Tokyo Kendo Past

The writing is really good, not bad (≧∇≦*), I hope you won't be a eunuch ( •̅_•̅ )

Sit back and wait for the author to pounce. . Return to fanfiction

Wouldn't it be nice to write about a pirate honestly?

Come on! If you return the pigeon, remember to go back and write about Naruto.

Let me complain too. I just saw the protagonist and his classmates going to level up with a monk. What can I say? The author's book is really not as good as the previous one. As for Goldfinger. I didn't feel it was anything great. In other words, there is no golden finger at all, even if you just get a normal dark blue and add some dots. Then I'm also confused about the domineering issue. Anyone who has watched One Piece knows that it's really useless to just follow the way of the sword. Especially if you don't practice domineering, it's very difficult to beat those with abilities. As a result, the protagonist fought against Kendo in the early stage. Do you think you are Sauron? . Zoro's talented master and so on are not bad, okay~_~ and then. The plot is really light. . I read 2.30 Pages and I didn't feel that there was anything explosive about it. No wonder the author's book did so poorly. . Note: I am not discrediting the author. I also found out that the author has published a new book to support it. Then just tell me how you feel. .

How can I put it this way? It feels a bit weird when I read it. The protagonist doesn't have normal friends, which makes it very uncomfortable. The protagonist is a little inconsistent with his words and deeds. His mental description and actual behavior are the same for a while, but they are different for a while. It feels super uncomfortable. There is also force. Why are each system isolated from each other? . . The Sword Master's breath of all things is similar to the color of seeing and hearing. Isn't the color of the weapon based on the quality of the body? And why can't they be practiced at the same time? It would be outrageous to completely isolate each thing. Also, why is the standard of swordsmanship blurred? There are still many shortcomings.

If you get used to being a eunuch instead of pushing yourself, it will be difficult to finish a book in the future.

There are always some remarks that make the author pounce. Is this good? Every book is written by the author after thinking for a long time. Isn't it bad to treat the fruits of one's labor like this? Moreover, the background of this narrative explanation is still very huge. Looking forward to it! It's much better than Naruto or Pirates fanfics. The fanfics explain each person's image and some important things. What's new?

The setting collapses. Let's talk about the color of knowledge first. If you hit level 2 at level 7, you can only be slashed by level 2 unilaterally. You can't even touch the opponent's fur. Conclusion: The color of knowledge is a reverse buff. The higher the level, the slower the reaction. Let's talk about Haki. If you're level 8 versus level 4, you're constantly getting hit. Since you're not injured, you can grab the blade when you're hit and give Kamishiroha a big-eared melon seed with your other hand. The game will be a game over.

One Piece and Kendo don't go together. Most people who like One Piece like to see Taijutsu Haki and the key point - fruit abilities. You wrote over a hundred chapters of swordsmanship based on the One Piece system, and readers who liked One Piece ran away.

It's not cool. After dozens of chapters, the main character still has nothing special about him.

Why was it cut when it was written so well?

It's too slow to warm up. Anyone who has watched One Piece knows the importance of physical skills and three-color domineering. As a result, after a hundred chapters, the protagonist has never thought about improving the weapon color and knowledge color. In the future, the natural system will be the leader 😅

Damn, what I want to complain about the most is that the men in it are like teddy in heat. They can't walk when they see a woman, right? In order to create a character that is so disgusting, I feel like I can't stand it It's better to practice more and fight.

I just don't understand why the protagonist doesn't practice domineering. Anyone who knows the plot knows how important domineering is.

I refused piracy for you and gave you a reward, but in the end you became a eunuch.

Just write about the group of suitors appropriately. There are these licking dogs in every chapter, which is very annoying and affects the perception. And shouldn't most of the people who enter top universities be elites or geniuses? Why do they all act like hungry fishing rods?

What should I do? What was written? Saying you are invincible is not invincible, and forcefully suppressing it. Is this just kidding? The combination of man and sword can enter or not, and the practice is still the same as SB!

A slow-paced book doesn't mean it's not well written, but the book's performance may seem really bad to the author, and the effort is not proportional to the reward. I support the author to start a new work. After all, he needs to make a living, but you don't have to finish the book. If you publish this series, it will be accepted by readers who have monthly or annual updates! I really can't see the ending. In my opinion, this book is still good. It is not impossible to start low and go high, but it is finished, so I won't say more.

The world view is very good, and the pirate setting is also combined with urban real-life situations! It's just that the protagonist written by the author is a bit fishy. Although he is still growing up, he knows that those things are dangerous, but he still jumps into it like a fool. Then he explains that there is no evidence to prove that the villain is going to cause trouble, so he can only go, and then he is "fucked" by others, and then he contacts some female characters to increase his favorability. Secondly, the author seems to be too tolerant of some female characters, and his views follow the five senses, no matter how disgusting the female character is (like Li Xue, she was a life-saving grace at least, but she still dissed the protagonist, even if she didn't know that the protagonist saved her, wouldn't the protagonist stay away from her? This kind of woman is both stupid and bad, and her aunt also knows it. In the end, she doesn't want her niece's life-saving grace, but she keeps plotting against the protagonist, and she doesn't insist on wanting to be a sword master). In fact, many dangerous situations are forced by those female characters, and then the protagonist saves the beautiful woman after the danger occurs. Your protagonist knows that the world is very dangerous, but in order to improve the favorability of the beautiful character in the incident, he goes to death! If it is like in One Piece, it is understandable to do things that are difficult for ordinary people without hesitation for the sake of understanding (faith). Because in One Piece, the strong person's domineering (armed color, knowledge color and overlord color) and power cannot be upgraded by training alone. Without firm belief or demoralization, the domineering force will regress (refer to the original work Golden Lion and others). In other words, the setting of domineering has a lot to do with spiritual will! Having said so much, I am just complaining. After all, it took me half a day to read the new chapter in one breath. The result is that the author is too crooked in the protagonist's treatment of female characters! Maybe the author just added a pirate setting, and essentially wanted to write an urban harem story. The battles and events were all done to meet many beauties and increase his favorability? ? . . That's it, I'm just expressing my personal opinion. I hope the author will write better articles and the book will be a big hit!

I'm really blind. How can any book about the Twelve Heavenly Kings compare with this one? Why is this result so poor?

Come, the author gives me the outline and the settings. This book will be a harem later in the book. If you don't write it, I will write it for myself.

It makes people who were not optimistic about this book happy before It makes people who like this book disappointed Summary: I will change my vest for the next book. I won't pursue it anyway.

Do you guys have any books of this type? I love this kind of novel with a pirate setting.

Sure enough, it was cut. I suspected that the author had sold his ID, but this book didn't ban the comments and didn't delete the posts.

Is it okay if an author writes about the past of Northeastern Kendo?

It's a pity that the book is good but the pace is too slow.

The author's mentality is broken! Think about it carefully before writing a new book! We don't ask for the novel to be popular, nor to ask for it to be true. After all, we are writing stories! But when the author writes a new book, he must first think about it. The plot and settings are very misleading and will drive away readers! I am not instructing the author, I just hope you can cheer up. If writing a book is your bread and butter, I hope you can keep up your efforts and write a good book! ! ! !

Really cut. . . . . . .

After reading Chapter 15, I feel that the biggest problem with this book now is that the pig's feet are too bland.