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Well, I came here by invitation and saw the first ten chapters. In the first ten chapters I have read, I have seen a lot of references. Well, it is normal. The fantasy background setting of the Cthulhu world in the Western context has basically been fixed by "The Lord of Friends". If you want to escape from this setting, it will bring a lot of unnecessary trouble to the author. The war that just started in the first chapter, well, it was a city defense war, and it was a war in the steam age, using artillery and rifles. When the city is under siege for a month, well, maybe just attack a wall, individual districts. However, I did not see in your description that there were reinforcements or logistical supplies. At the end of Chapter 3, it was also described that the city gate was locked. So, I guess it was a siege. So, how does the city maintain a supply of food and keep prices stable? And such high-end food as roast goose? I wrote about half a mouse before, which is also a rare good thing. Well, okay, it's just a transitional chapter, maybe it's not important in the world you write. Somewhat nitpicky. To be honest, well, there are actually some things that seem to be illogical in the context. For example, what the priest and the protagonist said earlier, well, based on my superficial understanding of Western religion, it should be considered blasphemous. Not only did the priest show no reaction, he even took out a badge and wished the protagonist, well, good cultivation. Well, Goldfinger appears and the protagonist absorbs, um, divine power. It seems like a villain has also appeared, a man appearing out of thin air. Well, the godless protagonist prays. Well, the beloved protagonist's immortal halo appears. After breaking into the frontal battlefield and being surrounded by soldiers and using rifles, the protagonist can "duck" with a rifle. When injured, the protagonist can wave his body to kill all the bullets fired at him and his sister. After that, he can also escape with his sister on his back. Well, okay, the protagonist, that's understandable. It gets even more interesting as I read on. The protagonist is dead. Sure enough, bullets are not as powerful as teeth. I saw the time traveler, well, didn't the first chapter say that I traveled through time? Aren't all souls fused? Another man in black appeared, resurrected the protagonist, and asked the protagonist to grow up as soon as possible and catch up with him. Hmm, it seems like there are too many elements. My sister met a werewolf! Danger! My sister discovered a hallucinogen and prepared to save herself. A man named Taki appeared, shot and killed the werewolf, and asked his sister if she wanted to become stronger. Well, there are more elements. Well, I guess these first ten chapters are just a transition. After all, there are many people who wrote well in the comment section and even signed contracts. The above is just nonsense, after all, this is a serious book review. As far as I can see now, the background setting is qualified. Character description, weak. Plot advancement, weak. Rhythm control, weak. Conclusion: A Cthulhu novel with a Western fantasy background and many elements.

It is better to be concise at the beginning. If there is too much text in a long paragraph, divide it into more paragraphs. The Lord of Mysteries can survive the early slow heat because of the support of the reader base. This path is not suitable for newcomers.

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The writing style seems to be better than many books in Qidian. I really hope that there will be more books like this. But to be honest, the beginning is not enough to catch people. If you are a big boss with many readers, then it is okay. But if you don't have a reader base, you have to make the beginning more eye-catching, right? This is my family's opinion, so don't listen to it. As a reader, I really hope there are more people like the author who can compare with those parallel imports that cannot be explained in words. I hope the author can make progress.

Looking at the synopsis and Mystery, it seems that it is so slow and I can't keep up with it just like the original Mystery. I feel that if there are separate volumes, I can save one and read it.

The author writes in your own style. The Lord of Weirdness is ugly as hell, don't go in that direction.

I've given you all the monthly recommended tickets. If you invest, don't go into the palace.

What a great write up! Definitely collected it! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us and give us advice!

So many recommendations? Just such a comment?

For a slow-burning book, if you don't have millions of words, you won't be able to tell the plot.

The three golden chapters are sparsely written and are about to be thrown out.

Take your time to read and evaluate slowly, it's already 50, and it's almost 1 million! It will be a masterpiece by then, hold on!

The protagonist has a younger sister. The protagonist has no magic or superpower system, and has no ability to protect himself in the face of artillery and superpowers.

I saw the message you sent, let me take a look! Who is the heroine? No/single/harem?

I feel like I can start a second book and rewrite the story again. After all, there is no murderous confession at the beginning, so there are no highlights. If it doesn't get popular, just restart it in time, and you can catch up on the traffic of new books.

From the first picture, it can be seen that the protagonist in this other world is a perverted rapist who is mentally abnormal. Wanted persons. Then after the second picture, I will feel sick because of the rat meat. I am listening to the book.