The Ultimate Blade Shadow in One Piece Navy

The writing is pretty good, that's for sure, but the portrayal of the protagonist is not very good. The protagonist is a navy and preaches justice within his power. But now, I don't feel that the protagonist is fighting for justice. The protagonist has no respect and awe for life. It makes me feel that she is more like a pleasure thief who only disturbs and changes the world because of her own interests. It makes people feel that the protagonist is more disgusting than a pirate.

I've watched 36% of it so far, and I'm going to complain a little about my thoughts. It's actually quite good. I even have the urge to watch it, as I've never seen One Piece (it's too long). But there are so many typos that it makes me feel like I'm watching a pirated version. To put it bluntly, there is a typo in every chapter that may be unfair, and a typo in every other chapter must be missed ( Typos really affect the reading experience 😭

Highly recommended, not for anything else but the hope that more readers can experience the advantages of this book.

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Blade Shadow

With my aunt 😁 A graffiti, drawn based on impressions. By the end of the drawing, I couldn't remember what the lower body of my clothes looked like. If you draw it wrong... Then you draw it wrong 😠 In fact, I really like the plot of getting along with little Ace Luffy in this book 😅😅😅 While drawing, I suddenly remembered, is the scar on Luffy's face gone? ! No!

Adult

Damn, I'm speechless. The main character has been beaten up and deflated all day long. I thought he would finally rise after it was released on the shelves, but then Bai Tuan came out again. I was really speechless and extremely frustrated. He held the template of Blade Shadow in One Piece, but no one could beat him. I really threw up.

"Is the legend true?" In the dark dungeon, the ragged girl asked the senior next door. "It's true." A steady female voice came from the other side of the wall. The long-term torture seemed to have made her extremely weak. After taking a breath, she encouraged the junior next door: "It's absolutely true. One day, the person in the prophecy will destroy this decadent empire and bring salvation to everyone!" She opened her eyes. The long sword on the leg groaned softly, and the sharp breath reverberated in the air, one after another, and finally formed a tornado of sword energy that swept the world. The animals on the plains screamed and ran wildly, trying to avoid this inexplicable natural disaster. The four elements of light, darkness, ice, and fire flowed slowly, gathering in the long sword like a swallow returning to its nest, like hundreds of rivers returning to the sea, and like ten thousand swords returning to their clan. Suddenly, with her as the center, an extremely powerful momentum erupted, sweeping across hundreds of miles, accompanied by terrifying pressure: the wildebeest was suspended, its front legs raised high, and it was running wildly with hoofs. There was still panic on its face, and the flying soil solidified in the air. The whole world seemed to have pressed the pause button. "What kind of realm is that?" The girl continued to ask "Well..." The woman next door raised her head, and the dark red bloodstains and stains remaining on the ceiling seemed to make a silent mockery of her. She opened her mouth slightly, and then said in a dreamy tone: "I don't know what kind of realm that is. In such a realm, is there still a way to go beyond the Sword Sect? Many people have thought about it and tried it, but most of them have died. Until now, no one has ever taken that step, not even a glimmer of hope..." "Then there is no hope for us?" The girl lowered her head in frustration. "No!" The senior next door seemed to suddenly become excited, "There will definitely be, there will definitely be someone who reaches that state!" "The wind erodes the heart, the stars penetrate the clouds, and the starlight reflects the shadow of the sword. The scorching sun falls, and I travel thousands of miles, but my sword cannot cut it. "Ping." She sang, and this song seemed to have magical power. Echoing voices came from all over the prison, some were slender, some were hoarse, some were deep, some were passionate... The singing spread quickly, and finally turned into a chorus that shook the prison. The angry shouts of the jailers and the whipping of whips were faintly heard. The senior smiled slightly and said, "Don't give up hope, the dawn will eventually come!" "The souls of heroes must not cry to each other, they must repay their comrades. The cold and sharp light gouge out the enemy's heart, and the weeping blood comforts the dead!" …………………………………………………………………………………… The breath has calmed down, and the original four magic swords have disappeared, replaced by Raywardin, the strongest oath sword. The surging power reverberated in her body, and she slashed forward slightly------ The sword energy struck, and a crack several meters wide spread on the ground to the end of her sight. "Sword of Glory!" She raised Raiwardin high, "From today on, my name is the Sword King!" …………………………………………………………………………………… "I'm sorry, although what you said is very touching, our group still doesn't want pure C." The leader said with regret. ​

Finally, there are some happy words for singles, lilies, and married people.

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My personal feeling is that the protagonist's personality is not very likable. Prejudice, indiscriminate killing, very harsh, occasionally slightly philistine (treating guests, ordering subordinates, etc.), Willful, paranoid and a little unhuman, the description of friendship is business-like or perfunctory, and I have a strong feeling. Except for not attacking civilians, he is almost a replica of Akainu. However, the combat description and growth are written very carefully. You can read it if you are in a book shortage.

Barr

I want to read it, but the sexist jokes in the early stage really make me uncomfortable. Can anyone tell me from which chapter the author won't do this kind of naughty thing? I even subscribed to a chapter specifically to post comments. I hope book friends can help.

I disagree with the protagonist's evaluation of Tiger. Although Dorag's spreading of ideas and mobilizing the masses is the most deadly weapon against the Tianlong people, is Tiger's venting wrong? Under the oppression of the Tianlong people for hundreds of years, their image has always been high. Countless people dare to be angry but dare not speak out. Doesn't someone need to roar? Isn't it necessary for someone to stand up and express dissatisfaction with their rule in an upright and aboveboard manner? I don't think this will have any negative impact on Dorag, just because it involves the selfish desire for revenge? The success of resistance requires not only calm and wise leadership, but also the passionate blood of the public. I feel that Tiger's behavior is not only not holding Dorag back, but it is the first shot of the public gradually pulling the Tianlong people off the pedestal.

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I stopped reading after more than 300 chapters. I thought it was over long ago 🤤 Is the subsequent plot good to watch? When I watched it, Kaido's mother had already been raped, the protagonist became a general, the red-haired man was basically in disgrace, Hawkeye also won a complete victory, the Celestial Dragons also mocked him, and the three Luffy brothers were all trained as naval seeds. What else could she write? Does One Piece have a red nose?

It's getting boring, it really is getting boring. I feel that the plot of this book has been figured out. The protagonist is involved in the plot everywhere. Most of the protagonists are fighting. They either win the glory and make news to promote their reputation, or they meet strong people who can't beat them to improve themselves. Moreover, the author is not very good at portraying characters, such as the adjutant. I can feel it. The author seems to have written him well, after all, he has given so many plots, but in my impression he is still a tool man, and the Zhanye detachment, the author did not portray it well. It is obviously the bond with the protagonist. When the conflict broke out with the Whitebeard fleet, it was because of his own crew members. In the end, in my impression, they are still a sidekick, with zero sense of existence, and no one with any sense of existence. It is the background of the protagonist, and the protagonist has no partners or friends. In my opinion, the protagonist is alone with a boat of pendants to catch pirates or go on a mission. It gives the reader the feeling that the protagonist has gained nothing in this world, and the readers have gained nothing. This book is not a good book. The reader does not feel happy. The main plot is bland and the reader is bored. People who were attracted by the gimmick of transformation only saw the gimmick. There was no Lily, and they didn't even see the protagonist's advantage in appearance. There wasn't even a supporting role like a fan girl or brother. The protagonist was always playing a one-man show. I saw this because there was a sense of cultivation in the early stage that hit me. Now that the protagonist is out of the novice stage, it's time for me to leave.

It's a bit frustrating. Generally speaking, it's impossible to be popular if it's written like this. The author doesn't control it well, and the plug-ins are obviously ridiculously strong. . . The heroine still prefers chicken stew, which is relaxed and interesting.

It's getting more and more like the original work, abandon it

I watched the ending in advance and my heart was broken

Although the outline is very good and the writing style is not bad, it starts to become sloppy in the middle period. A page of psychological description or detailed description is inserted into the character dialogue after only two sentences. It is a whole page. The author has some brains. This kind of description is very redundant and affects the perception. It is purely a scam to subscribe.

Juvenile body

The most powerful person in the navy is Akainu Akainu is currently the only one in One Piece except for Luffy in the movie version who has a ceiling that defies the sky During the top, he put his hands in his pockets and stepped on the Kumo no Kiriru who was swinging with all his strength by Lao Bai After killing Ace, he was exploded in anger. Lao Bai was hit in the head. He quickly got up and counterattacked, blowing half of Lao Bai's head. Then Lao Bai hit his waist with all his strength and smashed it into the ground. However, Akainu did not lose his fighting power and suffered great damage. After Akainu came out, he started to attack Luffy. Jinbe stopped him. Akainu said, "Jinbei, you should know my strength." Ping immediately said that he would risk his life to stop Akainu even if he died to pieces, and then Akainu pierced the stomachs of both of them with one move. After the top, when Luffy was sent to Kuja, Blackbeard grabbed the Big Stomach King and wanted to exchange a warship with the navy, and then Akainu rode the warship to attack the Blackbeard Pirates. At this time, the Blackbeard Pirates had many strong men. I never wanted to be an enemy of Akainu Afterwards Akainu completed his mission, Kizaru came to Akainu to talk about his retirement from the Warring States Period. On the title page, Akainu and Kizaru were wearing a kimono, and there were no signs of bandages or injuries. At this time, Luffy was still covered in bandages and was recovering from his injuries in Nine Snakes Shortly afterwards , the marshal dispute between Akainu and Aokiji becomes more and more serious. This is also the first time in the original work that a battle between peak combat powers occurs without interference, and one side is defeated by the other There is also talk about Fujitora Green Bull Momoha. Let's just say that Akainu is the top warrior with the strongest single attack and destructive ability in the One Piece world appointed by Oda. The prototype is Oda's favorite Japanese star. Oda calls him the best man in the world. Fujitora is the original character of the Zatoichi series. Fujitora is currently unable to compete with Akainu. As for Green Bull, he has not yet appeared, and his abilities and domineering abilities are unknown. There is no evaluation. Momo Usagi and Oda are just candidates for general, with the strength of lieutenant general. They have not exceeded the level of lieutenant general. Training as a general candidate SBS and Oda also mentioned this in the symposium. Candidates for generals are candidates for generals, and generals are generals. Don't confuse them together Oda initially wanted to make the three generals of Journey to the West, the monkey, the pig, and the kappa. Later, he gave up because of the kappa. In Japan, Sha Monk is a kappa, tea. In Oda's design, Akainu was a serious general in the beginning, and now he is also a lieutenant general with the title of lieutenant general. In general, Akainu is currently the strongest in the navy and the apex figure in the world of One Piece. Some people have always boasted that the old man beat Akainu. That is to say, if they were singled out, the old man would be beaten to death by the full-out Akainu.

3.79 Million words, 20,000 words are "after all"

Everyone, I saw the protagonist being surrounded by Whitebeard. I really don't understand the plot, why it develops like this, or why it develops like this First of all, the heroine insists on going her own way to report her duties. It is irrational to do this when the heroine is not strong enough, has no one to protect her, and is being watched by many people. It goes against the heroine's character of caring for her partners. The starting point is not in line with the character, but it is bearable, for the rapid advancement of the plot Secondly, the heroine will definitely be attacked on this journey, and unlike the four seas, the heroine must face pirates who are stronger than her and have more people than her. Not only the heroine, but everyone in the navy is also aware of this, but everyone agreed and regarded it as a trial. This is outrageous. No one would think that "letting a one-year-old child write a doctoral thesis and then execute him if he can't write it" is a test for the child. This is very similar to the heroine's behavior. No one stopped and no one protected him. This is outrageous Then, after the heroine was attacked by the Whitebeard Pirates, she blamed Whitebeard for the death of her partner. This is really outrageous. If it weren't for Whitebeard, Beard, the heroine has more people die than these, and the heroine may not survive. This is a normal situation. However, Whitebeard objectively protects the heroine, but the heroine is like an ignorant child, entangled with the dead partner, but does not want the companion who should have died but survived. The heroine killed the partner, why not thank Whitebeard for protecting her partner? Whether it is indirect or direct, intentional or unintentional, this protects the heroine and her partners. The heroine written now is like a white-eyed wolf. Finally, the heroine also challenges Whitebeard. I don't understand. The heroine is a general in the navy who loves her, but she shouldn't challenge Whitebeard unreasonably, right? If a fight breaks out, will Whitebeard take action? I definitely don't really want to kill the heroine, but what about the heroine? I wanted to kill Whitebeard from the very beginning. His lovable character couldn't hold up at all It would be better to meet Whitebeard later. The heroine is not worthy of contacting people at the level of the Four Emperors at this stage. If you know the plot of the time traveler, you should run to kill Blackbeard now, or build up your strength to stare at Blackbeard. Kill him immediately when he defectes, other things are secondary I can understand that the author wants to shape the heroine into a decent navy But the relationship with pirates is really vicious No matter how bad it is, you can refer to my Chinese Guan Yu's Huarong Dao against Cao Cao to shape the protagonist to be more tenable. Also, I'm really not very strong, but I do like this novel, otherwise I wouldn't say so much. Is there any kind-hearted person who can tell me whether the heroine killed Whitebeard and when?

There are too many inner dramas in this novel. I originally thought it would be about hacking and slashing, but in the end, most of it is about inner dramas. Isn't it still like this after you don't pay for it? Can anyone tell me, I don't want to see it go to waste😅