Wizard: I Picked the Wrong System

It's different from what I thought. I thought he was a man with sudden energy, an ageless body, extraordinary sainthood, and the ability to blow up everything with his bare hands. However, what I saw was an awkward melee wizard. Because the spells he learned from the disabled system could only be released at 0-distance, he refused to learn serious spells on his own. He said he was a martial artist, but he was actually a semi-disabled wizard.

The previous writing is really good, I thought I found a treasure, but what the hell is there at the beginning of the second volume? Did the author forget to write a wizard article? If you want to write about the Three Views, no problem, you can go to history and write about cultivating immortals. Do you want to become a Buddha? "You made me stay up late reading, and then I wrote these things and deleted the comments. Why don't you let people tell you if there is something wrong with your writing? It took you 300 chapters to become a knight. How good are you at writing?" ? ?

You can read it when you don't go to the wizards in the past, but you just make it up in the back. The logic at the bottom of the world is chaotic. I really don't know how ordinary people survive. Moreover, a wizard assessment is only to consume people with wizard talents. On the one hand, it says that many wizards are needed to protect the continent. On the other hand, a group of wizards are selected and eliminated halfway, and the remaining part is used as materials on the road. On the other hand, it is said that cultivating too many consumes too many materials and cannot be supported, so the elimination rate is required. The most annoying thing is that I just read two books on basic knowledge about optics, and I was able to come up with two complete methods for detecting the speed of light, and I even had the drawings of the detection equipment ready. You are not as concerned about Einstein's resurrection, and your explanation is clear and logical, as if you have verified that the method is feasible. It's really funny, and you are more of a professor than a professor.

The book is quite interesting. Although the system it brings is not suitable for this plane and does not provide much help to the protagonist, it can provide a window to observe the perspective of the world and provide opportunities for trial and error. The protagonist does not rely on cheats. The system only plays an excessive role in helping the protagonist understand the world. The most rare thing for the protagonist is the scientific analysis ability of the original world and the imagination that is not bound by this world. Sometimes you can do a lot of things that are reasonable and unexpected, which is the most rare thing.

To be honest, most people come here to read cool articles (because it looks like a semi-invincible article at the beginning, and I can't tell that it will be depressing later on...). Your early writing is very good, with a light force in the dullness, which makes people feel comfortable and refreshing. . . The latest one I wrote is very Cao Dan. The protagonist enters the game in a formal game between wizards. It seems very exciting and exciting, but in fact he is still a noob, and he still feels aggrieved by being manipulated. . . It just made me feel uncomfortable watching it, and I couldn't ignite it at all. . . It ignited, but not completely. .

Originally, this theme was quite good, and it was used as a martial arts system in the wizarding world. There are two types of people attracted by the name. One is to see the conflict between the martial arts system and the wizarding world, and the other is to see the wizarding world. However, both of them are not very good, a bit too white. The martial arts system is not powerful, it keeps getting stuck, and the description of the wizarding world is not imaginative enough. It relies on supplementary details such as the wizard's journey and Hogwarts. The key point is that I can't get five or six points out of ten, and I have no new ideas of my own. Even the main character was written from an embryo, and I could bear it. He practiced martial arts with cats when he was one or two years old. The most unbearable thing was that the supporting characters had no brains. They were all straight forward, and they were all wizards! He was startled, as if he had never seen the world before, and was easily shocked by the protagonist. The communication between the characters is like elementary school students playing house. There is also a good idea to turn witchcraft into martial arts to practice, but, in the book, the earth-type tripping technique suddenly appears and stumbles the enemy. The protagonist uses the characteristic that the soil bulges up quickly to accelerate himself. The author writes that the bulge at the heel is used to accelerate. Who else can try running? We also know that the explosion of the forefoot is the acceleration. Even if you don't write the heel, you directly bounce the soil clods from the standing position to accelerate yourself, and change the angular speed direction of the soil bulge. I am really convinced. Also, wizard apprentices, apprentices, if you don't study witchcraft well and quickly break through this level, you will instead study this and that. Do you have any accumulation? In summary, I didn't like the martial arts system, nor did I like the wizarding world. Not to mention the relationship between the characters. There are some novel ideas, but the writing power is insufficient. Goodbye.

The background written for the protagonist is completely staged. Everything was fine before boarding the ship in the early stage, but after boarding the ship, I couldn't watch anything. More than half of the children were randomly killed, and they were mentally ill? How about you try taking a boat trip with your whole class, and a group of people will come directly to kill you to see who is more suitable for college? What is the use of the setting that the branch college is also his family's wizard? The wizards in the school are all murderers. If you just write a dark wizard school, it will feel better than you are now. Fight with knights, learn a trick and become a superman. Why do you mention wizards? What misunderstandings do you have about wizards?

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🙂 Another novel that pits Western fantasy against fantasy, between close combat and long-range combat to attract readers? The wizards written by the author should be the typical wizards who have emerged in recent years with high attack and low defense. As for martial arts... The martial arts in some novels are simply all-round!

I don't understand why the author is so anxious to make the protagonist learn something. The protagonist is like a fool who drinks animal milk and bears a blood feud? Or is it like the Saiyans, who are gods? Your dad will be beaten by your grandpa even if he performs magic, because he is afraid that you will not develop well You are better off yourself, just exercise like crazy, exercise is good? Why do so many people train themselves into dwarfs after practicing muscle training since childhood? What's more, you are even more extreme than him, and you started to act recklessly at the age of one In a world where practicing martial arts and martial arts has to affect your development, why are you so anxious?