Cultivating Immortality, Starting as a Sparrow

There is a cloud in the northwest sky, and crows are falling on the phoenix flock. The room is full of heroes. Who is the king and who is the minister.

Many authors should not write about monsters with human souls, but instead write about monsters with an IQ equivalent to that of an adult. Monsters must have a monster stance. The most annoying thing about writing about monsters is that they have to kneel down and lick humans. That is too poisonous.

After all, it's not that the protagonist is king and dominates, the supporting characters are weak in IQ, and there's no underworld cultivating immortality, biting off some resources. There is no plot to subdue the heroine~~ If you keep this style, it will definitely not be bad. In addition, I hope the author, if he doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, will stop writing and don't waste a good book! !

Strange, this book gives me a strange feeling. I don't have the desire to read it, but I can't explain why I don't want to read it. Logically speaking, I still like to read it as a book about cultivating immortals. I think the plot of this book is okay, and there is nothing that I feel is very toxic, but I just don't have the desire to read it. What is going on? ? ? First time encountering such a book

Let's not talk about the plot content first. At present, there are too many people watching time travel 😥😥 The protagonist, the protagonist's gay friend, and the protagonist's girlfriend have all traveled through time. You say you want to write a group portrait, but the main character is the main character in the book. You say it's not a group portrait, but there are so many people who have traveled through time that you don't know where to focus. At present, I don't know what the meaning of the other two time travels is. It seems that it doesn't matter if they are deleted. It will not affect the protagonist's exploration of this world at all. On the contrary, I think it is better not to have so many time travels. Let's talk about the plot. Some of them still have eye-catching writing styles, while others fall into cliche plots. But because there are too many people who have traveled through time, readers simply don't know where to focus. They are all modern people who have traveled through time. You have become a carefree immortal, the daughter of a royal relative, but I have become a hard worker with no immortality.

It's chapter sixty-five and the protagonist is still running around without studying his abilities. When encountering enemies, they will stare blankly and sprinkle a few drops of water to scare them. The simplest thing is to study how much water can be controlled at one time? Can you bring a water bottle with you? Bring some toxic liquid, such as the venom of a poisonous snake. Is it not difficult to obtain? Also, since I can control water, can I fill a sealed bamboo tube with water to make a simple flying sword? Is it more harmful than a few drops of water?

When I saw Chapter 62, there was a second time traveler who was not my cup of tea 🌹

The sparrows described by the author are just humans wearing sparrow skins...

The protagonist is inexplicably strong, so he is strong just because he inherited a golden elixir? And it's inexplicable that you can beat the Yuanshen Realm. The Yuanshen Realm is the function of transforming the Yuanshen into a human form? Shouldn't it be stronger than a normal person's spirit? So the soul is the same as ordinary people? People in the Yuanshen realm can't even see the protagonist's parallel imports, and they can't beat him. Hatred is also inexplicable, and so are actions. The setting is that the old Taoist priest and the protagonist are as close as brothers, but the protagonist is like watching a monkey, watching the old Taoist priest play. Then he didn't recognize or talk to the old Taoist priest. As a result, the old Taoist priest was like a boy giving money, boasting about giving things to the protagonist. This is very poisonous, okay? The only role of the old Taoist priest is to please the male protagonist and then take him to fly. He also calls him a good brother. True cousins

Those of you who say they look good are just brushes, right? After reading Golden Chapter 3, I was persuaded to quit on the spot.