On the Journey to the West, Tushita Burned Fire for Fifty Years
人在西游，兜率烧火五十年
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- Ongoing
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- 2k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Mythic Cultivation
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- 5y ago
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- Qidian
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It's poisonous. The prince's boy has not become an immortal, but he has the same cultivation level as the heavenly soldiers, and then he has to go out to buy elixirs. It's like selling salt at home and you have to go out to buy it. Your Majesty, do you think his boy will be short of elixirs and a pig can be raised as an immortal?
It's not bad, the key is that you didn't find a good subject. A seventh-rank official in front of the prime minister, or an old gentleman. What is this concept? You said that your cultivation is gone, and there is a saying that beats the dog to see the master. Who dares?
If a boss keeps a dog at home, but it is not as good as a wild dog, how can he lose face?
It doesn't have the majestic atmosphere of immortality, but is full of the secular atmosphere of the market. Not like an immortal, but like a secular dynasty wearing immortal skin. Anyway, it doesn't look good and is not attractive.
Talent, is the protagonist actually a mortal? 🤫 Mortals have been burning fire for hundreds of years.
Tai Shang has no character at all🤫
It's rubbish. It's unreasonable and tough. If it doesn't work, just change it. You're a fan of Journey to the West and it's unreasonable. This is bullshit in the comment area.
Wouldn't it be impossible to write without a system? It's a system again.
This is not a Journey to the West fanfic written in The Legend of Wukong, right? It's unpleasant to look at
I think you can learn from the writing style of the one next door, The Demon Slayer Division, which is a brilliant and majestic way of immortality. Only then will it have the flavor of an immortal. You this. . . Clothed in fairy skin, the essence of the writing style is that the class squeezes the bottom, which is really inconsiderate. It's too tacky, not even remotely fairy-like. Although other original works of Journey to the West are also dark, the writing style is still very fairy-like. You just have a gloomy street style of writing, which has nothing to do with Xianxia.