Gentlemen Do Not Seize Fate, Use the Dharma and Neglect Wealth, Create Land, Educate Couples, and Build Roads.

There is a saying, those cultivators in the fairy tales are all chosen by the four gods.

How should I put it, it is indeed a bit out of expectation. Let's talk about the advantages first. The character of the protagonist is good, and the trend of farming construction is indeed very comfortable to watch. I think the highlight that attracts me the most is that it is different from the current world's spiritual practice system. It is good to explore on one's own and not completely abandon other systems, such as scientific medical treatment, etc. Then let me talk about the shortcomings First of all, the biggest shortcoming is that the author's writing style is still a bit poor, and the writing style is very abrupt. The writing style is an error that evolved from the translation style. I don't know if the author has read too many light novels or what, but for some reason the light novel style is too serious. The most interesting thing among them is the inner voice circled with []. I can only say that it is a bit childish, but this childishness is still within the acceptable level, and the author has a good knowledge base, and the content is relatively rigorous. The childishness is only highlighted in the wording. The second is personal preference. This novel most likely has multiple female protagonists. I have read more than half of it, and the main characters are all female. As a reader who likes to have a single female protagonist and no female protagonist, it is still a bit uncomfortable. Then there is the plot, which also reflects the immaturity of the author's writing style. And this is also my disappointment with the style. First, the description of the plot is too complicated. For example, the protagonist has to explain to his daughter several sentences why every action he takes. This is not only the protagonist, but also other supporting actors. Reading fluency is poor. Secondly, I understand the introduction of Zhongkan. I think this book is to abandon the conflicts in ordinary works and bring readers a different reading experience, but in fact it has not been done. Indeed, the conflict in the composition of the novel is an essential item for the development of the plot. However, I don't know what will happen next to the conflicts in this novel. At least the two plots I have seen now are very cliche. The author probably wants to work on the protagonist's ideas, such as sealing people so that they can live and not die, but they will not pose a threat to themselves. Not only do you want people to never pose a threat to you, but you also want to be different from previous novels. It is still very serious to create such a nondescript and disconnected novel. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. I will keep the book and read it. When I gain weight, I will jump back and see how the author's writing has improved. The setting is really attractive to me, and I still want to keep reading.

The part where the daughter was kidnapped was really vicious. They said the bedroom was the safest, but the daughter was kidnapped right away. Did the author forget it after writing it? It was only in the first two chapters that the protagonist knew that the other party would definitely bring helpers with him. They all knew that he would not be alone. The bedroom defense measures were not used. He relaxed after catching an enemy. Did the protagonist have a trance? It completely contradicts the author's plot foreshadowing in the first two chapters. I suggest you change it. It looks too ridiculous.

To be honest, those domestic novels about cultivating immortality and Taoism are basically cultivating the demonic path. Almost all the protagonists deserve to die without mercy, and they have been burned, killed, and looted over and over again.

I've read them all and it's well written, but why are the people I'm close to all female? I'm so angry that when can we men stand up?

I haven't read it yet. I have read this author's previous book. If this book is good but no one is following it, it must be because of the title.

I have been following the author's last book "White Ring Douluo". The styles of the two books are relatively similar, and I have always liked the author's fresh style (which is refreshing and creative). The values ​​​​are relatively positive, and the protagonist's IQ and EQ are online. He will not mess with his subordinates or vilify others. I hope the author can maintain this style and will always support him! 😆

Um, I don't quite understand the title of this book 😥😥

Yes, the book written by the author is relatively close to traditional mythology or Taoist mythology. To practice Taoism, to be virtuous is to have Taoism. A person who practices Taoism attaches great importance to virtue. Is it worthy to practice Taoism even if you have no blessings or virtues? Also worthy of becoming an immortal? I'd rather have a few. Also, there is no such thing as a thunder tribulation in traditional mythology. Serious Taoist practitioners think about accumulating merits, so how can they overcome the thunder tribulation? The Taoist tribulation refers to the inner demon tribulation. Only various non-human beings need to survive the thunder tribulation. "A house that accumulates good deeds will be blessed; a house that accumulates bad deeds will have remnants of disaster." "The Complete Book of Lu Zu" says: "Those who do good deeds will enjoy blessings; those who accumulate negative virtues will have prosperous descendants. Do not waste natural resources, do not destroy orthodox teachings, and do good deeds. Healing the dying, caring for people in trouble, not hiding, and thief of negative virtues. If you do not do good deeds and do not accumulate negative virtues, then the evil ways will be everywhere!"

I found that the author is very fond of some extremely bloody scenes that are very old. . .

Don't write if you can't continue My daughter was kidnapped. It's too poisonous. Life in Tahara was pretty good. I have a daughter and a pet, but what's the result? Take your daughter to study. Haha, study in the age of cultivating immortality. . Do you think those people are good at teaching and educating people? Being poisoned all of a sudden, without any warning. You can still dance while reading, but the result is the same old routine of being killed for the treasure. Everything I said makes sense, but in the end, I helped people strengthen their weapons in vain, got into trouble, and got a fake cheat book. Still the same old story, the author found that the protagonist would not go out without external force, and could not continue writing until he reached perfection in cultivation, so he no longer had the strength to continue writing, so he just resorted to mechanical deification. I couldn't find any contradictions so I wrote the words. Well! Me! Inexplicably poisoned.

The more I thought about it, the angrier I became. The plot written by the author was so powerful as mentioned before, but the enemy rushed in all at once. It's not specifically disgusting, right? Mental explosion

Can you achieve great success without taking away opportunities? Funny

Let me explain, the title of this author's book is about not fighting for opportunities, nor fighting for magic weapons. Don't fight for these things, property, and other things. You can produce your own products and nurture your own blessed land.

To be honest, it has become very strange since I left home. If it were not for the knowledge of cultivating immortals in the school world, there is no need to go to any school. The protagonist has inherited a lot of knowledge and does not even have a way to cover his aura. These can also be understood as deliberately arranging the plot, but the reversal of time and space to change the past is purely unnecessary. The poison has been manipulated. Not to mention that it is impossible to change the past. Even if the past is really changed, the first person to deny it is yourself. If you deny it yourself, where does the power to change come from? I really recommend deleting the time-traveling and changing the past. There is no point in it except deliberately creating poisonous points. Even if you want to increase the number of words through the plot, it is not done like this.

Let me tell you something that the author doesn't like to hear. You have written a lot now and are still stuck in a fixed pattern, building-killing monsters-improving your cultivation-changing maps. Moreover, the map has been laid out early and even the final doss has been set... The more you look at it, the more it looks like you are playing a game, the one that was released before... The routine is basically the same.

Looking at the introduction settings, I was reminded of an ancient novel, The Legend of Li Youxian, in which the protagonist never killed anyone and took his female companion along the way to refine alchemy and travel to become an immortal. All the villains either played themselves to death, or were unlucky along the way and were saved by the protagonist and became friends of the protagonist. What the protagonist did when he was hunted in the early stage was to find a tree that was thick enough, open an opening, then hollow out the inside, seal it inside, practice for a year and a half, and then come out. After all, most of them are weekends, which is a characteristic of the era.

I want to read a normal sect cultivating immortality, not a bunch of ambiguous stories about women.

Come, the author reads with me

What the hell is this title? . .

White Ring Douluo Er swipe to check, I have put this book away for a year, but everyone said that your book is poisonous, so I didn't dare to try it. I kept silent until chapter 40. I have to say, luckily it didn't poison me to death. There weren't that many flaws in the book of White Ring, but as a result, this one of yours is a complete mess, with dismal results... The author, you can make fun of and complain about in the 40 chapters I read, there are almost no outrageous ones. In the second book, you started to create something. You are equivalent to taking a step too far and pulling your balls, most of them Starting from the beginning, the authors wrote 🥔's Xiao Huohuo and 🍬③'s Double Standard to test the waters. I only started writing originals after having experience in at least three books... Well, in short, I hope you don't rush to write an original for your next book, and write some light novels or fan fiction first to gain some experience.                                   ————

I suggest the abbreviation of the book be "The Righteous Way". If there is a grand road, don't follow the messy byways.

Usually old readers who pass by come back to visit their graves                                         Come back, salted fish soy sauce    😭                                             Salted Fish Soy Sauce                                                                                                                              🍞The white ring that I vaguely remember🍞                                                                                                                                                                                                .

Author, when will you publish a new book?

My dear author, when will you open the next book?

It's 2023 and the new book hasn't been published yet?

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Grave sweeping, hope to update next year📖

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Are you still ready to write or are you planning to take a break?