Youxianguan, Everything Starts from the End of the End of Dharma

If he insists on writing about Chinese martial arts so well, then only Lao Lu is left.

Good guy, one chapter a week, let's just keep fish here

To be honest, I gave up the book when I saw the two women. You must know that when the woman killed the protagonist, she had no idea that the protagonist was capable. To be fair, when others treat you so cruelly, you can still greet them with a smile and use your own medicine. It's true that the three views follow the five senses. The author is not blessed to enjoy it, so he resigned.

Lu Xiping's personal feeling is that it is a low-end eunuch version of Mengluishenji. What kind of genre does Mengluishenji create? Lu Xiping immediately followed up and imitated and wrote a similar type, but every book is almost meaningless. For example, "Huanzhen Dao" is an imitation of "Buddha is the Tao" but does not have the magnificent world concept of the fairy world behind the Buddha. It ends in a hurry, "Drawing the Sword All the Way", obviously It was written based on "The Romance of Dragon and Snake", but it is not as magnanimous as "The Romance of Dragon and Snake", but the result is still unfinished. "Huang Ting Li Dao" is a bit smarter, imitating "Black Mountain Old Demon" and "Yang Shen", but it still lacks the finishing touch, and it is still unfinished in the end. In short, there is only one sentence to summarize Lu Xiping's work, which is always imitating and never innovating.

At the beginning, a woman came to persuade you to quit. I really have you.

Oh, I actually found Lao Lu's new book. It's rare. Come on.

The plot design is a bit unreasonable. In a modern city where there are surveillance cameras everywhere and everyone has a mobile phone to send short videos, criminal gangs are plotting against the families of police officers, hiding their ears and stealing the bells, destroying surveillance cameras in batches, and no one cares? At the same time, it can hide a large number of abducted and trafficked children, and the people who eat melon turn a blind eye? A high-rise commercial building has been transformed into a rainforest landscape (no worries about water leakage because the floor slabs are weak) and a ten-meter python has been stationed there, as well as dozens of venomous snakes. No one knows?

What's the use of beating up the traffickers and then running away? It was said that there were surveillance everywhere, and then he was seen by two armed policemen. With the appearance of the protagonist, he is tall and powerful, and his hands are like squares. With so many characteristics, he could not be recognized immediately after comparing them. He also injured the armed policemen, and his good deeds turned into bad deeds...

"Ultimate Force" is good to read, why don't you write it again? You are really an eunuch. The new book is also like this. I'm disappointed.

Lu Xiping is the most unfortunate author I have ever seen. The level is extremely high. But the eunuch is imitative, and there is also a faint aloofness. I don't know how to evaluate it.

Do you know why you can't compare to the "Go away" books? Because your protagonist always fights against Sehui before he has the power to surpass Sehui, which is called Zuos for short. If the protagonist in "Go away" encounters such noisy things, he will definitely compare his own safety and get through it. Your protagonist, in this kind of real society, meddles in the affairs of several people, and then escapes surrounded by government officials. Do you think it is possible, just with your iron sand palm? ? Even if I give you two metal arms, you will be of no use. But your book looks great, is decisive, and can be read without thinking. That's the only advantage.

In the beginning, in order to save two women whom he didn't know at all, he risked his own life. It was really vicious.

I have read more than 20 chapters, and they are all full of mystery. Who loves guessing riddles these days?

The descriptions of Lao Lu's fighting and training system are good, but the plot is not good. He has always been the biggest weakness. To put it bluntly, he can't make up stories. I have a suggestion. You can cooperate with Mengru Shenji. Shenji is responsible for writing the outline and Lao Lu is responsible for the details.

My writing style is okay, but it's a pity that I have no persistence and am not the material for writing a book 😰

The Ultimate Force Eunuch, with this update speed, I guess this book is almost ready to go into the palace.

The plot about the human traffickers really insulted my intelligence. When I saw that the author was Lu Xiping, I decisively abandoned the book.

It was actually updated? Why update? Lao Lu, please listen to my advice. If the story is difficult to compile, just write four hundred chapters and end it. Like Huang Tinglidao, it ends before time travel. There are three hundred chapters in total. It is also a small masterpiece. Why bother everyone and yourself?

The pinnacle is still Huang Ting! ! ! !

The author has had all his books deleted. Is your heart broken? Get up quickly.

What is the author doing? It's not like he's in trouble, right?

Who knows, what is this guy doing now? Youxian Temple has not been updated for so long! Is it really so complete? ? ? ?