The Mediocrity of Elves

Jiangjiang entered this book with great force and found another beautiful elf novel.

It feels a bit bloody. In fact, there is no need to write that the protagonist and two companions are time travellers. There is a system, just be indigenous. There is no need to deliberately highlight that the protagonist is a mediocre person, an ordinary person. This aspect feels quite poisonous. It can be imitated by the Pokemon: Pauper next door. Except for the many poisonous points in the content, everything else is fine.

Can the author reveal the purpose of setting up the two time-travelers besides the protagonist? I'm a little confused?

The first chapter is extremely toxic. In addition to the protagonist, there are two time-travelers. It's not an indispensable setting. Why do we have to make things difficult for readers?

There are three golden chapters at the beginning. In the first chapter, you persuaded him to quit. If you wear more clothes, you can only fight to the death. It's just so harmonious. You actually weakened the protagonist and abused the master? Slip away. 😇😇😇😇

To be honest, the setting of the book is still okay, but every time I click on it, there are a few other time-travelers who are particularly annoying. The results reflect everything. The results are not as good as those who have written dozens of chapters.

If you have any supporting roles that you want to write about, you can suggest them. After signing the contract, I can feel free to play 😁

Is the author of this book too miserable? I have been writing for Love for a long time, and even if I haven't signed a contract, it is still being updated. It's an exaggeration. Last year, I vaguely remembered that the author said that this novel was for practice. How come I have been practicing for Love until now? It's a bit exaggerated. I admire the author. I'm still updating after the signing failed👍👍👍

I didn't read the book and read the comments. What I want to say is that it is a free book or it is better not to ask so much. After all, the author generates electricity for love.

I am an old author, and it is rare to see someone who can persist like this 😄

I just discovered this book, but it feels like it's already useless. A million words, no more than 30 followers, and no 100 comments. I looked at the comment section and found that the first chapter was basically about persuading people to quit and wearing too many clothes. This big poisonous point turned the three golden chapters into three chapters about persuading people to quit. The wrong thing should be the chapter about persuading people to quit. The author omitted them after saying 145 of them, but I couldn't stand the first part and look at the back. I really thought too much.

I would like to give you a suggestion, rewrite the beginning, then spend a few days sorting it out, and send it to other pintai. Anyway, I haven't signed a contract, so I should cut it off. Don't waste time. You should also practice writing properly.

Most masters can't control double penetration. You're such a triple penetration guy.

I found that writing about female protagonists is mostly not popular.

As for the elves raised by common people, the Insect King, Dragon King and Scorpion, Mantis, Eevee, and a Vulcan Moth will be great after that.

I would like to ask if the protagonist who has been surpassed is still interesting. Both of them have systems and their starting points are better than the protagonist. Even in the anime world, you will always know the plot. You can't know the plot and the ability that you don't know what it is. You can surpass the system. But let's say goodbye.

Next time @I won't say more. The author's book is probably unfinished, and the results aren't good anyway, so I'll start this book as soon as possible.

Did the author think he was too popular and specifically told him to wear more clothes in the first chapter?

Not finished yet? Waiting for you to open a new book

I was confused when I looked at it. There were more than 200 pictures, not even one of which was gym-level. I just kept thinking about this article. I accepted it. It looked good, but it was not interesting. It was too watery.

To be honest, most people ran away after reading the first chapter. Of the three time travellers, the other two have systems but not the protagonist. Moreover, in a small town later, it was said that the next two time-travelers were cut off. At a certain chapter, someone said no, so I jumped over and took a look.

It's quite interesting, but I wanted to subscribe to support it, but suddenly I realized there was no option to subscribe. The author's original plot is very exciting. Although the two time-travelers are a bit awkward at the beginning, it is really good later on. Like.

Everything is fine, just talk nonsense and it gives me a headache

The author asked how you persisted.

Why do current authors who write about elves think that elves are rare? You can catch bugs with a net, but you have to spend all your money to buy them?

Find a realistic novel about elves. The protagonist risked his life to catch a bunch of insects and raise them at the beginning to cultivate the insect king.

I just saw this book. The author is so... I'll give you a thumbs up first.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's less than 1.5 Million words, but it's still being laid out, and it's not really about the overall situation.

I've just read a few chapters. It would be much more pleasing if the two time travelers were indigenous and just got golden fingers.