Cultivating Immortality, Starting as a Sparrow

A patch of cloud hangs in the northwestern sky, where crows alight among a flock of phoenixes. The room is full of heroes; who is the ruler and who is the subject?

Many authors of the "monster genre" shouldn't write about creatures with human souls; they should write them with intelligence equivalent to an adult. Monsters should have a monster's perspective. What I hate most is writing about monsters who have to fawn over humans; that's just too cruel.

At least it's not about the protagonist becoming king and the supporting characters having questionable intelligence, nor is it about gangsters cultivating immortality and fighting tooth and nail for resources. There are no scenes where the female lead becomes mentally challenged. If they maintain this style, it definitely won't be bad. Also, I hope the author, if you can't write romance scenes, then don't write them at all. Please don't ruin a perfectly good book!!

This book gives me a strange feeling. I have no desire to read it, but I can't quite put my finger on why. I usually enjoy cultivation novels, and the plot seems alright; there's nothing particularly toxic about it. But I just have no desire to read it. What's going on? This is the first time I've encountered a book like this.

Putting the plot aside for now, there are just too many time travelers! 😥😥 The protagonist, his best friend, his girlfriend—they've all transmigrated. You say you're trying to write an ensemble piece, but the book focuses entirely on the protagonist. You say it's not an ensemble piece, but with so many time travelers, it's hard to know where to place the focus.

It's chapter 65 already, and the protagonist is still running around aimlessly, not even bothering to research his abilities. When he encounters an enemy, he just stares blankly and tries to scare them with a few drops of water. At the very least, research how much water he can control at once! Why not carry a water jug ​​with you?

Having read up to chapter 62, there's a second transmigrator, but he's not my type. 🌹

The sparrows depicted by the author are merely humans in sparrow skin...

The protagonist's strength is inexplicable. He just inherited a Golden Core and suddenly he's powerful? And he can even defeat someone in the Nascent Soul Realm? It's baffling. The Nascent Soul Realm's only function is to transform their primordial spirit into human form? Shouldn't their primordial spirit be stronger than a normal person's?

Those of you saying it's good, are you just ripping people off? After reading the first three chapters, I immediately gave up.