All-Knowing and All-Powerful, Starting with One Piece

I am Shennong, and here I tasted hundreds of herbs. When I first heard of this herb, I thought it was wonderful. But when I ate it, it was like soft, mushy mud, and smelled terrible. My eyes gradually went blind, and blood flowed from my seven orifices. The blood was foul-smelling. Only then did I realize that this herb was poisonous. So I wrote this book to warn everyone, hoping that they will take this as a warning.

This is a typical studio-themed novel. The protagonist's intelligence is below the level of a slime. It's just that the author used incredibly powerful cheat codes. How could a Devil Fruit be associated with slaves, famous swords, and guns? And considering the physical abilities in One Piece, a burly man guarding slaves dies with a single shot.

It feels like a jumbled mess, too simplistic, like something a loser would write. To put it bluntly, it's like a twenty- or thirty-year-old going to another world, seeing an eleven or twelve-year-old girl, and thinking they could pledge their life to each other—you're amazing. If you're planning to be omniscient and omnipotent, then you're definitely the supreme being of all heavens.

The author completely lost in self-indulgence while writing this novel, showing no understanding of what immersion is. One after another, distinctly Chinese phrases are spewing from the mouths of characters from the One Piece world, which is incredibly awkward. And then there's this "Indestructible Fruit," "Golden Bell Fruit,"... Seriously, it's giving me a serious case of cringe. Devil Fruits are supposed to be rules, but this is just ridiculous.

It's already a very good new book.

This book is so awkward. It doesn't feel like a novel; it's purely the author's imagination. It feels more like a reader's book, lacking any writing skills. The beginning clearly establishes that each character has a 100-meter range, and then the next second they're teleported back across the sea. Couldn't they at least lay some groundwork for the world-building at the start? And the cheat abilities need to be limited; this is way too overpowered.

Seeing that an Admiral is equivalent to a First Mate is unbearable. The Navy's top fighting force isn't just a figure of speech. 🙂

You can modify memories, yet you make your subordinates learn and practice slowly? It's ridiculous. Why don't you just modify their memories directly?

Are Yonko Vice-Presidents the same as Admirals? Are Fleet Admirals the same as Yonko? These aren't titles, so how do they indicate a power level? Garp was practically a nobody, right? Roger was a nobody too; he was a demigod, yet he was treated like a son by a mere Vice Admiral. 😁

The beginning was relatively normal, but when he created the Hunter's Guild, he completely let loose. His inner thoughts became increasingly extreme, and in the end, he simply added a "D" to his name, claiming it carried the fortune of the D. Clan. Good heavens, he's supposed to be the supreme ruler of all realms, and he still needs the fortune of the D. Clan for this? The book's concept is good, but the author's writing is atrocious.