Swallowed Star: The Supreme Controller

A near-immortal, peak-level Realm Lord, building a martial arts island on a small planet and playing a martial arts cultivation game? What's wrong with him?! He should be looking for talented disciples; I don't believe he can't find any with a single scan of the entire planet!

The initial idea was actually quite good, but the story development completely lost its prestige because the protagonist started as a Realm Lord, which is equivalent to an immortal being. People below the Realm Lord level are just ants to the protagonist, not even from the same race, and he wouldn't even give them a second glance.

It's well-written, but Swallowed Star is a fantasy/science fiction novel, and you've incorporated a martial arts style into it, instantly lowering its overall quality.

I'm speechless that Xia Ke Dao (侠客岛) is set in the world of Swallowed Star. Goodbye, author.

A being whose main body is a realm lord, whose combat power is immortal, and whose avatars are all domain lords, is actually addressing planetary-level beings as "planetary-level powerhouses"! And they even need to "pay a visit"—it's truly speechless! Shouldn't a domain lord be able to cover an entire planet with a single thought?

Selecting disciples is a simple matter of natural selection. Why bother with this kind of low-brow martial arts novel? First, establish a global martial arts community, then have cosmic-level powerhouses suppress the entire world, followed by a rigorous selection process every ten years. Those remaining will all possess considerable talent, luck, and perseverance. Isn't this better?

The background of the beautiful Swallowed Star has been turned into this mess 🐤, is this supposed to be a martial arts film?

There's absolutely no need for that. Would someone at the level of a Primordial Ancestor even care about a mere Realm Lord like you? Besides, you yourself transmigrated here to possess another body. Possessing another body doesn't mean you're no longer human. Otherwise, Luo Feng in the original story would have been killed by the Chaos City Lord when he went to the Initial Universe!

Here are a few thoughts: 1. A mentalist can easily control a person's mind, and beating them to the point of vomiting blood would feel beneath them. 2. In the universe, the most important thing for humans at a lower level is resources, which is basically money. If the protagonist wants to cultivate talent, he will definitely have to purchase a lot of resources.

I must repeatedly warn readers that in fanfiction about devouring characters, you should never go beyond two major levels of plot. What you might think is a satisfying moment will backfire and drive readers away. The domain owner's maximum movement speed is 10,000 kilometers per second. The speed of the Lord of the Universe is 100 times the speed of light.