Naruto: Becoming a Sound Ninja

The writing style is so bad, I write like a diary, almost like I am reading an outline.

Come on! ! Although I am a rough person and have no literary literacy, so I cannot judge the quality of the article from aspects such as writing techniques, or its artistic value, but for me personally, it was very comfortable to read and the writing was very suitable to my taste. There are too many Naruto novels, and most of the entry points have been played badly. The author wrote about an idea I once thought about, the Sound Ninja Village. Although it is a bit of a pity that there is no expansion of some phonological ninjutsu, it is already great in capital letters! ! Another small suggestion. Overall, although I enjoyed reading it, it was indeed a bit dull like other book friends. I felt that some of the explosive points were not highlighted, such as the escape and the solution to Kai (I have read this for the time being). I think it should be a small climax, but the arrangement is not so prominent. The above is just my personal feeling, it may not be correct, I just hope it can be of great help and I can write better. And what I'm talking about are only some details or corners. The overall plot direction arrangement is still up to you to decide according to your own ideas. Come on! ! ! !

Many parts of the plot are not very logical, and the writing style is also fluid and needs polishing, but the overall direction is okay.

Oh my god, this is overwhelming advertising.

Come on, I have something to do and I'll see you next time...

I wrote almost 300 pieces in two months. Are you a monster?

Mr. Huang's residence is hidden by bamboo trees and towering towers. It is easy to defend but difficult to attack. No one can attack it!

The three sound ninjas were at least 12 years old when they took the chuunin exams. Why did they go there when they looked like they were only 8 years old?

I think the writing is quite good, the author is great, come on! Is there any book club group?