Wizard: I Brought the Wrong System

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It's different from what I thought. I thought he was a man with sudden energy, an ageless body, extraordinary sainthood, and the ability to blow up everything with his bare hands. However, what I saw was an awkward melee wizard. Because the spells he learned from the disabled system could only be released at 0-distance, he refused to learn serious spells on his own. He said he was a martial artist, but he was actually a semi-disabled wizard.

The previous writing is really good, I thought I found a treasure, but what the hell is there at the beginning of the second volume? Did the author forget to write a wizard article? If you want to write about the Three Views, no problem, you can go to history and write about cultivating immortals. Do you want to become a Buddha? "You made me stay up late reading, and then I wrote these things and deleted the comments. Why don't you let people tell you if there is something wrong with your writing? It took you 300 chapters to become a knight. How good are you at writing?" ? ?

The book is quite interesting. Although the system it brings is not suitable for this plane and does not provide much help to the protagonist, it can provide a window to observe the perspective of the world and provide opportunities for trial and error. The protagonist does not rely on cheats. The system only plays an excessive role in helping the protagonist understand the world. The most rare thing for the protagonist is the scientific analysis ability of the original world and the imagination that is not bound by this world. Sometimes you can do a lot of things that are reasonable and unexpected, which is the most rare thing.

You can read it when you don't go to the wizards in the past, but you just make it up in the back. The logic at the bottom of the world is chaotic. I really don't know how ordinary people survive. Moreover, a wizard assessment is only to consume people with wizard talents. On the one hand, it says that many wizards are needed to protect the continent. On the other hand, a group of wizards are selected and eliminated halfway, and the remaining part is used as materials on the road. On the other hand, it is said that cultivating too many consumes too many materials and cannot be supported, so the elimination rate is required. The most annoying thing is that I just read two books on basic knowledge about optics, and I was able to come up with two complete methods for detecting the speed of light, and I even had the drawings of the detection equipment ready. You are not as concerned about Einstein's resurrection, and your explanation is clear and logical, as if you have verified that the method is feasible. It's really funny, and you are more of a professor than a professor.

To be honest, most people come here to read cool articles (because it looks like a semi-invincible article at the beginning, and I can't tell that it will be depressing later on...). Your early writing is very good, with a light force in the dullness, which makes people feel comfortable and refreshing. . . The latest one I wrote is very Cao Dan. The protagonist enters the game in a formal game between wizards. It seems very exciting and exciting, but in fact he is still a noob, and he still feels aggrieved by being manipulated. . . It just made me feel uncomfortable watching it, and I couldn't ignite it at all. . . It ignited, but not completely. .

Originally, this theme was quite good, and it was used as a martial arts system in the wizarding world. There are two types of people attracted by the name. One is to see the conflict between the martial arts system and the wizarding world, and the other is to see the wizarding world. However, both of them are not very good, a bit too white. The martial arts system is not powerful, it keeps getting stuck, and the description of the wizarding world is not imaginative enough. It relies on supplementary details such as the wizard's journey and Hogwarts. The key point is that I can't get five or six points out of ten, and I have no new ideas of my own. Even the main character was written from an embryo, and I could bear it. He practiced martial arts with cats when he was one or two years old. The most unbearable thing was that the supporting characters had no brains. They were all straight forward, and they were all wizards! He was startled, as if he had never seen the world before, and was easily shocked by the protagonist. The communication between the characters is like elementary school students playing house. There is also a good idea to turn witchcraft into martial arts to practice, but, in the book, the earth-type tripping technique suddenly appears and stumbles the enemy. The protagonist uses the characteristic that the soil bulges up quickly to accelerate himself. The author writes that the bulge at the heel is used to accelerate. Who else can try running? We also know that the explosion of the forefoot is the acceleration. Even if you don't write the heel, you directly bounce the soil clods from the standing position to accelerate yourself, and change the angular speed direction of the soil bulge. I am really convinced. Also, wizard apprentices, apprentices, if you don't study witchcraft well and quickly break through this level, you will instead study this and that. Do you have any accumulation? In summary, I didn't like the martial arts system, nor did I like the wizarding world. Not to mention the relationship between the characters. There are some novel ideas, but the writing power is insufficient. Goodbye.

The background written for the protagonist is completely staged. Everything was fine before boarding the ship in the early stage, but after boarding the ship, I couldn't watch anything. More than half of the children were randomly killed, and they were mentally ill? How about you try taking a boat trip with your whole class, and a group of people will come directly to kill you to see who is more suitable for college? What is the use of the setting that the branch college is also his family's wizard? The wizards in the school are all murderers. If you just write a dark wizard school, it will feel better than you are now. Fight with knights, learn a trick and become a superman. Why do you mention wizards? What misunderstandings do you have about wizards?

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🙂 Another novel that pits Western fantasy against fantasy, between close combat and long-range combat to attract readers? The wizards written by the author should be the typical wizards who have emerged in recent years with high attack and low defense. As for martial arts... The martial arts in some novels are simply all-round!

I don't understand why the author is so anxious to make the protagonist learn something. The protagonist is like a fool who drinks animal milk and bears a blood feud? Or is it like the Saiyans, who are gods? Your dad will be beaten by your grandpa even if he performs magic, because he is afraid that you will not develop well You are better off yourself, just exercise like crazy, exercise is good? Why do so many people train themselves into dwarfs after practicing muscle training since childhood? What's more, you are even more extreme than him, and you started to act recklessly at the age of one In a world where practicing martial arts and martial arts has to affect your development, why are you so anxious?

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Subscribe to a chapter to leave a message and see the entrance test, where a group of teenagers were put on a ship and fought with a group of pirates. What is the purpose of this trial? What abilities do you want to demonstrate among students? I would like to ask what the author's general thoughts were when writing this plot? The werewolf part can be understood as what the author wants to express: "Those who are not of my race will have different hearts." I really don't understand the plot of this trial Come on, I hope to see your work on the homepage later

It was impromptu and came back disappointed. When the author decided to try to use wizards to assimilate the martial arts system, the upper limit was already set. Think about the tastes of most readers who came in after reading the title, and what expectations they came in with. Some ideas can support a whole book, but you give up on your own initiative. When I continued reading, I found that it was not so eye-catching that I wanted to stay and see the ending. Chapter 191 declared the abandonment of the book.

Isn't this father very suitable? How could a father put a werewolf cub in front of his two-year-old son and trigger the werewolf's aggression and put his child in danger? The purpose is just to see yourself in pain and injury?

This trial is so feeble-minded and completely illogical. Most of the people left like this are either timid and hiding behind or are really lucky. The brave ones are all dead. What kind of trial is this? Isn't it nonsense to also record the character and choose the one with good heart? Can these groups of mostly cowards and a few lucky ones get far? When I read the comments made by book friends in this chapter, I also thought that maybe it was a phantom that kept those who performed well and sent back those who were lagging behind and those who were cowards. It turned out that I guessed wrong. As soon as the main character's mother came out, I immediately felt that I might as well not have read the previous content of the book. Suddenly, the evaluation plummeted, and my interest in the later parts suddenly faded There were also a lot of meaningless comments in the book review area. I haven't read the book review section before, but I was attracted by the title. If I had seen this book review section earlier, the possibility of reading the book would have been reduced by several percent. I originally wanted to share my evaluation of the book's plot, but in the end I saw some meaningless things, which drowned out the real book reviews.

The writing in the front is pretty good, but starting from the back, a few strange poems and essays appear from time to time, which feels so embarrassing.

Sure enough, several innocent passers-by must be sacrificed to make the protagonist mentally abnormal 🤫

The writing pace is so slow, I remember the last time I read this book, it was the last time Do you want to be the second superdimensional warlock?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist wants to save people, all kinds of wrongs of others, all kinds of memories of getting along with friends, all kinds of sensationalism, I can see that the author is trying to sensationalize, but I feel calm inside because it is too contrived. The author is contrived, and so is the protagonist.

I don't know what the follow-up will be like. Currently, the protagonist is a magic-armored samurai who uses the power of the abyss, and the most important strength in fighting is not high. What should I do in the future to become a real samurai?

Author, you are using a fantasy formula to write about wizards. It's embarrassing. Wizards do anything for profit and dare to do any experimental research for knowledge. Wizards are rational researchers and indulgers of desires, not reformers who support justice. You can refer to the Mysterious Journey that I wrote before. I have been more liberal in writing recently.

Author, your writing is too awkward. I couldn't stand the chapter about the on-board assessment. Wizards are representatives of reason. As a result, you portrayed a hot-blooded and impulsive protagonist. This character is completely unsuitable for being a wizard, no matter how talented he is. Forcibly explaining will only create a feeling of being divorced from reality and will not allow readers to get involved at all. This is a mismatch between personality and occupation. This is just like in reality, if a person with a careless personality does delicate work, problems will occur sooner or later. This is simply inevitable. And this kind of passionate and impulsive protagonist was written 10 years ago.

It's a very good idea, but the author's writing is not strong enough. The second volume is very awkward, the character conflicts are blunt, and the plot is not well laid out. Most of the level 3 exit index is given to this idea.

This kind of familiarity, but also a little warm feeling, comfortable and peaceful, coupled with some familiar vocabulary such as magic, it feels like another novel, but with its own unique creativity and style. It is great, come on, author!

I don't understand the use of the recent grilled fish plot. Maybe my requirements are too high? Or is the author updating too slowly? What do you think?

The Mid-Autumn Festival has passed. Have you taken pictures of the moon? (๑`･ᴗ･´๑) I really want to see the moon that everyone took. ●▽● Okay, let me show the moon I took first! (◍•ᴗ•◍) I hope I can harvest everyone's moon. (ง •̀_•́)ง

The writing is okay, so why are the trolls so finessed?

The beginning and the ideas are pretty good, but the plot that follows is really unwatchable, it ends in an anticlimax.

The writing is really good. I feel very comfortable. I have ordered all of them. Please support me. Don't let me support myself to death. The author is great 🤭