Records of Immortals from All Heavens

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author's writing skills are very solid, and the wording and brushstrokes are also quite sophisticated. In terms of the writing style alone, it is like the misty sky. The author's writing style is the pinnacle in the current Internet literary world. But at the same time, why can't I read after reading a few chapters? It's because the author pays too much attention to the gorgeous rhetoric, and the article is a bit dry to read. Compared with traditional literature, online literature can be regarded as fast-moving literature. This is why the first three chapters of online novels are also called the golden three chapters. Big data shows that online readers usually use the impressions of the first three chapters to decide whether to continue reading, so the first three chapters are very important. As a fellow Xianxia writer, I have never published an article on Qidian. I can't help but linger after seeing such a wordy and thoughtful writing style. However, as a bookworm who has been immersed in it for many years, I still want to say that it is difficult for newcomers to use slow pace to attract readers to stop. Fast pace is more suitable for newcomers. Of course, people who dream of writing articles, idealistic people, don't need to care about the performance of their works, and just endure loneliness for the love in their hearts. Finally, I hope that the carefully created works will not be let down. May the author's thoughts flow like a fountain, the writing will be full of flowers, and the works will become popular.

Brother, you are writing a novel about cultivating immortals. Why are all the introductions filled with characters from Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty? The layout is too small.

It feels like reading a retro version of the Legend of Xiuxian. The text and story are straight and square, and it is difficult to have the climax and the crazy feeling of chasing to the end. The world of fairy tales has more adventures and dreamlike scenes and stories. This is the highlight. It is too orthodox and easy to get dizzy🤭

That's not right. If you have heard of it in Zixiao Palace, then you and Sanqing are of the same generation. Why are you letting someone lead a cow?

Renaissance Society? Yan Shuangyinggot it and wants to fight with you.

The introduction is boring. They all carry shoes for famous people or have done something with them to highlight the protagonist's power. Why not witness something to embody the protagonist? Without Erlang Shen, Roaring Sky Dog is just a dog monster. Without Erlang Shen, he is still Erlang Shen. Do you understand what I mean?

During the struggle for hegemony at the end of the Sui Dynasty, do you remember Zhu Jie? He took pleasure in cannibalism. He ate people for no reason when there was food. He failed in the struggle for hegemony. He escaped into Buddhism and claimed to be Garuda and descended to the earth. How could such a good thing happen? The author remembered to make arrangements. Originally, Ssangyong's Buddhism was disgusting.

To be honest, I don't understand the meaning of your traveling through the heavens. The worlds you travel through are all weaker than your own, so it would be better not to have the function of traveling through the heavens.

Tell me honestly if it's Old Toad's vest

I hope this book is not the golden chapter of an assembly line. There are so many god-level books that are great at the front but fall flat at the back. It's really not easy to worry about.

Toad Zhang pushed it over, insert an eye first, and then take a look at it later

It looks very fascinating. When I was competing with my fellow disciples, I said that I was not very good at close combat, but I traveled to Dragon Snake, where they practiced fighting to the extreme. I dare say that the protagonist of the same level is there, but he is just a weakling. In the end, he didn't learn anything in there, he just pretended to be cool, and relied on his cultivation to overwhelm others.

The protagonist won't survive until the golden finger is turned on.

Looking at it now, this is the author's masterpiece. The writing style and plot are very good. It still seems enjoyable.

After reading the introduction, I couldn't help but say a few words: Pangu created the sky and I gave him an axe, Suisman made fire and I gave him wood, Nuwa created man from clay, I punched Kunlun and the Three Pure Ones, and kicked the two sages of the West.

You mixed the grass with poison. The part where you kicked out the club to find someone was very poisonous. Are they familiar with you? Just Lao Cao Lao Cao's!

If this introduction doesn't work, let's change it to Daozu and give him a cow 🙂🙂🙂

The original world is well written, why are you using someone else's book again?

Is this protagonist a eunuch?

Why did the low-level martial dragon and snake go to the first world? Your writing skills are better than average. I'm optimistic about your next book.

Chapter 27. There is a thunderstorm sound when the protagonist punches. In ancient legends, Taoist priests exorcised demons and made thunder, which was actually the sound of ancient warriors punching. I'm speechless. This is not a world of martial arts. There are obviously mages in this world. Why can't there be thunder spells?

Please give each of the Three Pure Ones a female protagonist, otherwise they will be too bored to death because of their cultivation?

Taoist's latest update status is good, keep up the good work! Everyone recommends it

The world after it was put on the shelves was already a Shinto system covered in Xuanmen Taoist qi training skin.

The worldview of this world is okay. I wonder if there were three emperors of heaven, earth, and people at the beginning of heaven and earth.

It feels like a fairy tale, and I have found the artistic conception I had when I read the book a long time ago.

It should be said that the new book is quite high-quality and beautiful.

Reading the book reviews, this book looks okay. If you are short on books, you can read it.

The style is very similar to Toad's Immortal Gourd, but the explanation of the setting of the practice system is not detailed enough.

I just read a little bit and I have a feeling. I also checked the update time of the catalog and I am a little worried!