The Super Dimensional Pirate Group in One Piece

I haven't read more than sixty chapters for the following reasons. I came here today to check them out. At first, I was looking forward to the kingdom battle that would start after the protagonist founded the country, but after the founding of the country, there was no climax that I expected. The protagonist has no attractive characteristics and only knows how to summon. Although it is a summons text, it is difficult to remember the character after too many summons. It felt boring at the end, it just lacked passion and there was nothing worth looking forward to. The cuteness wears off too fast. You have to know that he has no shortcomings. He predicts the future, has three colors of domineering, and has the physical strength of a fantasy beast plus a ghost monster. After drinking, he breaks the physical limit. But it was easily destroyed by the protagonist. Although I knew it was a group fight, it was a little too simple. After that, Yamato's father is kind and his son is filial. Although Kaido is not a good father, Yamato is also heartless. It can be seen from the original work. It feels a bit annoying, but this is nothing. The main reason is that the protagonist is a bit weak. Without the system, he is nothing. He does not have that attractive quality, his writing is not good, and his martial arts is not good. The most important thing is that with the system, it is nothing more than that, which is a bit heartbreaking. In the end it got boring, so I kept it on the bookshelf and never read it again. However, the author is good at writing summoning articles. Each summoned character has a certain personality and is different from a doll. If the protagonist is strong from the beginning to the end, or is weaker than the summoned character at the beginning, but still has his strengths, and then quickly exceeds the strength of the summoned character, it is better. But the protagonist really eats soft food from the beginning to the end. Alas, if you eat too much soft food, it becomes a bit boring. I came to the water circle when I had nothing to do, so don't pay attention to me.

This male protagonist is simply speechless. In the first chapter, it was written that he started exercising at the age of 5 until he reached the strength of Tokai Ajin at the age of 17. As a result, the system immediately began to break down. When fighting, he would summon partners to fight against the strongest opponent, and he would fight as support or fight other people. Like this pirate group, several crew members are stronger than the captain. It would be fine if the captain had personal charm, but the protagonist just learned about the weaknesses of his partners by watching anime and then started from this aspect, and then added the system level 3 favorability certification to forcibly bind and not betray the contract. The protagonist himself is a happy person, practicing swordsmanship and pushing three blocks and fours, learning domineering and pushing three blocks and fours, and developing the fruits of his heart. After pushing back and forth, I was so frightened and trembled by the murderous intent of my companions several times that I even became stiff and was knocked out without any ability to fight back. Then I took advantage of my female companion's weakness to start a harem with peace of mind. It was simply..., Every time I said some righteous and awe-inspiring remarks, whether it was for the sake of reputation, or why I didn't want to see the cruelty of the nobles, etc., I just sat back and enjoyed the profits and waited for death. You keep saying that you want to overthrow the world and conquer it and become the king of the world. It is ugly to say that you are a harem king (harem king is the inner thoughts of the male protagonist in the article). I am speechless. How can readers tolerate your character? Even the male protagonists in the harem in the previous novels of the King of Soldiers did not dare to relax and exercise because of the sense of crisis. They were always thinking about improving themselves. Oh ~ that's all.

Political marriages are downplayed and then left high, just like the two female slaves rescued on the ship... This is not a matter of personal aesthetics, it is a matter of painting style among the works. Here is the Scathach Madam with Nine Red Eyes, which can fall over at a push, and Reiju... Don't you feel that it lowers the overall appearance? Besides, Reiju is weak and ugly. Esdeath and the others would feel inferior if they became a love rival with her, right? Just like Esdeath never cared about Ma Yin, Kurumi never felt threatened by Teacher Xiaozhu.

Esdeath behaves much worse than Akainu. Why do so many netizens only criticize Akainu but lick Esdeath 🤔

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This introduction directly reminds me of the past few years 😁

It suddenly occurred to me that if the two-dimensional ones were summoned, why would there be less ship girls? Moreover, if the blue ship girls were summoned, they would directly have an armored ship, or the magic modified version with a gravity cannon. One cannon and one branch would be no problem...

I always feel that the protagonist ate the wrong fruit. The ability to make thunder during a fight is useless, useful but useless. It is much different from the fighting style of the three generals. If you like to fight with weapons so much, you should just eat an additional super power fruit like the Zhenzhen Fruit or a fantasy beast type. It is said that Devil Fruit is the soul of the pirate world, but if you eat it and do not develop it properly, it is better not to eat it. No matter how I think about it, I think the protagonist's thunder fruit stretches his crotch during battle. .

Now I feel more and more that I was a fool for voting and giving rewards for this book. This is just a piece of cake.

As expected, I don't like two-dimensional history, so I beg the author to stop showing some history and politics! Although Zhang Liang was one of the three heroes of the early Han Dynasty, he was not good at governing the country! ! ! ! Then some policies and systems are really funny! I basically skipped it

After writing more than 800 chapters, I finally defeated the boss at the end and just defeated the eunuch? If you do this, if you open a new book, the fans of this book will not read your book again.

Is this the kind of book that is always ambiguous but does not do anything practical? I haven't read it yet, but I thought the setting was interesting, so I asked.

Brother, although your novel focuses on super dimensions, don't you think there are too many crew members? So much so that you have marginalized too many people, and it feels like a lot of people were just summoned but nothing happened. I don't think it's good. Is it possible to arrange for some people to leave the game and streamline the team?

Can it be stated clearly that this is a harem novel? Every time I step on the trap, damn, the hot-blooded manga is adapted from the harem manga, there are more and more women, I feel numb

A prostitute who was fucked to death by a black charcoal snake is now pampered by Eric like a treasure, and the face of the time traveler has been completely shamed by you.

You should write less about the sadistic and murderous complex. It doesn't match your theme and makes you uncomfortable to read. There aren't that many heavy-tasting ones. It's the same as watching BT.

I would rather take away Guang Yueyi and this Bichi than let Chi Tong wait for eight years. Author, you are really disgusting.

This protagonist is really the one who makes me most physically uncomfortable since I watched anime. It's disgusting. It's really disgusting.

Author, your writing is good. I will start a new book and I will follow.

I read fanfiction for fun, but this book made me suffocate

No, brother, can you finish the update? No more monthly updates.

I read this book a long time ago, but can I finish it sooner if I read it again? I don't want the author to keep updating it!

As long as it's over, you can continue watching!

Damn it, isn't this book finished yet? What is the situation now? Have you written about the infinite heavens? Why isn't it over yet?