Start Cultivating Immortality from Sparrows

Let's not talk about the plot content first. At present, there are too many people watching time travel 😥😥 The protagonist, the protagonist's gay friend, and the protagonist's girlfriend have all traveled through time. You say you want to write a group portrait, but the main character is the main character in the book. You say it's not a group portrait, but there are so many people who have traveled through time that you don't know where to focus. At present, I don't know what the meaning of the other two time travels is. It seems that it doesn't matter if they are deleted. It will not affect the protagonist's exploration of this world at all. On the contrary, I think it is better not to have so many time travels. Let's talk about the plot. Some of them still have eye-catching writing styles, while others fall into cliche plots. But because there are too many people who have traveled through time, readers simply don't know where to focus. They are all modern people who have traveled through time. You have become a carefree immortal, the daughter of a royal relative, but I have become a hard worker with no immortality.

The writing is very good, the plot and language are very smooth and novel, and it is quite comfortable to read. The pace is a bit slower.

There is a cloud in the northwest sky, and crows are falling on the phoenix flock. The room is full of heroes. Who is the king and who is the minister.

Many authors should not write about monsters with human souls, but instead write about monsters with an IQ equivalent to that of an adult. Monsters must have a monster stance. The most annoying thing about writing about monsters is that they have to kneel down and lick humans. That is too poisonous.

After all, it's not that the protagonist is king and dominates, the supporting characters are weak in IQ, and there's no underworld cultivating immortality, biting off some resources. There is no plot to subdue the heroine~~ If you keep this style, it will definitely not be bad. In addition, I hope the author, if he doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, will stop writing and don't waste a good book! !

Strange, this book gives me a strange feeling. I don't have the desire to read it, but I can't explain why I don't want to read it. Logically speaking, I still like to read it as a book about cultivating immortals. I think the plot of this book is okay, and there is nothing that I feel is very toxic, but I just don't have the desire to read it. What is going on? ? ? First time encountering such a book

It's chapter sixty-five and the protagonist is still running around without studying his abilities. When encountering enemies, they will stare blankly and sprinkle a few drops of water to scare them. The simplest thing is to study how much water can be controlled at one time? Can you bring a water bottle with you? Bring some toxic liquid, such as the venom of a poisonous snake. Is it not difficult to obtain? Also, since I can control water, can I fill a sealed bamboo tube with water to make a simple flying sword? Is it more harmful than a few drops of water?

When I saw Chapter 62, there was a second time traveler who was not my cup of tea 🌹

The sparrows described by the author are just humans wearing sparrow skins...

The protagonist is inexplicably strong, so he is strong just because he inherited a golden elixir? And it's inexplicable that you can beat the Yuanshen Realm. The Yuanshen Realm is the function of transforming the Yuanshen into a human form? Shouldn't it be stronger than a normal person's spirit? So the soul is the same as ordinary people? People in the Yuanshen realm can't even see the protagonist's parallel imports, and they can't beat him. Hatred is also inexplicable, and so are actions. The setting is that the old Taoist priest and the protagonist are as close as brothers, but the protagonist is like watching a monkey, watching the old Taoist priest play. Then he didn't recognize or talk to the old Taoist priest. As a result, the old Taoist priest was like a boy giving money, boasting about giving things to the protagonist. This is very poisonous, okay? The only role of the old Taoist priest is to please the male protagonist and then take him to fly. He also calls him a good brother. True cousins

Those of you who say they look good are just brushes, right? After reading Golden Chapter 3, I was persuaded to quit on the spot.

It's strange, what is this book about? I have been practicing Taoism for six or seven years, but I don't know it at all. Weird, weird!

The beginning feels a bit like Bad Ke Qiyuan, but the pace is too slow, twice as slow as Bad Ke Qiyuan. It's been more than eighty chapters, and the protagonist has not yet practiced any martial arts. He has not even melted his crossbones. He can be regarded as a small waterbender, but his power is almost useless, and he can only write with water. As long as anyone who has appeared is considered a monster, they are better than the protagonist. It's 100,000 words, so at least I'll give you a technique and a bigger adventure. The younger brother has transformed, and the protagonist has not yet refined the crossbones, so he is speechless. . .

The title of this book feels like kneeling down to the human race again 😰

Even though they were friends in the past life, liars are still annoying. The old man must either change his mind or punish him severely, otherwise it will get worse and worse.

It's well written. It shows the world from a sparrow's perspective. It has a good idea and the plot is cleverly written. The parents of the sparrows are short-lived, the people in the village are poor and cunning, the Qian family is cannibalistic... The complicated and repetitive human nature and social aspects are vividly displayed on the page. But the bird always stands on the branch, watching it rise and fall, its perspective is strange, and its behavior is free and easy but not wanton. I finished reading it without realizing it... This kind of novel is easy to lose control of the rhythm in the later stage and fall into a protracted and cliche plot. For example, the book "Lan Ke Qi Yuan" with a similar style is regrettable in the later stage. This book is really good so far and has a lot to say. Come on, author.

I feel that according to the author's beginning, there is always a feeling that Jin Ni is the villain and Heijiao is framed. Black Jiao also gives fish to the fisherman and his son, which doesn't seem like a villain. And I really don't like the supporting role of the old Taoist priest. . . . It's okay to open a new book based on the setting of an old Taoist priest, with this as the protagonist, pretending to be a good-for-nothing, or something like that. . . . Moreover, as a best friend in his previous life, the protagonist is now starting to cultivate immortality step by step. Apart from the protagonist secretly saving him a few times, I don't know what arrangements will be made in the future. . . It is not impossible to have such an old Taoist priest as a supporting character to promote the development of the plot, but it is really awkward to set it as a best friend who traveled through time together, and then the protagonist does not recognize him. . . . I hope the author will update it soon and see what he writes next (´-ι_-｀)

Come on, it's enough food, it's written very well. More updates, it's so uncomfortable to watch

Except for the Taoist priest who was a bit disgusted, everything else was pretty good.

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and it seems like it was written by a veteran. It's pretty good. I'll look forward to it later. I'll vote for you.

The writing is very interesting and eye-catching, but the number of words is too few and it is faster and faster

. . Double wear, the routine is also old. Not interesting.

The writing is very interesting, why did you collect it so much?

Woo woo woo, I've given you the ticket, you have to work hard.

🙂It's a very nice book. But I keep writing intermittently, at least I say why. I can't read it from the beginning every time I start updating. It's been too long.

I came to visit with my work "Rebirth as a Dog, Evolving from Tibetan Mastiff Dorje", thank you! The work has been collected. The author has great imagination and writes well

Anyone who has watched it can tell me what the plot is next.

Which book to copy? I have the impression that I copied someone else's work, and the writing is not that good. Exactly the same plot, exactly the same plot