumulation of wisdom. It is the embodiment of civilization and human intelligence. It belongs to the group and can also become an elite force. ★ Summary of high emotional intelligence: As long as you open up the pattern and capture readers' preferences, you will be able to become a great work sooner or later. Come on, come on, come on! ★ Low EQ summary: I was attracted by the title. The articles on Pokémon are all the same. I want to see something new, gkd!

I really don't know what the meaning of writing this Ye Zishan is? Pure poison!

Isn't this Rotom? Rotom enters various machines and can give these machines life

This, has the five years in Chapter 1 passed? Your parents are in a confidential unit. You said that this is enough for one or two years, but no one noticed for five years? So how does the alliance ensure the loyalty of its own people?

How to hide bee girl? Everyone in the place where he was born knows that the protagonist's first Pokémon is a unicorn. Even if he doesn't use it, he also knows that Zuko has another Pokémon?

Mechanical Pokémon

I don't know where I got it from

To be honest, there are actually ways to add mechanical elements to the Pokémon world without changing the settings. For example, in the early stage, fossils are used to resurrect into mechanical fantasy beasts, and in the mid-term, some dead Pokémon are intercepted from reincarnation and transformed into mechanical fantasy beasts. In this way, the original skills can be retained, and some mechanical skills can be added by oneself.

I can only smile, isn't your machine made of TM steel?

Unsurprisingly, the launch has been delayed. We will keep updating four times during this period, and try to put it on the shelves on November 11. Not enough reading, so I have to put 300,000 words on the shelves. For new books, reading is everything. Please read them, recommend them, and collect them. Please…

It's a good idea, but your mechanical department is not perfect enough. Why do you only have cannon bombing, machine guns, sniper rifles, missiles, mines, radars, lasers, projections, 3D printing, sound waves, repairs, and body transformations as your skills? Why don't you use them more?

Dadi Nizi

A sword with sharp edges on both sides is practicing a straight slash? Even if you practice the salted fish lunge, this thing will be useful! The most suitable attack method of the sword itself is stabbing, but this sword is used for straight cutting. You might as well change to another knife. In the stalemate stage, you can hold the back of the knife and press it down. It is not like a sword. If you chop with someone with a certain amount of force, you can only release the force. If the opponent is too strong, you may be cut by your own blade.

Department of Mechanical Engineering? Then come Saiba Doragon, Saiba end Doragon

If upgrading and evolving were unique to the protagonist, then this would be a realistic Pokémon novel. If it weren't for others who also upgraded and evolved, then this book would be a novel about online games and game Pokémon covered in reality.

The subject matter is very good, but I won't comment on the content.

Not to mention anything else, it looks really awkward when you pick a name and keep using the ethnic name. If you want one, you don't have to be so stupid with the number of words.

I can't accept it, I feel like a lj

Am I mistaken? Real-life battles are the same as game battles. The reason why skills in the game have those values ​​is to better match skills and calculate damage. In real-life battles, many factors need to be considered.