When I Escape from Prison, I Do Whatever I Want

Author, please don't change your style! Nowadays, people who watch martial arts movies don't watch them for the fighting scenes, so it's better to watch fairy tales and fantasy movies. When watching martial arts, you need to see the spirit of chivalry, as well as the grudges and hatreds of the ancient world. Swordsman came here just to see the politics of Jianghu. These are the die-hard fans. As long as you don't change, we will not abandon the book.

You are the best licking dog in the world. How did you come up with the idea of ​​licking through the steel plate?

The writing is quite interesting, but the pace is a bit slow and there is a bit too much content about crazy mental activities.

It's understandable that I went crazy after two years of darkness, but then I immediately started to live the life of a charlatan who saved this and that. Today I save a beggar, and tomorrow I save a woman. I'm really convinced.

The whole story is just a conjecture in Ren Woxing's mind after he was imprisoned and went crazy. He did not create any martial arts, nor did he escape. Tong Baixiong, Dongfang Bubai, Four Friends of the South of the Yangtze River, the Sound of the Qin, etc., All do not exist. Once Dongfang Bubai puts him in prison, no one will look at him anymore, and the rest is all conjecture.

Well. What are you doing after you break out of jail? Just like a normal person. Two years of darkness. I see now in one breath. I thought about it after the depression. There will be a wave of release. Also tnd is depressing. Then what else should I watch? Frustrated.

Jailbreak, jailbreak, what people want to see is just the jailbreak process. Whether it's the American drama Prison Break or the movie The Shawshank Redemption, what audiences like to watch is the protagonist's perseverance in the process of escaping. In the end, the protagonist successfully escapes from prison, the story ends, and everyone is happy. It can be seen that the author has conducted in-depth research on the prison escape, but the author's energy and energy seemed to be exhausted after the prison escape was successful. Therefore, people can't help but think that it is best to end the book with the successful escape chapter. After the prison escape, the story of Let Me Go Heroic and righteous has lost the aura of the previous chapters in the prison camp, and has a sense of continuation. Just some humble opinions, benevolence sees benevolence and wisdom sees wisdom

It is said that three golden chapters or a good beginning can attract readers. What the hell is written in the first ten chapters of this book? The protagonist is always shouting, panicking, eating and waiting for death, and is as fearless and as mentally retarded as possible. Such a protagonist's character is completely different from his domineering personality. Even though I had my own way in the dungeon, I never thought of giving up. The protagonist has a lot of shit.

The idea of ​​"Ren Wo Xing" who is locked up in time travel is good, but the setting of martial arts in the book is completely random, which makes people wonder whether the author has read Jin Yong's novels in detail. For example, all martial arts require taking medicine, and there are such outrageous settings. Another example is the Beiming Magic Power, which requires you to eat red clams before you can absorb the power. You are going crazy. The Manggu Clam can obviously poison all living things while it is alive. After voluntarily entering Duan Yu's body, Duan Yu can ward off all kinds of poisons, which is closely related to the Beiming Magic.

The story about being imprisoned is good, but it won't work after being released. The protagonist's 300-year-old energy will be deflated every time something happens. It's okay to be deflated. After all, the protagonist is a modern ordinary person. It's understandable that he doesn't understand some twists and turns, but something happens every time. I don't know if it's difficult to write. It's uncomfortable, but it's really uncomfortable to watch, and after being locked up in a dark room for so long, the protagonist's character seems to have not changed at all. I don't want to describe a neurotic person like Batman and the Joker, but at least there can be some changes. The result is still submissive and indecisive.

In fact, Ren Wo Xing's Star Absorbing Technique is based on the logic of the way of people, and the loss is not enough to serve more than enough, absorbing the essence of others for one's own use. The protagonist can also use the theory of Tao Te Ching and Yin Fu Jing to improve the intention of absorbing people's internal energy, sublimate it into the coexistence of heaven and man, and integrate the world. , My heart is the direction of the heart of heaven, I control the aura of heaven and earth, and develop into immortality. This kind of golden finger can basically free the protagonist from dependence on external objects, and can also greatly strengthen himself. After reading a few pictures, I think the protagonist seems to have this idea, but as he goes on, he becomes more and more crazy, and the ideas of the imagination become more and more inferior, a bit incomprehensible, and it gives me a headache 😵 I hope the author can refer to my suggestions.

I guess the protagonist is really screwed up after being imprisoned, and the protagonist actually escaped from the cell and had to find a stand-in. In fact, I think the author has a bug in writing this way. After all, it was not that easy to find someone in ancient times. If you just hide in a deep mountain and old forest, others will not be able to find you. Even if you want to stay in a place with people and disguise yourself, it is not so easy to be found. It is not like now, with cameras everywhere. I feel that it is understandable that the author set this up to write more plots.

It's not well written, and it's one of the more interesting ones. After all, Swordsman has written many other genres. This is the first time I've seen the martial arts master's version of Ren Woxing.

Why didn't you just leave after escaping? Why did you have to go back to the prison? Anyway, even if he couldn't defeat Dongfang Bubai, no one would be able to find him if he hid. The plot after going out also feels chaotic and tasteless, and I don't know what to express.

It was okay at the beginning, quite interesting, but then it gradually became very ink-blazing. I skipped it after chapter 60. I couldn't hold it in anymore and skipped to chapter 90 when the main character appeared. I didn't expect the writing to be even more frustrating. Everything felt wrong and made me want to smash my phone. Could the author have done it while writing? Listen to some opinions from readers. One or two people said that you might be a troll because of something wrong with you. Many people said that you should consider whether there is really a problem. You write books to make money. Only if we are willing to continue reading can you make money. If you can't read anymore, why are you so passionate about writing? Let's talk about the pig's feet again. You keep emphasizing that he is a modern person with an immature soul and a bit of a virgin. But if a normal person can survive after being imprisoned and insulted in the dark for several years, are you sure, author, that he is still a normal modern person? You can't live without going crazy. Why did the author ignore this?

I should have posted this review earlier, but it was not until I finished reading this book that I belatedly made a summary. Qidian has copied thousands of books and imitated countless routines. But the author obviously isn't. He is a person who writes books carefully! There is a lot of psychological description of the protagonist in the early stage, but it is just right. I feel the pain, despair, and madness of the imprisoned people. The later descriptions of martial arts, power, and rivers and lakes were also refreshing to me. What comes after writing an online novel is all about ideas and the overall situation. No matter whether your thinking is clear or not, or whether your story is fascinating, at least the author's care is definitely sufficient. This is an excellent article that only experienced readers will like. In an era when novels are also monopolized, this is a wonderful world that people can remember. People will last forever if ideas are spread, and stories will be immortal only if they are deeply impressed! I hope to see the author's new works in the future.

Abuse of the main character. I tortured the main character so hard earlier. I thought the main character was out for revenge, but nothing happened.

I can't stand it after reading Chapter 8. You're in jail, who cares about your mental state? I think I'm looking down on you by finding someone to give you food every day. Why don't they try to figure out whether you are true or false?

It looks very strange. To be honest, I only realized that there is a little shadow now. Especially in the battle of swords and qi, the sword sects and qi sects all have their own reasons. This writing is so straightforward that I can see it. For other characters, I thought about them several times before I understood them. Your character has no good or evil, only his own butt and choices. Because of his circumstances and character, he has chosen a different direction. Then let me travel through time to reveal an ancient martial arts world. This is not the way to write a web article, you are going the wrong way. If you want to stir up emotions in online articles, if you want to kill him, you should make him bad first instead of talking about so many objective reasons.

It feels a bit long-winded, and some plot points are completely unnecessary.

You can write nearly 2 million for your first book, so you can do it too

Apart from being unhappy, I have no other problems, especially at the end, I feel like I have entered the track. I look forward to your next book.

What does the author do? At the end of the chapter, he is very miserable and begs for this and that. He does not explain clearly what the situation is. He also abuses the author with ink. If he wants to get it, he must have a good article or he is miserable enough.

The author writes at the beginning that the protagonist is possessed by the soul back and forth in the dungeon. The writing is very messy, which affects reading very much, and is very discouraging. Please change it if you can.

Well written, but too slow

How is Mr. Wuling doing lately? Nothing else, just asking for peace

The writing was okay, but it ended inexplicably