Konoha's Sea of ​​Fire

I saw Chapter 70. The protagonist is about seven to eight years old. He has 3 fire escapes, 2/3 Laytons, 3 of the 8 doors are open, the Rasengan and Chidori are all developed, 3 medical ninjutsus, 2 Sharingan magatama, 2 years of weather, the plot has basically not advanced, big Part of it describes training and daily life, and the description of combat is pale and feeble. Originally a wonderful battle, the author could only mention a few ninjutsu names in a cursory way, and then he died with a root of 3 magatama... The description of the battle is beyond the imagination... Abandoned

Actually, I really don't mean to be stupid, but if I don't say it out loud, I won't be able to read clearly. This book made me furious, you fucking trash time traveler, you are such a coward. Nothing can be changed after traveling through time. When he was in Loulan, he still forcefully claimed that he had changed the future. If you change your mind, the original work will still be dead. You haven't changed, Hizashi was killed, Shisui still lost his eyes, what have you changed? You can't say this or that. You need to hide it and you can't say it. Why do you want you to travel through the past if you can't say it? What we readers want to see is the time-travelers changing the plot of the original novel, but what the hell did Ang write? Red becomes the three-tailed Jinchuuriki? Obito is pretty normal, but this is none of our business. Don't talk about Minato and Shinkuna, that's just the normal operation of a time traveler. You froze them both just to suit the original plot.

I just want to know why Fenghuo didn't kill Danzo directly after killing Hokage and defecting? (I saw Shuiyou saying that Feng Huo defected later) Does it have to make readers sick? You can do it but don't you have to do it with all kinds of disgusting people? ? ? ? Author If you were of this level, you would dissuade countless readers today.

This book is not called Fenghuoliantian, it should be called Fighting against Konoha

Everyone thinks that Eight Door Dunjia is very good, but I don't think it's too expensive.

Uchiha Orphan Begins Obito is in the same period Funny story flow little sadist Advantages: The battlefield plot is excellent, the description is slightly inferior The battlefield is well written in all aspects The side plot is not forced to change, it is quite interesting A novel that gets better as you go to the end Poisonous points: The writing of Hiruzen in this period is too incompetent The growth line of the protagonist (Feng Huo) is written by Xiaobai In the early stage, it was targeted that he would not defect like this, which is outrageous! ! Clone the Eternal Kaleidoscope? ? Outrageous! Extremely poisonous! ! Another: Few modal particles are used in the dialogue A lot of nonsense, just to be funny? Sometimes it's embarrassing The protagonist feels completely unserious Crazy ghs Another: In the early stage, my Uncle Snake was so bad! Snort!

Suddenly I feel like the reincarnation technique is very powerful! Find an Uchiha girl first, bang! Then reincarnate, get the blood chakra eye, and then kill Tsunade when you grow up, reincarnate again, get the Senju bloodline, practice and practice, and become invincible...

Let me talk about my own views on Uchiha's Sharingan In fact, I think the degree of opening of Sharingan eye is the degree of perversion of a person. Uchiha is a family of love, and the Sharingan is a cursed eye. The so-called love is as deep as hate. When a deeply loved person or thing dies and is hit, the Sharingan will open. It can be regarded as a major blow. Most people who have experienced such a blow will have a certain degree of distortion in their hearts. When the distortion reaches the extreme, the kaleidoscope opens. It can be said to be extremely paranoid. (The Weasel God is the best in the world! No refutation will be accepted!)

I can only help you so far @

Nowadays, Naruto fans all follow the main line, and there are so many memories and daily chapters that can be written. The fullness of the story is not enough at all. The protagonist keeps improving and improving very quickly. In the middle, I add the knots of daily life and anime memories. The number of words for the fullness of the story, the fullness of the protagonist and the supporting characters, how many words can I make up? Daily Help: The progress of the story is too fast, causing the protagonist's strength to grow too fast and collapse. What a pity, now the Hokage goes straight to the target to defeat Princess Kaguya. The middle process is all about improving strength. Improvement is complementary to daily life. The length is too revealing and not plump at all. It's just a process of leveling up and killing monsters, and playing games.

Sealing fire, stopping water, bringing earth, blasting wind, and then running thunder, the five elements are complete.

I like Hong as the heroine😍, no matter the figure, face, temperament, voice, there is nothing to say! What about you?

I suddenly felt that this pig's foot was of no use. The dead ones were still dead, and the living ones were also dead.

I can't stand it anymore after Orochimaru went to the Land of Snow to look for the fourth generation. Sorry, I'll just treat the 4,000 fan points as none. Venomous, everyone bids farewell.

If you have any requirements for the article, don't read it. If you just want to kill time, you can read it It makes me so frustrated. It's really irritating.

To be honest, the more I watch, the angrier I get. The third generation made all kinds of **** operations for the sake of the overall situation. I tolerated it. All the little tricks behind Danzo's back made the protagonist unable to resist. I tolerated it. In the end, Orochimaru threatened the fourth generation couple with him. I couldn't bear it anymore. The more I watched, the more frustrated I became. This is probably the most incompetent protagonist in the novel I have ever read. I felt so angry after reading it that I really couldn't bear it anymore.

I hope more people can see this novel.

I really don't know why so many people like Itachi and Shisui. These two really don't have any brains at all.

Why do I hate pig's feet more and more?

Not to mention that it was frustrating to watch, it was just funny for the sake of being funny, it was too deliberate. Writing about fics is basically fun. It's so frustrating if you write it so frustratingly.

This book is so scary. The kaleidoscope opened in chapter 199, but the ending is still a kaleidoscope. . . This book is very well written But the protagonist is not very powerful, and the ending does not feel as important as Naruto's. .

This book ranks among the top 3 Naruto fanfics I've ever read. It's very well written. I hope the author can continue writing!

I searched for this book, but I couldn't find it. I searched for the author's name before clicking in. Why is this? Has it been blocked?

If you are afraid of torturing the master, I suggest you don't watch this. The protagonist jumps around from morning to night, but in the end he is still a loser. Other time travelers will find ways to restrain their weaknesses. Only the protagonist is constantly climbing up the level of death, and can never do one thing well. He knows that the higher the level of death, his eyes will definitely become blind, but the protagonist is still like this. If you don't think about improvement, it is the protagonist. Frankly speaking, if you are so useless, don't do it.

No matter whether I search for the book title or the author's name, I can't find this one. Is it blocked?

This Naruto fanfic is very comfortable to watch. It is not the dark style that is popular nowadays. It is suitable for people who like Naruto, or in other words, people who have just watched the Naruto animation and are still excited about it. To be honest, I don't understand what's going on now. Why are modern depictions of Naruto so extreme? A passionate comic is like Gong Douwen, darker than historical novels. Is this a two-dimensional class? Konoha does have a lot of black spots, but as the protagonist of a passionate comic, it is still a bit warm. Therefore, the early Naruto fandoms were all in a standard hot-blooded style, or a refreshing style, mixed with some criticism of the darkness of Konoha, which made it very comfortable for novices to watch. But now, alas, basically the beginning is dark and cruel. No, we watch Naruto to read the hot-blooded manga, Will of Fire, not to take a philosophy class. Just like this book, the overall style is still the same as that of the animation in the past, and the darkness is not too dark to make people uncomfortable. I'm not saying that Konoha is White Lotus. For old bookworms who are tired of watching doujins, the current style is naturally more logical. After all, Oda's plot is really solid and grounded, but I still hope that the doujins should continue the spirit and style of the original work instead of judging the internal protagonist too much. So, I recommend that new readers who like Naruto read this book. The writing is still good, but they should not read the book reviews. After all, the author is not a big shot. If he cannot withstand scrutiny, he will really be forced to quit reading the book reviews.

The character of the main character in this book is not well portrayed. , Has no character traits, just like a blind passerby. He wants to learn every technique and has no specialization. Secondly, the author has not watched Naruto seriously 1. The kaleidoscope is the pupil of the soul, the awakening pupil technique and the obsession when opening the eyes. It has something to do with mind, not heredity and genes 2. The author said that Izanagi needs the power of the Senju to use it. This is nonsense. The only ones who have combined the power of the Senju are Madara and Obito. How can the leader of the Najiri clan use it?

I just want to ask, where is Hidan? I become an old man, what next?

Come on, author, I really can't hold on anymore, I'm really a bit poisoned...

It's too poisonous. The protagonist is always on the way to be assassinated by a group of people. The protagonist is helpless and extremely aggrieved. I regret not reading the book review before reading it and I feel angry after reading it. This article is designed to treat hypotension. I don't care whether those Uchiha people, Danzo Orochimaru, are dead or not. I will be even more angry if they don't die later. The protagonist is always framed by Uchiha Danzo Orochimaru when he goes out to do a mission. I can't stand it after taking it. It's too poisonous, too poisonous, too poisonous! Say important things three times!