I Am Cultivating Immortality in Another World

How should I put it? The protagonist I want to write about in this book is a growth-oriented person who sums up experience from failures again and again. This is a normal person. Rather than other novels where a person in his twenties travels back in time and has more powerful strategies than those old foxes who have lived for tens of thousands of years. I couldn't stand this kind of thing, so I decided to write a novel myself. Of course, I am sure that there are many places that I cannot write well. This is inevitable, because I am an ordinary person, and the time I spend on conceiving is very short every day, let alone covering everything. I will make mistakes and write poorly. This is an objective fact and cannot be changed by human subjective consciousness. But like the protagonist, I will reflect, summarize and make progress every day. Therefore, compared with the invincible protagonists in other novels, the protagonist I write like this will look very stupid. This is what I worry about. To be honest, I also find it unpleasant to write like this. After all, everyone wants to see a perfect protagonist, not a protagonist who makes mistakes all the time. Another point is that I want to write something more in line with reality. I have always believed that no one is perfect and the world is not black and white. For example, Lao Wang did the same thing, which was considered a good deed by A, but an evil deed by B. This is because everyone stands in a different position, so their inner reactions to what they see will be different. This is also the reason why I wrote Iron House like this. The first role of Iron House is to make the protagonist change, and the other is to make a truth clear. In the eyes of outsiders, Tie Niuniu is a bad person, but in the eyes of his father and brother, she is a psychological distortion caused by the trauma she suffered in childhood. Instead, they feel that Tie Niuniu is very pitiful. So from the perspective of the servant Ah Fu, Tiefu is a good person from the perspective that Tiefu provides good benefits to the servants; but from the perspective of Lu Yi, he feels that Tiefu is an evil person. Having said all this, I just hope everyone will give Lu Yi a little patience and give me a little patience. I will do my best to write the story in my heart and give you a satisfactory answer. Finally, thank you for your support. I wish you all a happy day and all the best! ! !

It can be seen that the author cannot write emotional drama, so I do not recommend writing this kind of thing in the future. More useful information, I will support the first order when it is released.

The protagonist is also a servant of the Dong family, so the gangster just robs him casually? Then they have become rich. They block the back door of the Dong family every day. When it's time to pay wages, they come out to grab one. The Dong family doesn't want to lose face.

I found that novel writers seem to like to link moral character with appearance. Also, the author of Tie Niuniu describes how extremely ugly she is. It's too cruel for me to say that. If a wealthy family doesn't mention her father, her mother must be a beautiful woman, because a rich man cannot marry an ugly girl. Her father doesn't say she is handsome, but she is definitely not ugly. The daughter she gave birth to is not worthy of being extremely ugly. The pig's foot was beaten half to death, but he was saved by a young lady from another family, a beautiful girl with a kind heart. Most novels are written like this, and you will get aesthetic fatigue after reading them too much. 😅 I will just complain 😐

I just read the first ten chapters, and it feels like the author writes in a hurry. I don't know why you are in such a hurry? Apart from the protagonist and the system, how can you describe it without seeing any other supporting characters? It's all a bunch of self-talking nonsense! To sum it up, the protagonist traveled to another world and got a farming golden finger, and then went to find a spiritual fruit tree to plant, and that's it! ? There is no detailed content at all, so why rush to write the plot? …

Does it have anything to do with the novel about farming and cultivating immortals?

Revenge as soon as you have some strength is actually on the surface. The protagonist must have been a primary school student before traveling through time.

You are also writing novels about cultivating immortals, come on

I have a small suggestion for the author. The map template is a bit crude. I need to enrich other map templates. The cities are called Tuling City, Bingling City, and various spiritual cities. The names are too useless. The author can definitely add some historical legends about the cities.

I thought it was Lu Xun, and I was shocked. Look carefully, oh... It's Lu Yi 😥

Although the writing is a bit poisonous, there is no denying that it is a good article about mortals cultivating immortals. Full subscription + monthly pass will be given. I hope the author will continue his work

The writing is okay. It's the first time I've started following a new book. The updates are very impressive. I'll resume the second update first and wait until there are recommendations and then update more. It's the same thing. Anyway, just add more characters 😁

For the first 24 chapters, write it in more detail and slow down the plot. You can at least write it to 100 chapters. It will be more comfortable to read. At least you won't have to rush like now and write nothing in a hurry.

It's pretty good so far. Just don't make the protagonist too miserable in farming stories.

Chapter 16 Lu Yi is becoming more and more handsome now, and he is becoming more and more steady in his work I think the author is becoming more and more steady in his writing.

It's better than strengthening one point a day. I've been reading this book. Come on, the author.