Revival: Taking Down a Ghost Tamer Solo from the Start

It is recommended that the author not write about Yang Jian. If you can't suppress it, your recovery will be accelerated, and you may die. The Yang Jian you wrote is too childish, like a child. Yang Jian in Fo Ye's works will not behave in a childish manner. For example, the scene where Yang Jian goes to the protagonist's home and sees the protagonist's computer equipment. He will be surprised but not "wow" 🙂 The Yang Jian you wrote feels like a combination of Zhang Wei and Yang Jian

Target the prehistoric Little Styx River. It is best to develop to the level of Styx early. There are 480 million clones who died in his stead. The number of deaths is reset every day. There is a lotus flag for defense and 2 swords for attack. It comes with blood sea suppression and can imprison all kinds of ghosts.

Ghost Files: Ghost Sedan One of the puzzle pieces of the Mummy Bride, it looks like a somewhat decayed and peeling sedan, revealing its underlying color. Murder rule one: See the sedan chair with your own eyes or be seen by it, and its decoration is red. Murder rule two: There is a memory of the sedan chair in the mind (you can also see the picture), and it is within a radius of 500 meters of the sedan chair. As long as one of the rules is triggered, you will be sucked into the sedan chair and become the ghost slave of the sedan chair. Hazard level: B. Li Gui has no ghosts and cannot move on its own, but after having 8 ghost slaves, it can move around by using the ghost slaves to carry the sedan. Horror level: A. Strengthening method: After inhaling a ghost with a lower terror level than itself, transform the ghost into one of the sedan bearers. After the transformation is successful, the killing pattern and terror level will be increased. Disadvantages: The sedan-carrying ghost or ghost slave can be separated by special ghosts or strange items. Background: The ghost sedan chair wanders around the city looking for its bride. Anyone wearing a red decoration will be considered a bride by it, and both men and women will be invited to the sedan chair by it.

Severe ghost blood is far from that simple. Just look at the future projector in Japan and you will know that Yang Jian's level of recovery can be suppressed in the blood lake. It is conceivable how terrifying this thing is. In terms of suppression ability, it is still better than ghosts. Ghosts have a quantity limit, but ghost blood has no quantity limit. Maybe this ghost blood may be the blood of the ghost bride or the blood of ghosts.

🙂 Yang Jian was going to Japan next. He was worried about his old mother staying in Dajing City, so he entrusted his mother to Li Hua. When Yang Jian came back, he found that Li Hua had already argued with Yang's mother. "Brother, from now on we can talk about our own affairs. You call me dad and I call you brother." After hearing what Li Hua said, Yang Jian ran away on the spot. Just when Yang Jian was firing on all cylinders and was about to have a life-or-death showdown with Li Hua, Yang's mother appeared. "Son, I won't allow you to do this to your Uncle Li. And I already have your younger brother or sister in my belly!" Looking at Mother Yang holding Li Hua's arm, she looked warm. Yang Jian's heart was bleeding, but there was nothing he could do. From now on, no one knows the whereabouts of ghost-eyed detective Yang Jian, except that there is an emotionless driver on a certain bus.

It's very good. I read it in one go. There is no poisonous point. The description of the garage ghost in the first chapter is very good. It has a visceral taste. Let me tell you some of my personal opinions 1. The offensive supernatural objects that appear in the future must have side effects. This is a nail in the coffin. There is no need for such restrictions, but there must be great limitations 2. Don't have irregular and unrestricted smart ghosts. Although chatting with the garage ghost can communicate with people normally, overall it is like a QQ automatic reply program. , Still has no wisdom, like the vellum ghost cupboard wish ghost. Although it has or is suspected to be intelligent, its actions are either greatly restricted, or the rules of ghosts are fully demonstrated around keywords such as wishing and host. It must not happen that a smart ghost pretends to be a person and sneaks into the headquarters to plan a conspiracy. Ghost puzzle b, a directly suppresses b, and then the protagonist can easily control it without any damage, which is too boring. In this regard, the protagonist has the help of the knocking ghost when controlling the ghost blood, which is great 4. Don't frequent A-level ghosts, S-level ghosts, and those with ghosts. Ghosts or ghost masters, ghosts or ghost masters with the ability to suppress, mirror ghosts, shadow ghosts, clone ghosts, dream ghosts, these appear more often in traditional horror texts or mysterious recovery texts 5. Try to reduce the chance of ghost puzzles, if the puzzle is really There are so many people in charge of cities who have a high probability of hearing about or encountering them in their short lives. If they know that the two ghosts are in balance, they will try it with a high probability on the eve of recovery. Even if the probability of failure is high, most ghost masters will only control one. It only shows that the probability of puzzle ghosts or mechanism conflict ghosts is very low. , How to let ordinary people control ghosts, directly create a big golden house, a C-level ghost with weak killing ability, and then get a group of monkeys and apes, and let a powerful ghost controller do experiments and stuff ghosts into their bodies. Under what circumstances is it easiest to control them? This is directly beside the point. The best way is not to involve animals.

I felt it was well written, and I finally saw a somewhat human protagonist. What a pity eunuch

Seeing that the protagonist was supporting Huanggang Village, Wang Xiaoming asked the protagonist to deal with the ghost coffin. The protagonist's request turned out to be a ghost candle, and he thought that Wang Xiaoming couldn't get another one for the time being. Damn, his IQ was drunk. The ghost is so terrifying, but the protagonist is confident that he can handle it. The original protagonist Xiao Yang didn't even dare to vouch for it. The protagonist doesn't have a golden finger, so why not! Forget about risking resuscitation to save Xiao Yang, and agreeing to deal with the ghost coffin is really stupid. I have read several mysterious fanfics, and in order to highlight Wang Xiaoming's high IQ, they all made the protagonist look like an NT.

Suggestions 1. Change the title of the book. At present, the overall quality of the starting point articles has deteriorated. Most of the titles of some mindless and unhappy articles are "People are in xx, starting point xx". You are accurately stepping on the trap, and it is not easy to search. 2. There are currently more than 100 chapters, and the overall quality is still good. Yes, but the strength is a bit too fast. Yang Jian defeated the starving ghosts in about 270 chapters, and the maximum number of chapters in this book is 150. The strength improved too fast, and it probably collapsed after more than 200 chapters. This is the case in the next few books 3. After solving the hungry ghosts, the protagonist is almost the same It's just top-notch. The plot in the future will be very difficult. It's impossible to go around the bus, ghosts, ghosts, paintings, post office clocks, etc. Ordinary ghosts can handle it easily. It's very difficult to create a scary atmosphere. 4. Try to make Yang Jian have a sense of presence, don't just be there During the meeting, we paid attention to his ideas because of his strength. Don't change the plot too much. For example, the ghost rope has little effect on him. Just take it. If you take his hatchet and music box, he might really be cut to death by Fang Shiming. He should do what he should do and leave some scenes for him.

It's ridiculous for Ping Jiayao to have feelings for Li Hua. She has never even met her in person. She can feel feelings for her just by looking at photos at most. Is Ping Jiayao still a human being? It feels like she will fall in love with any man she sees.