All My Disciples Are Children of Destiny

A small suggestion, the plot should be faster. A sect competition that can be written in one chapter is ridiculously long. The title of your book is: Apprentices are all children of fate, not one of your apprentices pretending to be a slap in the face in the ring...

29,000 Words bestseller list, is this about the Tao Te Ching?

It's rare to see such a good book, it's very funny. Keep this level up. Never, never experience a cliff-like drop in quality.

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I think it's well written, but I suggest you change your first apprentice to an emperor who has lost some memories, or has some memories sealed, otherwise it will make people feel that you are a very low-level emperor.

Are you serious about accepting a disciple? Don't end up with another teacher-student romance, which makes people sick to watch.

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Come on, author, don't give up, otherwise you will break your leg, and you won't lose any money.

In fact, I am very curious, if a person (a practitioner) who has lived for hundreds of years is reborn or otherwise, and becomes a child between the ages of 7 and 15, how should the author describe this person's character? Is it the character of a centuries-old monster, or the character of a child between the ages of 7 and 15? I believe everyone has their own answer. What do you think if there is a plot in the novel where you play on a slide with other children, make dummies out of mud, beat the king, and eat chicken? Yes, a centuries-old monster is so childish. It is really poisonous to write these plots. Has the author really considered how people with hundreds of years of experience shape a person's character? The description of an old witch becoming a disciple is so ridiculous that I will kill the book.

The following details: Plot: Unintelligible. The novel has no main line. There are not even upgrades for killing monsters, the upgrades are listed like a running list. The novel has no conflict. No matter from the senior brother's part to Jiang's plot at the end, it didn't give people any sense of enlightenment. It seemed that you could know the ending after seeing the beginning. Summary: xxx thinks she is useless, xxx falls in love with her, xxx loses; xxx is interested in her, xxx falls in love with her, xxx loses. It means nothing. The story is also boring. It's just the most basic upgrade, not even killing monsters. Summary: I found the son of luck, and then he was mine (the process was smooth and smooth). Characters: Characterless. is the overlay of tags. Summary: Protagonist: Invincible; bad-mouthed; boring. Disciple 1: Beauty; Iceberg; Powerful. Disciple 2: Youngster; Disciple 3: Same as 1 Summary: Totally boring, not recommended reading.